Hi Roman
Thanks for your comments.
Been addressed in -08.
Regards
Ravi

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> A few nits:
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> (1) In Section 3.1.  Typo.  s/seqence/sequence/
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> (2) Section 4.  Typo. s/VPLS,there/VPLS, there/
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> (3) Section 5.1.  Editorial.  s/the below specified network topology/the
> network topology specified in Section 6/
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