Hi Loa, Thanks a lot for your review. Please see my response inline.
> -----Original Message----- > From: BESS [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Loa Andersson > Sent: Saturday, May 23, 2015 7:52 PM > To: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected] > Subject: [bess] wglc review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-virtual-subnet > > Authors, wg and chairs, > > I've read this document and think it is useful, and that we are almost ready > to > request publication. > > A couple of nits > > 0. The nits tool gives errors on 54 lines that are too long Will fix it. > 1. The file name is still draft-ietf-l3vpn-virtual-subnet-03, while > updating after wglc is should be posted as draft-ietf-bess-virtual- > subnet-03. Will post it as draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-00 when updating. > 2. The document has 7 authors, please make sure that all of them meets > the criterium that the RFC Editor sent out some weeks ago. > > "The intent of the author list in the document header and the Authors > Addresses space in an RFC is to indicate who is responsible for the > technical content of the document." Will fix it. > 3. Does "across" in the abstract mean "within" or "between"? It means "between". Will replace it with "between". > 4. The concept "L3VPN-based" is used at a number of places ... Will fix it. > 5. The nits tool give warnings of "26 instances of lines with > non-RFC5735-compliant IPv4 addresses". Will fix it by using IPv4 addresses belonging to 10.0.0.0/8 > 6. First paragraph on page 12 says "both ingress and egress PE routers > MUST NOT decrement the TTL", > The meaning is unclear, can one of them do it or neither? Is it OK to say "...neither ingress nor egress PE routers SHOULD decrement the TTL..." > 7. Do we need to consider IPv6? IPv6 has been considered in this doc although the examples are IPv4-based. See section 3.3 to 3.8. > Other than this I think this very useful document is ready to be progressed. Thanks again for your review. Best regards, Xiaohu > /Loa > > > -- > > > Loa Andersson email: [email protected] > Senior MPLS Expert [email protected] > Huawei Technologies (consultant) phone: +46 739 81 21 64 > > _______________________________________________ > BESS mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
