> +You may be tempted to use @code{install-data-local} to install a file
> +to some hard-coded location, but you should avoid this.
> +(@pxref{Hard-Coded Install Paths})
Shouldn't the period be moved from after "this" to after the closing
parenthesis?
Yes.
> +With the @code{-local} targets, there is no particular guarantee of
> +execution order; typically, they are run early, but with parallel
> +make, there is no way to be sure of that.
There isn't even consistency among the various -local targets in their
ordering wrt. other targets. In fact, I wouldn't even know how many of
them are run at what time, so I'm a bit wary of the "typically"
statement.
By all means, delete "typically" if you prefer. I was just copying
(with rewording) from your mail :).
Thanks,
k