Hi Alana, all,
Thank you for preparing this edited version.
Please see inline.
Cheers,
Med
> -----Message d'origine-----
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> Envoyé : lundi 15 septembre 2025 22:31
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>;
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> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9870 <draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-
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[Med] ACK.
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[Med] Agree with the change to align with the latest use of APC in the UDP
options spec.
I see that it was changed in
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-32&url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-31&difftype=--html.
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[Med] Nothing flagged on my side as well.
I also reviewed the full edited version and all looks good to me. I approve the
publication of this version. Thanks.
One related comment triggered by "least-signification"/"most-signification" to
"least signification"/"most signification" changes: I checked recent
IPFIX-related RFCs to see if we are consistent, which is indeed the case for
9740 in particular. However, I noted that the use in RFC9740 was not echoed in
the IANA registry (https://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml) for
these IEs:
* ipv6ExtensionHeadersFull
* tcpOptionsFull
Can we please report that to IANA and update as appropriate? Thank you.
Cheers,
Med
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> RFC 9870 (draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-14)
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> Title : Export of UDP Options Information in IP Flow
> Information Export (IPFIX)
> Author(s) : M. Boucadair, T. Reddy.K
> WG Chair(s) : Joe Clarke, Benoît Claise
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