Hi Rebecca Thank you for your quick update. I approve it.
Hendrik >-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- >Von: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >Gesendet: Freitag, 27. Juni 2025 23:25 >An: Brockhaus, Hendrik (FT RPD CST SEA-DE) ><hendrik.brockh...@siemens.com>; Goltzsche, David (SMO RI R&D F SEC) ><david.goltzs...@siemens.com>; debcool...@gmail.com; lamps-...@ietf.org >Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; lamps-cha...@ietf.org; >hous...@vigilsec.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >Betreff: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9809 ><draft-ietf-lamps-automation-keyusages- >08> for your review > >Hi Hendrik and AD*, > >Hendrik - Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document accordingly. >Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not make >changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any further >updates >or with your approval of the document in its current form. We will await >approvals >from each author prior to moving forward in the publication process. > >*Deb - As AD, please review and approve the changes in the first paragraph of >Appendix B. The changes are best viewed in this diff file: >https://www.rfc-/ >editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9809- >auth48diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C883a991 >8fcac45fab97408ddb5c416ae%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% >7C638866576298966893%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRy >dWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3 >D%7C60000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=%2FlPo7Euu4s7uzVXzYEJNVK0G6PGzDbHxp3Y >2sEzTUrE%3D&reserved=0. 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AM, Brockhaus, Hendrik ><hendrik.brockhaus=40siemens....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: >> >> Dear RFC Editor >> >> Thank you for your review and all proposals. >> Please see our responses on you questions inline below. >> If you have any further questions, please let us know. >> >> Hendrik >> >>> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- >>> Von: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> >>> Gesendet: Donnerstag, 26. Juni 2025 23:21 >>> An: Brockhaus, Hendrik (FT RPD CST SEA-DE) >>> <hendrik.brockh...@siemens.com>; Goltzsche, David (SMO RI R&D F SEC) >>> <david.goltzs...@siemens.com> >>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; lamps-...@ietf.org; >>> lamps-cha...@ietf.org; hous...@vigilsec.com; debcool...@gmail.com; >>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>> Betreff: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9809 >>> <draft-ietf-lamps-automation-keyusages-08> for your review >>> >>> Authors, >>> >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >>> >>> >>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Should the document title be updated to use "X.509 >>> Certificate" >>> rather than "X.509" to align with the titles of RFCs 9509 and 9336? >>> Or is the current okay? >>> >>> Original: >>> X.509 Extended Key Usage (EKU) for configuration, updates and safety- >>> communication >>> >>> Current: >>> X.509 Extended Key Usage (EKU) for Configuration, Updates, and Safety >>> Communication >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> X.509 Certificate Extended Key Usage (EKU) for Configuration, >>> Updates, and Safety Communication >>> --> >> >> [HB] I like your proposal. >> >> Please also perform the following change to be consistent with the rest of >> the >document. >> OLD: “Safety Communication” >> NEW: “Safety-Critical Communication” >> >> Please also perform this change in the title of Section 3 and in the second >paragraph of Section 3. >> >>> >>> >>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify the text following "i.e.,". >>> >>> Original: >>> If the purpose of an issued certificate is not restricted, i.e., the >>> type of operations for which a public key contained in the >>> certificate can be used in unintended ways, the risk of cross- >>> application attacks is increased. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> If the purpose of an issued certificate is not restricted (i.e., >>> the operations of the public key contained in the certificate can be >>> used in unintended ways), the risk of cross- application attacks is >>> increased. >>> --> >> >> [HB] I like your proposal >> >>> >>> >>> 3) <!-- [rfced] May we update this text to be list to improve readability? >>> >>> Original: >>> This specification defines the KeyPurposeIds id-kp-configSigning, >>> id- kp-trustAnchorConfigSigning, id-kp-updatePackageSigning, and >>> id-kp- safetyCommunication. These KeyPurposeIds are used, >>> respectively, >>> for: signing general-purpose configuration files or trust anchor >>> configuration files, signing software or firmware update packages, or >>> authenticating communication peers for safety-critical communication. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> This specification defines the following KeyPurposeIds: >>> >>> * id-kp-configSigning: Used for signing general-purpose configuration >>> files. >>> >>> * id-kp-trustAnchorConfigSigning: Used for signing trust anchor >>> configuration files. >>> >>> * id-kp-updatePackageSigning: Used for signing software or firmware >>> update packages. >>> >>> * id-kp-safetyCommunication: Used for authenticating communication peers >>> for safety-critical communication. >>> --> >> >> [HB] I like your proposal >> >>> >>> >>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the references to be alphabetized or >>> left in their current order? >>> --> >> >> [HB] I would like to keep them as they are. >> >>> >>> >>> 5) <!-- [rfced] FYI - The URLs in the reference entries below do not >>> work (go to blank page). We updated the URLs as follows. Please review. >>> >>> Original: >>> [X.680] ITU-T, "Information Technology - Abstract Syntax Notation >>> One (ASN.1): Specification of basic notation", ITU-T >>> Recommendation X.680 , February 2021, >>> >>> <https://ww/ >>> w.itu.int%252 >>> Frec%2FT- >>> >REC.X.680&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C51fb39ff07 >>> 1 >>> >44ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C6 >>> >38865696699011277%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydW >>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3 >>> D% >7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=rfHEXu0qTsfyatOEsFni5sV9kHImV7r8FYdVq161zYo%3D& >>> reserved=0>. >>> >>> [X.690] ITU-T, "Information Technology - ASN.1 encoding rules: >>> Specification of Basic Encoding Rules (BER), Canonical >>> Encoding Rules (CER) and Distinguished Encoding Rules >>> (DER)", ITU-T Recommendation X.690 , February 2021, >>> >>> <https://ww/ >>> w.itu.int%252 >>> Frec%2FT- >>> >REC.X.690&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C51fb39ff07 >>> 1 >>> >44ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C6 >>> >38865696699042775%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydW >>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3 >>> D% >7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ZiF3MvcJrM1X9Nh87Ksgk6hJQtOjenU4ghBkl9C82s0%3D >>> &reserved=0>. >>> >>> Updated: >>> [X.680] ITU-T, "Information Technology - Abstract Syntax Notation >>> One (ASN.1): Specification of basic notation", ITU-T >>> Recommendation X.680, February 2021, >>> >>> <https://ww/ >>> w.itu.int%252 >>> Frec%2FT-REC-X.680-202102- >>> >I%2Fen&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C51fb39ff07144 >>> e >>> >d08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C6388 >>> >65696699059532%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIl >>> >YiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C >>> 0 >>> >%7C%7C%7C&sdata=iMFytMSMvGtYGEaTnnBaD5C9MBwqC12Sk1fDBOn3WQ4%3 >>> D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> [X.690] ITU-T, "Information Technology - ASN.1 encoding rules: >>> Specification of Basic Encoding Rules (BER), Canonical >>> Encoding Rules (CER) and Distinguished Encoding Rules >>> (DER)", ITU-T Recommendation X.690, February 2021, >>> >>> <https://ww/ >>> w.itu.int%252 >>> Frec%2FT-REC-X.690-202102- >>> >I%2Fen&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C51fb39ff07144 >>> e >>> >d08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C6388 >>> >65696699075948%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIl >>> >YiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C >>> 0 >%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Y9jYYqbcWsbUdIlmpwpESe472x4BSIHEIWB%2FSw%2Fn4ts >>> %3D&reserved=0>. >>> --> >> >> [HB] Thank you for updating the URLs. >> >>> >>> >>> 6) <!-- [rfced] The URL in this reference entry directs to a page >>> titled "Cyber Resilience Act". Should the title of this reference >>> entry be updated accordingly (see Perhaps 1 below)? Or should the URL >>> be updated to match a document with that title (see Perhaps 2 below)? >>> >>> Original: >>> [EU-CRA] European Commission, "Proposal for a REGULATION OF THE >>> EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT AND OF THE COUNCIL on horizontal >>> cybersecurity requirements for products with digital >>> elements and amending Regulation (EU) 2019/1020", >>> September 2022, <https://digital- >>> strategy.ec.europa.eu/en/library/cyber-resilience-act>. >>> >>> Perhaps 1 (updated title): >>> [EU-CRA] European Union, "Cyber Resilience Act", >>> September 2022, <https://digital- >>> strategy.ec.europa.eu/en/library/cyber-resilience-act>. >>> >>> Perhaps 2 (updated URL): >>> [EU-CRA] European Commission, "Proposal for a REGULATION OF THE >>> EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT AND OF THE COUNCIL on horizontal >>> cybersecurity requirements for products with digital >>> elements and amending Regulation (EU) 2019/1020", >>> September 2022, >>> <https://eur-/ >>> lex.europa.eu%2Flegal- >>> >content%2FEN%2FTXT%2F%3Furi%3DCELEX%3A52022PC0454&data=05%7C02% >>> 7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C51fb39ff07144ed08ed308ddb4f74bea% >>> 7C3 >>> >8ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638865696699091704%7CUnkn >>> >own%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiO >>> >iJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=sEkB >>> >SVpUshm29KYdNS2HCBa3E%2B1fREyo%2B%2BcmrUwIz%2B0%3D&reserved=0>. >>> --> >> >> [HB] In the meantime the regulation is officially published. Therefore, I >> would like to >update the Reference to the following: >> NEW: >> [EU-CRA] European Commission, "Regulation (EU) 2024/2847 of the >> European Parliament and of the Council of 23 October 2024 >> on horizontal cybersecurity requirements for products with >> digital elements and amending Regulations (EU) No 168/2013 >> and (EU) 2019/1020 and Directive (EU) 2020/1828 (Cyber >> Resilience Act)", November 2024, >> https://eur-/ >lex.europa.eu%2Feli%2Freg%2F2024%2F2847%2Foj&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.bro >ckhaus%40siemens.com%7C883a9918fcac45fab97408ddb5c416ae%7C38ae3bcd957 >94fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638866576299161824%7CUnknown%7CTW >FpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiI >sIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C60000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=96b63CuPg2 >BtbmeeMws273TgIojhYdh2KSspHEgjBDI%3D&reserved=0. >> >>> >>> >>> 7) <!-- [rfced] The original title for the reference below is >>> "Directive (EU) >>> 2022/2555 of the European Parliament and of the Council", but the URL >>> directs to the NIST CSRC's glossary entry for the term "safety". >>> Based off the context from the document, we updated this reference >>> entry title to "safety" to match the content at the URL. >>> >>> Original: >>> [NIST_Glossary] >>> NIST CSRC, "Directive (EU) 2022/2555 of the European >>> Parliament and of the Council", n.d., >>> >>> <https://cs/ >>> >rc.nist.gov%2F&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C883a9 >>> >918fcac45fab97408ddb5c416ae%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C >>> >0%7C638866576299174830%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOn >RydW >>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3 >>> >D%7C60000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=l1H3i2lqkBUVCz61bNzJptXzPqYCleCzpkLwr5gKZ >P4% >>> 3D&reserved=0 >>> >%2Fglossary%2Fterm%2Fsafety&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemen >>> s >>> >.com%7C51fb39ff07144ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e149 >>> 5d >55a%7C1%7C0%7C638865696699107536%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbX >>> >B0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCI >>> sIl >dUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=uyUrMC38tP0BkQshFx%2BEshHGm >>> VLtxgymcgXhhzR%2B4jo%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> Current: >>> [NIST_Glossary] >>> NIST CSRC, "safety", >>> >>> <https://cs/ >>> >rc.nist.gov%2F&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C883a9 >>> >918fcac45fab97408ddb5c416ae%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C >>> >0%7C638866576299187162%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOn >RydW >>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3 >>> >D%7C60000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XoaK7S7f82VY2TEib6j6XJRFQXPpF1rKlt5Zxwjt9 >Sc% >>> 3D&reserved=0 >>> >%2Fglossary%2Fterm%2Fsafety&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemen >>> s >>> >.com%7C51fb39ff07144ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e149 >>> 5d >55a%7C1%7C0%7C638865696699127753%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbX >>> >B0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCI >>> sIl >dUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=dQBAXrN%2FT26bKrFMTdNENTMnz >>> sem60NvOV2hkZxMwwQ%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> However, please note that NIST provides the following guidance for >>> citing terms in their glossary >>> (https://cs/ >>> rc.nist.gov%25 >>> >2Fglossary&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C51fb39ff0 >>> 71 >>> >44ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C6 >>> >38865696699143977%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydW >>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3 >>> D% >>> >7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=9tavuwGcdOSXqZ7IIsd54TONfpGgzZDDgNwMqfPCRlg%3 >>> D&reserved=0): >>> >>> Cite the source publication, not this website. As our documents are >>> published and withdrawn, the terminology on these web pages will >>> change. When citing terms and definitions, we encourage you to cite >>> the source publication for the authoritative terminology and to >>> understand it in its proper context. Many terms on this website have >>> different definitions, from multiple publications. >>> >>> Based on this, would you like to cite NIST SP 800-160, which is >>> listed as the source for the definition of "safety" in the NIST glossary, >>> rather than >citing the glossary entry? >>> Or is citing the glossary okay in this context? >>> >>> https://nvl/ >>> >pubs.nist.go%2F&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C883a >>> >9918fcac45fab97408ddb5c416ae%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7 >>> >C0%7C638866576299204717%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGki >OnRyd >>> WUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D% >>> >3D%7C60000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=DBV0a0i1eVha2nRavakqNoErqdNLaZOBCJFXAo >Qcp%2 >>> F4%3D&reserved=0 >>> v%2Fnistpubs%2FSpecialPublications%2FNIST.SP.800- >>> 160v2r1.pdf&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C51fb39ff >>> 071 >>> >44ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C6 >>> >38865696699159300%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydW >>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3 >>> D% >7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=v1QTBvmBvA%2B7OxiCh9Cjo%2BkmAiLyRGbNDJEGYa >>> 21Z%2F0%3D&reserved=0 >>> --> >> >> [HB] Thank you for spotting my copy-paste error. >> If the NIST glossary should not be directly references, I would like >> to change this reference to NIST SP 800-160v1r1. Please update Section 2 >accordingly. >> OLD: >> [NIST_Glossary] >> NIST CSRC, "safety", >> >https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fcsrc.nist.gov%25 >2Fglossary%2Fterm%2Fsafety&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.c >om%7C883a9918fcac45fab97408ddb5c416ae%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d5 >5a%7C1%7C0%7C638866576299217216%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB >0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIld >UIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C60000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=7uOR4YfGACtj1ev%2FJaWItQIl6F >E4J7J42CwZ1Y%2B7Jak%3D&reserved=0. >> NEW: >> [NIST.SP.800-160v1r1] >> Ron Ross, Mark Winstead, Michael McEvilley, and NIST, >> "Engineering Trustworthy Secure Systems", NIST Special >> Publications 800-160v1r1, DOI 10.6028/NIST.SP.160v1r1, 2022, >> >> https://doi/. >> org%2F10.6028%2FNIST.SP.800- >160v1r1&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%4 >> >0siemens.com%7C883a9918fcac45fab97408ddb5c416ae%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4adda >> >b42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638866576299229500%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3 >d8eyJF >> >bXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbC >> >IsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C60000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=dvLhVVi4uL%2BkvnW15jAxlG >Jf%2 >> BnaiVTDfMHmz%2BAepLaI%3D&reserved=0 >> >>> >>> >>> 8) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated the date for this reference from "December >>> 2024" >>> to "November 2017" to match the date at the URL provided. >>> >>> Original: >>> [ISO.IEC.IEEE_12207] >>> ISO/IEC/IEEE, "Systems and software engineering - Software >>> life cycle processes", December 2024, >>> >>> <https://ww/ >>> w.iso.org%25 >>> >2Fstandard%2F63712.html&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.co >>> m >>> >%7C51fb39ff07144ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55 >>> a% >>> >7C1%7C0%7C638865696699175161%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1 >>> hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldU >>> Ijoy >>> >fQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=TJjSf4YlRe5b8M4Ad2an1azdbTJPPeregCQ1 >>> UkacLJc%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> Current: >>> [ISO.IEC.IEEE_12207] >>> ISO/IEC/IEEE, "Systems and software engineering - Software >>> life cycle processes", ISO/IEC/IEEE 12207:2017, November >>> 2017, >>> <https://ww/ >>> w.iso.org%25 >>> >2Fstandard%2F63712.html&data=05%7C02%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.co >>> m >>> >%7C51fb39ff07144ed08ed308ddb4f74bea%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55 >>> a% >>> >7C1%7C0%7C638865696699190349%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1 >>> hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldU >>> Ijoy >>> >fQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=BOe4%2BEOq2IX914Trja6IKW839l0JIcLX89 >>> Q%2BGuMcFKM%3D&reserved=0>. >>> --> >> >> [HB] Thank you >> >>> >>> >>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review "would bear" here. Should this be updated to >>> "bear" >>> or "should bear"? >>> >>> Original: >>> Automation products connected to the Internet would bear the >>> so-called CE marking [CE-marking] to indicate they comply. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> Automation products connected to the Internet bear the so-called >>> "CE marking" [CE-marking] to indicate they comply. >>> >>> Or: >>> Automation products connected to the Internet should bear the >>> so-called "CE marking" [CE-marking] to indicate they comply. >>> --> >> >> NEW: >> Automation products connected to the Internet and sold in the EU after >> 2027 must bear the so-called "CE marking" [CE-marking] to indicate they >> also comply with the EU-CRA. >> >>> >>> >>> 10) <!-- [rfced] How may we clarify "NIS2 Framework, Directive" here? >>> >>> Original: >>> Such regulation was announced in the 2020 EU Cybersecurity Strategy >>> [EU-STRATEGY], and complements other legislation in this area, like >>> the NIS2 Framework, Directive on measures for a high common level of >>> cybersecurity across the Union [NIS2]. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> Such regulation was announced in the 2020 EU Cybersecurity Strategy >>> [EU-STRATEGY] and complements other legislation in this area, like >>> the NIS2 Directive on measures for a high common level of >>> cybersecurity across the European Union [NIS2]. >>> --> >> >> [HB] I like your proposal. >> Maybe you also want to expand "NIS" to "network and information systems". >> >> NEW: >> Such regulation was announced in the 2020 EU >> Cybersecurity Strategy [EU-STRATEGY] and complements other >> legislation in this area, like the directive on measures for >> a high common level of cybersecurity of network and information >> systems (NIS) across the European Union [NIS2]. >> >>> >>> >>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Would you like to remove the titles of >>> [IEC.62443-4-2] and [IEC.62443- 3-3] in this sentence to improve >>> readability? Note that the titles appear in the reference entries. >>> >>> Original: >>> 2020 EU Cybersecurity Strategy [EU-STRATEGY] suggests to implement >>> and extend international standards such as the Security for >>> industrial automation and control systems - Part 4-2: Technical >>> security requirements for IACS components [IEC.62443-4-2] (IACS >>> refers to industrial automation and control system) and the >>> Industrial communication networks - Network and system security - >>> Part 3-3: System security requirements and security levels >>> [IEC.62443-3-3]. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> The 2020 EU Cybersecurity Strategy [EU-STRATEGY] suggests >>> implementing and extending international standards such as >>> [IEC.62443-4-2] and [IEC.62443-3-3]. >>> --> >> >> [HB] That is fine with me. >> >>> >>> >>> 12) <!-- [rfced] The citations [ERJU] and [Directive-2016_797] do not >>> appear in the direct quote. We have moved these to appear after the direct >>> quote >as shown below. >>> Please review and let us know any concerns. >>> >>> Original: >>> A concrete example for automation is a Rail Automation system. The >>> Europe's Rail web page [ERJU-web] states: "The System Pillar [ERJU] >>> brings rail sector representatives under a single coordination body. >>> To achieve this, the System Pillar will deliver a unified >>> operational concept and a functional, safe and secure system >>> architecture, with due consideration of cyber-security aspects, >>> focused on the European railway network to which Directive 2016/797 >>> [Directive-2016_797] applies (i.e. the heavy rail network) as well >>> as associated specifications and/or standards." >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> A concrete example for automation is a rail automation system. The >>> Europe's Rail web page [ERJU-web] states: >>> >>> | The System Pillar brings rail sector representatives under | a >>> single coordination body. To achieve this, the System Pillar | >>> will deliver a unified operational concept and a functional, safe | >>> and secure system architecture, with due consideration of cyber- | >>> security aspects, focused on the European railway network to which | >>> Directive 2016/797 applies (i.e. the heavy | rail network) as well >>> as associated specifications and/or | standards. >>> >>> See [Directive-2016_797]. For details about the System Pillar, see [ERJU]. >>> --> >> >> [HB] This looks much better. Thank you. >> >>> >>> >>> 13) <!-- [rfced] We updated two instances of <artwork> to <sourcecode> in >Section 4. >>> Should the "type" attribute be set to "asn.1" for these? 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If the list does not contain an applicable type, then >>> feel free to suggest a new one. >>> --> >> >> [HB] I guess asn.1 is the best fit. >> >>> >>> >>> 14) <!-- [rfced] We see the following forms in the document. Should these be >uniform? >>> If so, please let us know which form is preferred. >>> >>> safety communication >>> safety-critical communication >>> >>> KeyUsage extension >>> Key Usage (KU) extension >>> --> >> >> [HB] This makes sense. Thank you. >> >>> >>> >>> 15) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations >>> >>> a) We updated the expansion for "KeyPurposeIds" as follows per RFCs >>> 9336 and 9509. Let us know any concerns. >>> >>> key purpose identifiers (KeyPurposeIds) >> >> [HB] Looks good. >> >>> >>> >>> b) How should "NIS2" be expanded? 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