David,

Thank you for the updates.

We will move this document forward in the publication process at this time.

RFC Editor/mf


> On Jun 12, 2025, at 2:58 PM, David Dong via RT <iana-mat...@iana.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Megan,
> 
> Apologies; the contents of the ACME RenewalInfo Object Fields registry are 
> displayed again:
> 
> Field Name    Field Type      Reference 
> suggestedWindow       object  [RFC-ietf-acme-ari-08]
> explanationURL        string  [RFC-ietf-acme-ari-08]
> 
> Registry:
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> David Dong
> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> 
> On Thu Jun 12 20:08:57 2025, mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org wrote:
>> Hi David,
>> 
>> Looking at https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/acme.xhtml#acme-
>> renewalinfo-object-fields, I believe there should be initial contents:
>> 
>> From Section 7.2 of the document (see https://www.rfc-
>> editor.org/authors/rfc9773.txt):
>> 
>> Initial contents:
>>            +=================+============+===============+
>>            | Field Name      | Field Type | Reference     |
>>            +=================+============+===============+
>>            | suggestedWindow | object     | This document |
>>            +-----------------+------------+---------------+
>>            | explanationURL  | string     | This document |
>>            +-----------------+------------+---------------+
>> 
>> Table 3
>> 
>> Thank you.
>> 
>> RFC Editor/mf
>> 
>>> On Jun 11, 2025, at 4:54 PM, David Dong via RT <iana-mat...@iana.org>
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Megan,
>>> 
>>> This has been completed:
>>> 
>>> 1) renewalInfo        RenewalInfo object      [RFC-ietf-acme-ari-08]
>>> 2) ACME RenewalInfo Object Fields
>>> 3) alreadyReplaced    The request specified a predecessor certificate
>>> that has already been marked as replaced        [RFC-ietf-acme-ari-
>>> 08]
>>> 
>>> Registry:
>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/
>>> 
>>> Thank you.
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> 
>>> David Dong
>>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
>>> 
>>> On Mon Jun 09 17:07:33 2025, mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>> IANA,
>>>> 
>>>> This document has completed AUTH48 and needs a few updates to the
>>>> following to match.  You may view the related diff (Section 7) for
>>>> your convenience at:
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-diff.html
>>>> 
>>>> 1) At https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/acme.xhtml#acme-
>>>> resource-
>>>> types, please remove the space between Renewal and Info:
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> renewalInfo     Renewal Info object     [RFC-ietf-acme-ari-08]
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>> renewalInfo     RenewalInfo object      [RFC-ietf-acme-ari-08]
>>>> 
>>>> 2) The new sub registry at
>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/acme.xhtml#acme-renewal-info-
>>>> object-fields needs a similar title update:
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> ACME Renewal Info Object Fields
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>> ACME RenewalInfo Object Fields
>>>> 
>>>> 3) At https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/acme.xhtml#acme-error-
>>>> types, in the Description, please change “which” to “that”:
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> …predecessor certificate which has…
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>> …predecessor certificate that has…
>>>> 
>>>> Once these updates have been completed, this document will be ready
>>>> to
>>>> move forward in the publication process.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you.
>>>> 
>>>> RFC Editor/mf
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> On Jun 6, 2025, at 5:55 PM, Aaron Gable <aa...@letsencrypt.org>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Megan,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Apologies for the delay. After extensive review with all of my
>>>>> coworkers, we have found one last typo:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Section 6
>>>>> 
>>>>> OLD:
>>>>> (or do no implement ARI at all)
>>>>> 
>>>>> NEW:
>>>>> (or do not implement ARI at all)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Aaron
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Thu, Jun 5, 2025 at 10:47 AM Megan Ferguson
>>>>> <mfergu...@staff.rfc-
>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>> Hi Aaron,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Just a friendly reminder that we await your confirmation of our
>>>>> changes and approval prior to moving this document forward in the
>>>>> publication process.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>> 
>>>>> RFC Editor/mf
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Begin forwarded message:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> From: Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
>>>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9773 <draft-ietf-acme-ari-08> for
>>>>>> your review
>>>>>> Date: May 13, 2025 at 9:31:58 PM MDT
>>>>>> To: Aaron Gable <aa...@letsencrypt.org>
>>>>>> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, acme-...@ietf.org,
>>>>>> acme-cha...@ietf.org, ynir.i...@gmail.com, Deb Cooley
>>>>>> <debcool...@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Hi Aaron,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you for sending along these changes in the XML file.  We
>>>>>> have
>>>>>> adopted the changes and reposted.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after
>>>>>> publication.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.txt
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.pdf
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.xml
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-diff.html
>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-auth48diff.html
>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-lastdiff.html (last to
>>>>>> current version only)
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-lastrfcdiff.html (last
>>>>>> to current version side by side)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you
>>>>>> may have or with your approval of the document in its current
>>>>>> form.
>>>>>> Once we have your approval, we will send along any necessary
>>>>>> updates to IANA prior to publication.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9773
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> RFC Editor/mf
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On May 13, 2025, at 5:29 PM, Aaron Gable <aa...@letsencrypt.org>
>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I have two final minor edits that I would like to incorporate:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> - In Section 4.2, replace "set of names on the order" with "set of
>>>>>> identifiers on the order".
>>>>>> - In Section 5, replace "GET requests described above" with "GET
>>>>>> requests described in Section 4.1", with an internal cross-link to
>>>>>> that section.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I have attached an XML file that I believe implements these two
>>>>>> edits and no other changes; please make sure I haven't
>>>>>> accidentally
>>>>>> broken anything!
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks again,
>>>>>> Aaron
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Wed, May 7, 2025 at 6:18 PM Megan Ferguson
>>>>>> <mfergu...@staff.rfc-
>>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Aaron,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Just a friendly reminder that the updates to this document await
>>>>>> your review.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please contact us at your earliest convenience with any further
>>>>>> changes you may have or your approval of the document in its
>>>>>> current form.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> RFC Editor/mf
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Apr 29, 2025, at 1:53 PM, Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@staff.rfc-
>>>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Hi Aaron,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply and the updated XML file.
>>>>>>> We have adopted your version (see below) and added the keywords
>>>>>>> suggested to our database.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after
>>>>>>> publication.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.txt
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.pdf
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.xml
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-diff.html
>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-lastdiff.html (last
>>>>>>> to current version only)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you
>>>>>>> may have.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the
>>>>>>> AUTH48 status page prior to moving forward to publication.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9773
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> RFC Editor/mf
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Apr 25, 2025, at 4:17 PM, Aaron Gable
>>>>>>>> <aaron=40letsencrypt....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Hello editors,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you for the edits and improvements to this document! My
>>>>>>>> responses to your specific questions are inline below, and the
>>>>>>>> updated XML file is attached.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thanks again,
>>>>>>>> Aaron
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 23, 2025 at 1:51 PM <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has
>>>>>>>> been updated as follows:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> We have moved the expansion of ACME from the document title to
>>>>>>>> its first use in the Abstract as generally we do not expand
>>>>>>>> abbreviations within abbreviations.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> Automated Certificate Management Environment (ACME) Renewal
>>>>>>>> Information (ARI) Extension
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>> ACME Renewal Information (ARI) Extension
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you, the improved title is great.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that
>>>>>>>> appear in
>>>>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>> editancestorDomainancestorDomainor.org/search. -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I have added the following keywords:
>>>>>>>> - certificate
>>>>>>>> - CA
>>>>>>>> - x509
>>>>>>>> - pki
>>>>>>>> - webpki
>>>>>>>> - renew
>>>>>>>> - replace
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I'm not sure how best to see the keywords attached to other ACME
>>>>>>>> documents all in one place; please feel free to add or remove
>>>>>>>> keywords to bring this list in line with best practices.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] Please review our update to "a literal period" to
>>>>>>>> make it match similar handling of the "=" character later in the
>>>>>>>> paragraph and uses in the RFC Series and let us know any
>>>>>>>> objections.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The unique identifier is constructed by concatenating the
>>>>>>>> base64url-encoding [RFC4648] of the keyIdentifier field of the
>>>>>>>> certificate's Authority Key Identifier (AKI) [RFC5280]
>>>>>>>> extension, a
>>>>>>>> literal period, and the base64url-encoding of the DER-encoded
>>>>>>>> Serial
>>>>>>>> Number field (without the tag and length bytes).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The unique identifier is constructed by concatenating the
>>>>>>>> base64url-encoding [RFC4648] of the keyIdentifier field of the
>>>>>>>> certificate's Authority Key Identifier (AKI) [RFC5280]
>>>>>>>> extension, the period character ".", and the base64url-encoding
>>>>>>>> of the DER-encoded Serial
>>>>>>>> Number field (without the tag and length bytes).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> This update looks great to me.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to the
>>>>>>>> IANA
>>>>>>>>   Considerations section:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> a) Section 7.1: In the Resource Type column of Table 2, please
>>>>>>>> review if "Renewal info", "Renewal Information", or
>>>>>>>> "renewalInfo" or something else should be used instead of
>>>>>>>> "Renewal Info" as this is the only occurrence in the document of
>>>>>>>> this form (other than Table 1, which also uses "Renewal info").
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> Renewal Info object
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you for catching this. I have settled on the following
>>>>>>>> convention:
>>>>>>>> - `renewalInfo` (always in <tt>, always starting lowercase)
>>>>>>>> refers to the new entry added to the Directory object.
>>>>>>>> - RenewalInfo (always in plaintext, always starting uppercase)
>>>>>>>> refers to the newly-introduced resource/object.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I've also eliminated all use of the shortened form "info",
>>>>>>>> except as part of those two compound words. I have attempted to
>>>>>>>> update the whole document to abide by this convention, but may
>>>>>>>> have missed a spot. Please let me know if I have!
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> b)  Section 7.2: FYI - we have added a citation to RFC 8126 in
>>>>>>>> the
>>>>>>>> description of the Registration Procedure and a corresponding
>>>>>>>> entry in
>>>>>>>> the Informative References section.  Please let us know any
>>>>>>>> concerns.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> c) FYI- we will communicate any nits/edits to IANA upon the
>>>>>>>> completion
>>>>>>>> of AUTH48.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thanks for the heads-up!
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] Please review the following questions related to
>>>>>>>> terminology use throughout the document.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> a) We see mixed marking of the following terms throughout the
>>>>>>>> document.  Please let us know if/how these may be made uniform:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> "renewalInfo" resource vs. renewalInfo resource
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> See above, I believe I have standardized this now.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> New Order request vs. new-order request
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Interestingly, neither of these is correct! I have updated all
>>>>>>>> instances to "newOrder request", to match RFC 8555 and other
>>>>>>>> ACME documents.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Server vs. server
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Standardized on the lowercase form, to match RFC 8555
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> base64url-encoding vs. base64url encoding
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Standardized on the form without a hyphen, to match RFC 8555.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> b) There are instances of simply RenewalInfo.  Should a label
>>>>>>>> follow
>>>>>>>> (e.g., object, resource, etc.) for the ease of the reader?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I have added either "object" or "resource" after all instances
>>>>>>>> of RenewalInfo except those of the form "the certificate's
>>>>>>>> RenewalInfo", which I think are already sufficiently clear.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] We note the use of the <tt> element to mark text
>>>>>>>> in this document. See the list of marked terms below.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> a) We recommend authors review the output of this element in all
>>>>>>>> output formats (text, pdf, html, etc.) to ensure it appears as
>>>>>>>> expected across formats.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> b) Please review for consistent use throughout the document (as
>>>>>>>> we see some occurrences that are not marked with <tt>) and
>>>>>>>> either update the edited XML file directly or let the RPC know
>>>>>>>> if/how we may update
>>>>>>>> .
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 00:87:65:43:21
>>>>>>>> 0x87
>>>>>>>> 69:88:5B:6B:87:46:40:41:E1:B3:7B:84:7B:A0:AE:2C:DE:01:C8:D4
>>>>>>>> AIdlQyE=
>>>>>>>> aYhba4dGQEHhs3uEe6CuLN4ByNQ.AIdlQyE
>>>>>>>> aYhba4dGQEHhs3uEe6CuLN4ByNQ=
>>>>>>>> cron
>>>>>>>> end
>>>>>>>> explanationURL
>>>>>>>> keyIdentifier
>>>>>>>> renewalInfo
>>>>>>>> replaces
>>>>>>>> Retry-After
>>>>>>>> start
>>>>>>>> suggestedWindow
>>>>>>>> =
>>>>>>>> ||
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I believe I have standardized the use of <tt> so that now it is
>>>>>>>> used in only the following circumstances:
>>>>>>>> - around JSON object field names, such as renewalInfo,
>>>>>>>> suggestedWindow, explanationURL, start, end, and replaces
>>>>>>>> - around literal byte sequences, such as the period, equals,
>>>>>>>> pipes, and various hex and base64 values
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I have removed it from Retry-After, keyIdentifier, and cron.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion
>>>>>>>> of the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>> editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> and let us know
>>>>>>>> if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature typically
>>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but
>>>>>>>> this should
>>>>>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you for this reference; I believe this document abides by
>>>>>>>> all of its suggestions. All people mentioned in the
>>>>>>>> acknowledgements have given their permission and preferred name.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/mf
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/04/23
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
>>>>>>>> --------------
>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>> The files are available here:
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>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.pdf
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.txt
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>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Tracking progress
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>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>> RFC9773 (draft-ietf-acme-ari-08)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Title            : Automated Certificate Management Environment
>>>>>>>> (ACME) Renewal Information (ARI) Extension
>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : A. Gable
>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Yoav Nir, Tomofumi Okubo
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> <rfc9773.xml>
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> <rfc9773.xml>
>>>>> 
>>> 
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