On 2025-05-07, at 18:00, Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the 
> publication process.

I have two more:

(1)
(Section 4):

OLD:
When a UCCS emerges from the Secure Channel and into the receiver, the security 
properties of the secure channel no longer protect the UCCS, which now are 
subject to the same security properties as any other unprotected data in the 
Verifier environment. If the receiver subsequently forwards UCCS, they are 
treated as though they originated within the receiver.

NEW:
When a UCCS emerges from the Secure Channel and into the receiver, the security 
properties of the secure channel no longer protect the UCCS, which now is 
subject 
_______________________________________________________________________^
to the same security properties as any other unprotected data in the Verifier 
environment. If the receiver subsequently forwards UCCS, they are treated as 
though they originated within the receiver.


The “which" points to the (now singular) UCCS, not the security properties 
(which aren’t subject to security properties!).  Sorry for misleading with my 
original suggestion.


(2)
I note that since the acronym “CWT” no longer is in the title, it probably 
should be added to the keywords.


With these two changes, RFC-to-be 9781 is now ready for publication.

Grüße, Carsten

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