Hi Laurence and *Roman (AD),

Thank you for your reply.

*Roman, please let us know the status of this document. Note that we await your 
approval of the following, which can be viewed at 
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711-auth48diff.html:

 Sections 3, 4.1, 4.2.3.2, 4.2.3.3, 4.2.10, 4.2.18, 5, 6.3.6, 7.3, 7.3.1, 
7.3.2, and 9.1
 Appendices A.1.7, A.2.2, A.2.3, B.2, and D

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Thank you,
RFC Editor/kc

> On Apr 21, 2025, at 9:43 AM, Laurence Lundblade via auth48archive 
> <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Karen,
> 
> I went through and checked all 19 instances (7 I asked for, plus 12 you 
> found). They all look good. Thank you for taking the initiative and fixing 
> them all to make the document consistent! 
> 
> LL
> 
> 
>> On Apr 18, 2025, at 4:56 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> 
>> Hello Laurence,
>> 
>> We believe the request is to make “Section X of [RFCXXX]” all one clickable 
>> link; however, that format is not currently used in the RFC series. Note 
>> that there are 19 instances of “Section X of [RFCXXX]”, so only updating the 
>> 7 instances that were outlined in GitHub would introduce inconsistency 
>> within the document (as well as within the RFC series).
>> 
>> Note that we did find one reference that was not clickable; we updated the 
>> format as follows:
>> 
>> OLD:
>>  When COSE protection is used, the profile should specify whether COSE tags 
>> are used or not.
>>  Note that RFC 8392 requires COSE tags be used in a CWT tag.
>> 
>> NEW:
>>  When COSE protection is used, the profile should specify whether COSE tags 
>> are used or not.
>>  Note that [RFC8392] requires COSE tags be used in a CWT tag.
>> 
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>> 
>> The updated output files are here:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711.txt
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711.pdf
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711.html
>> 
>> These diff files show all changes made during AUTH48:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711-auth48diff.html
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>> 
>> These diff files show only the change made during the last editing round:
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>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
>> 
>> These diff files show all changes made to date:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711-diff.html
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9711-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> RFC Editor/kc
>> 
>>> On Apr 18, 2025, at 10:03 AM, Laurence Lundblade <l...@securitytheory.com> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi RFC Editor,
>>> 
>>> As part of the review Roman conducted on the Location NULL/NaN issue a 
>>> suggestion was made to improve the references to sections of referenced 
>>> RFCs. The EAT authors would like to request the following changes. The 
>>> change is only to make the “Section X” a clickable link.
>>> 
>>> Old:
>>> Section X of {{RFCYYYY}}
>>> 
>>> New:
>>> {{Section X of RFCYYYY}}
>>> 
>>> There are 7 occurrences of this.
>>> 
>>> You can see the change in the EAT GitHub repo here: 
>>> https://github.com/ietf-rats-wg/eat/commit/462fbba8cf1449bbd648f3ec3f4f10af02b07ae4
>>> 
>>> Thank you!
>>> 
>>> LL
>> 
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