Dan, 

Please let us know how your contact information should be updated.  The 
document currently contains the entry below, but mail sent to 
<daniel.vo...@bell.ca> failed (Address not found).

   Daniel Voyer
   Bell Canada
   Email: daniel.vo...@bell.ca

Thank you,
RFC Editor/sg

> On Apr 21, 2025, at 2:19 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Rakesh,
> 
> Thank you for your review and reply.  We have updated the document based on 
> your replies below.  For item 9, we are having trouble parsing the text: 
> 
>> <RG> How about following?
>> 
>>   In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], the
>>   querier can receive response messages with an IP/UDP
>>   header “out-of-band” by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV 
>> in the
>>   query message. 
> 
> We wonder if the following correctly conveys the intended meaning? 
> 
>   In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], the
>   querier can receive a response to an Out-of-band Response Requested 
>   message by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV
>   in  the IP/UDP  header.
> 
> 
> Please review the updated files here:
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779.xml
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779.txt
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779.pdf
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779.html
> 
> AUTH48 diffs (highlight only the changes noted below): 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779-auth48diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> Comprehensive diffs: 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779-diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> Please review and let us know if additional updates are needed or if you 
> approve the RFC for publication.
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/sg
> 
> 
> 
>> On Apr 16, 2025, at 8:01 PM, Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) 
>> <rgandhi=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>> 
>> Hello Editor,
>> 
>> Thank you for the great updates to the document.
>> 
>> Note: I am adding new email IDs for Dan Voyer.  Dan, please reply with your 
>> preference on how you would like to update your information in the RFC-to-be.
>> 
>> Please see replies inline with <RG>…
>> 
>> 
>> From: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
>> Date: Wednesday, April 16, 2025 at 7:00 PM
>> To: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com>, Clarence Filsfils 
>> (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>, daniel.vo...@bell.ca 
>> <daniel.vo...@bell.ca>, stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it 
>> <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>, mach.c...@huawei.com <mach.c...@huawei.com>
>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, mpls-...@ietf.org 
>> <mpls-...@ietf.org>, mpls-cha...@ietf.org <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, 
>> tony...@tony.li<tony...@tony.li>, james.n.guich...@futurewei.com 
>> <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org 
>> <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> for your 
>> review
>> 
>> Authors,
>> 
>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
>> the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>> 
>> 1) <!-- [rfced] May we update the document title as shown below for 
>> clarity?  
>> 
>> Original:
>>  Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks with MPLS Data
>>                                 Plane
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>  Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks over the MPLS Data 
>> Plane
>> 
>> -->
>> 
>> <RG> We could use following example as a guidance?
>> 
>> RFC 8660 uses term:  Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane
>> 
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8660
>> 
>> <RG> Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks with the MPLS Data 
>> Plane
>> 
>> 
>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>> 
>> 
>> <RG> Delay Measurement, Loss Measurement, Link Measurement, SR-MPLS Policy 
>> Measurement
>> 
>> 
>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the text below for readability and to 
>> clarify the relationship between SR-MPLS and its expansion. Please review 
>> and let us know any objections.
>> 
>> Original:
>>   This document specifies the application of the MPLS loss and delay
>>   measurement techniques, originally defined in RFC 6374, RFC 7876, and
>>   RFC 9341 within Segment Routing (SR) networks that utilize the MPLS
>>   data plane (SR-MPLS).  
>> 
>> Current:
>>   This document specifies the application of the MPLS loss and delay
>>   measurement techniques (originally defined in RFCs 6374, 7876, and 9341)
>>   within Segment Routing (SR) networks that utilize the MPLS data plane, 
>>   also referred to as Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS).
>> 
>> -->
>> 
>> <RG> Ok.
>> 
>> 
>> 4) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the text below to demonstrate a 1:1
>> relationship between abbreviation and expansion. Please review.
>> 
>> Original:
>> 
>>   Segment Routing (SR), as specified in [RFC8402], leverages the source
>>   routing paradigm and applies to both the Multiprotocol Label
>>   Switching (SR-MPLS) and IPv6 (SRv6) data planes.  
>> 
>> Current:
>> 
>>   Segment Routing (SR), as specified in [RFC8402], leverages the source
>>   routing paradigm and applies to both the Multiprotocol Label
>>   Switching (MPLS) and Internet Protocol version 6 (IPv6) data planes.
>>   These are referred to as Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS) and
>>   Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6), respectively.
>> 
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok.
>> 
>> 
>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, please consider whether the following 
>> suggested update conveys the intended meaning.  
>> 
>> Original:
>>   This document defines Return Path and Block Number TLV extensions for
>>   [RFC6374], in Section 6, for delay and loss measurement in SR-MPLS
>>   networks.
>> 
>> Current:
>>   This document extends [RFC6374] by defining Return Path and Block 
>>   Number TLVs (see Section 6) for delay and loss measurement in 
>>   SR-MPLS networks.
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok.
>> 
>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Does "also apply" mean "can also be used"? 
>> 
>> Original:
>>   These TLV extensions also apply to MPLS Label Switched
>>   Paths (LSPs) [RFC3031].
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>   These TLVs can also be used in MPLS Label Switched
>>   Paths (LSPs) [RFC3031].
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Seemingly, Success (0x1) is a Control Code.  If this is 
>> correct, may we udpate the text as follows? 
>> 
>> Original:
>>   The responder that supports this TLV MUST return
>>   Success in "Control Code" [RFC6374] if it is the intended destination
>>   for the query.
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>   The responder that supports this TLV MUST return
>>   Control Code 0x1 (Success) [RFC6374] if it is the intended destination
>>   for the query.
>> -->
>> 
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 
>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Could the text below be adjusted for clarity? Specifically, 
>> what is being sent as "the destination address"?
>> 
>> Original:
>>   When the querier sets an IP address and a UDP port in the URO TLV, the
>>   response message MUST be sent to that IP address as the destination address
>>   and UDP port as the destination port.
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>   When the querier sets an IP address and a UDP port in the URO TLV, the
>>   response message MUST be sent to that IP address, with that IP address as
>>   the destination address and the UDP port as the destination port.
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 9) <!-- [rfced] May we update "out-of-band response messages" to 
>> "Out-of-Band Response Requested messages..."?  It is unclear whether the 
>> text refers to the Response Requested messages or res ponses to Out-of-Band 
>> Response Requested messages.  
>> 
>> Original:
>>   In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], the
>>   querier can receive "out-of-band" response messages with an IP/UDP
>>   header by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the
>>   query message. 
>> -->
>> <RG> How about following?
>> 
>>   In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], the
>>   querier can receive response messages with an IP/UDP
>>   header “out-of-band” by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV 
>> in the
>>   query message. 
>> 
>> 
>> 10) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the text below for clarity and 
>> readability?
>> 
>> Original:
>>   In two-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], the
>>   response messages SHOULD be sent back in-band on the same link or the
>>   same end-to-end SR-MPLS path (same set of links and nodes) in the
>>   reverse direction to the querier, in order to perform accurate two-
>>   way delay measurement.
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>   In the two-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], 
>>   the response messages SHOULD be sent back one of two ways: either 
>>   they are sent back in-band on the same link, or they are sent back 
>>   on the same end-to-end SR-MPLS path (i.e., the same set of links and 
>>   nodes) in the reverse direction to the querier. This is done in order 
>>   to perform accurate two-way delay measurement.
>> 
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 11) <!-- [rfced] For readability, we suggest the update below.  Please 
>> review to ensure it does not impact the intended meaning. 
>> 
>> Original:
>>   The querier can request in the query message for the responder
>>   to send the response message back on a given return path using the
>>   MPLS Label Stack sub-TLV in the Return Path TLV defined in this
>>   document.
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>   In the query message, the querier can request that the responder send 
>>   the response message back on a given return path using the MPLS Label 
>>   Stack Sub-TLV in the Return Path TLV defined in this document.
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review these similar sentences and let us know if 
>> we may update them for readability. 
>> 
>> More specifically, what does "which" refer to in the examples below? Does 
>> it refer to the ACH or the different values in parentheses?
>> 
>> <RG> Value as in the suggested text.
>> 
>> In addition, we were unable to find "Combined DM+LM" in RFC 6374 as seen in
>> the third example. Should this be updated to "combined LM/DM message" as 
>> used in RFC 6374?
>> 
>> <RG> Yes.
>> 
>> 
>> Original:
>>   As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS Delay Measurement (DM) query and
>>   response messages use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value
>>   0x000C for delay measurement) [RFC6374], which identifies the message
>>   type and the message payload as defined in Section 3.2 [RFC6374]
>>   following the ACH.  
>> 
>>   As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS LM query and response messages use the
>>   Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value 0x000A for direct loss
>>   measurement or value 0x000B for inferred loss measurement), which
>>   identifies the message type and the message payload defined in
>>   Section 3.1 [RFC6374] following the ACH.  
>> 
>>   As defined in [RFC6374], Combined DM+LM query and response messages
>>   use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value 0x000D for direct loss
>>   and delay measurement or value 0x000E for inferred loss and delay
>>   measurement), which identifies the message type and the message
>>   payload defined in Section 3.3 [RFC6374] following the ACH.  
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>   As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS Delay Measurement (DM) query and response
>>   messages use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (with the value 0x000C 
>>   for delay measurement). This value identifies the message type and the
>>   message payload that follow the ACH, as defined in Section 3.2 of 
>>   [RFC6374].
>> 
>>   As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS LM query and response messages use the ACH
>>   (with the value 0x000A for direct loss measurement or the value 0x000B 
>>   for inferred loss measurement). This value identifies the message type 
>>   and the message payload that follow the ACH, as defined in Section 3.1 
>>   of [RFC6374].
>> 
>>   As defined in [RFC6374], combined DM+LM query and response messages use 
>>   the ACH (with the value 0x000D for direct loss and delay measurement or 
>>   the value 0x000E for inferred loss and delay measurement). This value
>>   identifies the message type and the message payload that follows the 
>>   ACH, as defined in Section 3.3 of [RFC6374].
>> 
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok. Except DM+LM to be changed to LM/DM as suggested.
>> 
>> 
>> 13) <!-- [rfced] In the instances below, we have adjusted "for accounting 
>> received traffic". Please review to ensure these changes do not alter your 
>> meaning.
>> 
>> Original:
>>   The Path Segment Identifier (PSID) [RFC9545] MUST be carried in the
>>   received data packet for the traffic flow under measurement for 
>>   accounting received traffic on the egress node of the SR-MPLS Policy.
>> 
>>   Different values of PSID can be used per Candidate-Path for accounting
>>   received traffic to measure packet loss at the Candidate- Path level.
>> 
>> Current:
>>   The Path Segment Identifier (PSID) [RFC9545] MUST be carried in the
>>   received data packet for the traffic flow under measurement, in order to
>>   account for received traffic on the egress node of the SR-MPLS Policy.
>> 
>>   Different values of the PSID can be used per Candidate-Path to account 
>>   for received traffic and to measure packet loss at the Candidate-Path 
>>   level.
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 
>> 14) <!-- [rfced] In the text below, does "while" mean "at the same time", 
>> or does it represent a contrast (like "whereas" or "on the other hand")?
>> 
>> Original:
>>   The LM query and response messages defined in [RFC6374] are used to
>>   measure packet loss for the block of data packets transmitted with
>>   the previous marking while data packets carry alternate marking.
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>>   The LM query and response messages defined in [RFC6374] are used to 
>>   measure packet loss for the block of data packets transmitted with the 
>>   previous marking, whereas data packets carry alternate marking.
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 15) <!-- [rfced] FYI - The quoted text below appears differently in RFC 
>> 9341. We have updated to match RFC 9341.
>> 
>> Original:
>>   "The assumption of the block number mechanism is that the measurement
>>   nodes are time synchronized" as specified in Section 4.3 of [RFC9341]
>>   is not necessary, as the block number on the responder can be
>>   synchronized based on the received LM query messages.
>> 
>> Current:
>>   Section 4.3 of [RFC9341] specifies: "The assumption of this BN
>>   mechanism is that the measurement nodes are time synchronized." However, 
>>   this is not necessary, as the block number on the responder can be 
>>   synchronized based on the received LM query messages.
>> 
>> -->
>> 
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 
>> 16) <!-- [rfced] Is "LSE" singular or plural in the text below?
>> 
>> Original:
>>   The MPLS Label Stack contains a list of 32-bit LSE that includes a
>>   20-bit label value, 8-bit TTL value, 3-bit TC value, and 1-bit EOS
>>   (S) field.  
>> 
>> Perhaps (LSE is plural):
>>   The MPLS Label Stack contains a list of 32-bit LSEs that each include a
>>   20-bit label value, an 8-bit TTL value, a 3-bit TC value, and a 1-bit 
>>   EOS (S) field.
>> 
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 17) <!-- [rfced]  We have removed "TLV" from the Descriptions to align with 
>> the IANA registries <https://www.iana.org/assignments/g-ach-parameters>.  
>> Please let us know any corrections. 
>> 
>> Original:
>> | TBA1  | Return Path TLV  | This document |
>> | TBA2  | Block Number TLV | This document |
>> 
>> Current:
>> | 5    | Return Path  | RFC 9779  |
>> | 6    | Block Number | RFC 9779  |
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 18) <!-- [rfced] Should the registry name be plural?  Note that we will ask 
>> IANA to update their registry if this change is accepted. 
>> 
>> Current: Return Path Sub-TLV Type
>> Perhaps: Return Path Sub-TLV Types 
>> -->
>> <RG> Yes
>> 
>> 
>> 19) <!-- [rfced] Much of this text duplicates what appears in the table.  
>> Perhaps the text should just indicate that the code points are assigned as 
>> defined in Table 2? 
>> 
>> Section 12: 
>>   All code points in the range 0 through 175 in this registry
>>   shall be allocated according to the "IETF Review" procedure as
>>   specified in [RFC8126].  Code points in the range 176 through 239 in
>>   this registry shall be allocated according to the "First Come, First
>>   Served" procedure as specified in [RFC8126].  Remaining code points
>>   are allocated according to Table 2:
>> 
>> Table 2: 
>>          | Value     |       Description       | Reference     |
>>          +===========+=========================+===============+
>>          | 1 - 175   |       IETF Review       | This document |
>>          | 176 - 239 | First Come First Served | This document |
>>          | 240 - 251 |     Experimental Use    | This document |
>>          | 252 - 254 |       Private Use       | This document |
>> -->
>> <RG> Agree to change to:
>> 
>> The code points are allocated according to Table 2:
>> 
>> 
>> 20) <!-- [rfced] Would it make sense to refer to the MPLS Review Team 
>> (assuming that is correct), as we are unsure what MPLS-RT refers to and we 
>> are unable to find information about it. 
>> 
>> Original:
>>   Thanks to Huaimo Chen, Yimin Shen, and Xufeng Liu for MPLS-RT expert
>>   review, ...
>> -->
>> <RG> Perhaps
>> 
>>   Thanks to Huaimo Chen, Yimin Shen, and Xufeng Liu for MPLS expert
>>   review, ...
>> 
>> 
>> 21) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE802.1AX] references the 2008 version of this IEEE 
>> Standard.  May we update this reference to use the current standard from 
>> 2020 as seen in the following URL: 
>> <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/9105034>?
>> 
>> -->
>> <RG> Yes
>> 
>> 
>> 22) <!-- [rfced] We removed the quotes around Control Code throughout to 
>> align with use in RFC 6374.  We have also removed the quotes and 
>> capitalized "in-band response requested" and "out-of-band response 
>> requested" to match what appears in RFC 6374 and the IANA registry.  Please 
>> review and let us know if corrections are needed. 
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 23) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following changes and questions 
>> regarding the terms used in this document:
>> 
>> a) RFC 8402 uses "node-SID" and "Anycast-SID" rather than "node SID" and
>> "Anycast SID". May we update these to match the usage from RFC 8402?
>> 
>> <RG> Yes.
>> 
>> b) We note different capitalization of label stack vs. Label Stack.  We 
>> believe the lowercase "label stack" is used in general text, but "Label 
>> Stack" is capitalized when it refers to the the TLV.  Please confirm that 
>> MPLS Label Stack is capitalized correctly in the following:
>> 
>> Original: 
>>   The MPLS Label Stack contains a list of 32-bit LSE that includes a
>>   20-bit label value, 8-bit TTL value, 3-bit TC value, and 1-bit EOS
>>   (S) field.  An MPLS Label Stack Sub-TLV may carry a stack of labels
>>   or a Binding SID label [RFC8402] of the Return SR-MPLS Policy.
>> -->
>> <RG> Perhaps
>> 
>>   The MPLS label stack contains a list of 32-bit LSE that includes a
>>   20-bit label value, 8-bit TTL value, 3-bit TC value, and 1-bit EOS
>>   (S) field.  An MPLS Label Stack Sub-TLV may carry a stack of labels
>>   or a Binding SID label [RFC8402] of the Return SR-MPLS Policy.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 24) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions and changes 
>> regarding the abbreviations used in this document.
>> 
>> a) Per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"), abbreviations should be
>> expanded upon first use. Is "EOS" in the text below an abbreviation? If so,
>> how may it be expanded?
>> 
>> 1-bit EOS (S) field
>> 
>> <RG> Perhaps:
>> 
>> 1-bit End of Stack (S) field
>> 
>> b) FYI - We have expanded the abbreviation below. Please review to
>> ensure correctness.
>> 
>> Border Gateway Protocol - Link State  (BGP-LS)
>> 
>> -->
>> <RG> Ok
>> 
>> 25) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
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>> 
>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
>> still be reviewed as a best practice. 
>> 
>> -->
>> 
>> <RG> Believe the document is ok.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> Rakesh
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Thank you.
>> 
>> RFC Editor
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On Apr 16, 2025, at 3:52 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>> 
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>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779.txt
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>> Diff of the XML: 
>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9779-xmldiff1.html
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>> 
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>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC9779 (draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17)
>> 
>> Title            : Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks with 
>> MPLS Data Plane
>> Author(s)        : R. Gandhi, C. Filsfils, D. Voyer, S. Salsano, M. Chen
>> WG Chair(s)      : Nicolai Leymann, Tarek Saad, Tony Li
>> 
>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de Velde
>> 
>> 
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