I concur

Phil

> On Apr 15, 2025, at 10:09 PM, Michael Jones <michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com> 
> wrote:
> 
> Thank you, Lynne.  Please record in 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9728 that I approve of the publication 
> of the current draft as RFC 9728.
> 
> Phil, Aaron, do you concur?
> 
>                                Thanks all,
>                                -- Mike
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> Sent: Tuesday, April 15, 2025 10:33 AM
> To: Michael Jones <michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com>
> Cc: Aaron Parecki <aa...@parecki.com>; rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; 
> phil.h...@yahoo.com; oauth-...@ietf.org; oauth-cha...@ietf.org; 
> rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com; Deb Cooley <debcool...@gmail.com>; 
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9728 <draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata-13> 
> for your review
> 
> Hi, Mike.  Thanks for your replies!  We have updated this document per your 
> notes below.
> 
> Apologies for the missing space before the email address; thank you for 
> catching that!
> 
> We also removed the "<!-- [rfced] " comment.  (We'd left it in until the 
> remaining part of the question was addressed, so that it wouldn't fall 
> through the cracks.)
> 
> The latest files are posted here.  Please refresh your browser:
> 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728.txt
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728.pdf
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728.xml
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-auth48diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-lastdiff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-xmldiff1.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-xmldiff2.html
> 
> Thanks again!
> 
> RFC Editor/lb
> 
> 
>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 5:45 PM, Michael Jones <michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Aaron and talked about my WWW-Authenticate response suggestion, based on 
>> that conversation, we'd like to change what I wrote below on that topic.
>> 
>> Rather, let's leave the example as it currently is:
>>  HTTP/1.1 401 Unauthorized
>>  WWW-Authenticate: Bearer resource_metadata=
>>    "https://resource.example.com/.well-known/oauth-protected-resource";
>> 
>> Also, we agree with this this suggestion that you made.  Please apply it.
>> 
>> Change:
>>         The HTTP status code and error string in the example response above
>>         are defined by <xref target="RFC6750"/>.
>> to:
>>         The HTTP status code in the example response above
>>         are defined by <xref target="RFC6750"/>.
>> 
>> Aaron agrees with the rest of my suggestions.  We look forward reviewing the 
>> next iteration.
>> 
>>                               Thanks again!
>>                               -- Mike
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Michael Jones
>> Sent: Monday, April 14, 2025 5:29 PM
>> To: 'Lynne Bartholomew' <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org>; Aaron Parecki 
>> <aa...@parecki.com>
>> Cc: 'rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org' <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; 
>> 'phil.h...@yahoo.com' <phil.h...@yahoo.com>; 'oauth-...@ietf.org' 
>> <oauth-...@ietf.org>; 'oauth-cha...@ietf.org' <oauth-cha...@ietf.org>; 
>> 'rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com' <rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com>; 'Deb Cooley' 
>> <debcool...@gmail.com>; 'auth48archive@rfc-editor.org' 
>> <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
>> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9728 <draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata-13> 
>> for your review
>> 
>> Resending including Aaron Parecki <aa...@parecki.com>, since apparently 
>> <aaron=40parecki....@dmarc.ietf.org> didn't reach him.
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Michael Jones
>> Sent: Monday, April 14, 2025 2:55 PM
>> To: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org>; Aaron Parecki 
>> <aaron=40parecki....@dmarc.ietf.org>
>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; phil.h...@yahoo.com; oauth-...@ietf.org; 
>> oauth-cha...@ietf.org; rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com; Deb Cooley 
>> <debcool...@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
>> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9728 <draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata-13> 
>> for your review
>> 
>> Thanks, Lynne.  My responses to your questions are inline below, prefixed by 
>> "Mike>".
>> 
>> Reading the auth48diff, I also noticed a missing space before the e-mail 
>> address in the text "Registration requests should be sent 
>> to<oauth-ext-rev...@ietf.org>".
>> 
>>                               Thanks again!
>>                               -- Mike
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
>> Sent: Monday, April 14, 2025 1:35 PM
>> To: Aaron Parecki <aaron=40parecki....@dmarc.ietf.org>
>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com; 
>> phil.h...@yahoo.com; oauth-...@ietf.org; oauth-cha...@ietf.org; 
>> rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com; Deb Cooley <debcool...@gmail.com>; 
>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9728 <draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata-13> 
>> for your review
>> 
>> Hi, Aaron.
>> 
>> Thank you for your replies to our questions!
>> 
>> We have three follow-up items for you:
>> 
>> * Regarding this question and your reply:
>> 
>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Sections 1 and 2:  We had trouble determining what
>>>> "for instance" refers to in these sentences.  For example, in the
>>>> first sentence listed below, we do not see any mention of "jwks_uri"
>>>> in [FAPI.MessageSigning] (although we see "jwks_uri"
>>>> in Section 2 of this document as well as RFCs 7591, 7592, 8414, 8705,
>>>> 8725, 9068, 9700, and 9701, but [FAPI.MessageSigning] does not
>>>> mention any of these published RFCs, except for one mention of RFC
>>>> 8705 ("This is outside of the scope of both [RFC8705] and the FAPI
>>>> standards")).  Could these sentences be reworded to make them
>>>> clearer?
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> These values may be
>>>> used by other specifications, such as the jwks_uri used to publish
>>>> public keys the resource server uses to sign resource responses, for
>>>> instance, as described in [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>>>> ...
>>>> JSON array containing a list of the JWS [JWS] signing
>>>>   algorithms (alg values) [JWA] supported by the protected resource
>>>>   for signing resource responses, for instance, as described in
>>>>   [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>>>> 
>>>> Possibly:
>>>> These values may be
>>>> used by other specifications, such as the jwks_uri (see Section 2)
>>>> used to publish public keys the resource server uses to sign
>>>> resource responses, as described in [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>>>> ...
>>>> JSON array containing a list of the JWS [JWS] signing
>>>>   algorithms (alg values) [JWA] supported by the protected resource
>>>>   for signing resource responses - for instance, as described in
>>>>   [FAPI.MessageSigning]. -->
>>>> 
>>> Please use this wording, as we identified another ambiguity in the previous 
>>> wording:
>>> 
>>> These values, such as the <tt>jwks_uri</tt> (see Section 2), may be
>>> used with other specifications; for example, the public keys published
>>> in the <tt>jwks_uri</tt> can be used to verify the signed resource 
>>> responses, as described in [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>> 
>> We updated the "These values ..." sentence per your note.  How may we update 
>> the following?
>> 
>>> JSON array containing a list of the JWS [JWS] signing
>>>   algorithms (alg values) [JWA] supported by the protected resource
>>>   for signing resource responses, for instance, as described in
>>>   [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>> 
>> Mike> I noticed that you already applied <tt> to the alg here (good).  I 
>> think the text above is already fine.  Aaron?
>> 
>> = = = = =
>> 
>> * Regarding this question and your reply:
>> 
>>>> 26) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of
>>>> the online Style Guide at
>>>> <https://www/
>>>> .rfc-editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&data=05%
>>>> 7C02%7C%7C03dd1f9970bf4841b6bd08dd7b93de50%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaa
>>>> aaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C638802597201581579%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB
>>>> 0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIs
>>>> IldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=RknoutA0DIyLk5oQFgLqFA7Faoi4nx%2B
>>>> yISVZxRP0Xm8%3D&reserved=0>, and let us know if any changes are
>>>> needed.  Updates of this nature typically result in more precise
>>>> language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>> 
>>>> For example, please consider whether the following should be updated:
>>>> 
>>>> man-in-the-middle -->
>>> 
>>> We believe “man-in-the-middle” can be removed from the sentence without 
>>> affecting its meaning. Please do so.
>> 
>> 
>> "man-in-the-middle" was used in both Section 7.3 and Section 7.6.  We 
>> removed both instances.  Please review, and let us know if either sentence 
>> should be clarified.  For example, in Section 7.3, is it correct to now 
>> refer to one form of attack instead of two?
>> 
>> Not sure if it helps, but some authors have replaced "man-in-the-middle" 
>> with "on-path".
>> 
>> Mike> Actually, let's replace both former uses of man-in-the-middle with 
>> adversary-in-the-middle, which apparently NIST is using.
>> 
>> = = = = =
>> 
>> * Regarding this update:
>> 
>>> In this review, we also identified a mistake in an example. Please
>>> update the example in Section 5.1 as described in this pull request:
>>> https://githu/
>>> b.com%2Foauth-wg%2Fdraft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata%2Fpull%2F65%2Ffi
>>> les&data=05%7C02%7C%7C03dd1f9970bf4841b6bd08dd7b93de50%7C84df9e7fe9f64
>>> 0afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C638802597201602007%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb
>>> 3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjo
>>> iTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=xCCE8Lb9ZtREL2DAZccrDG5NG
>>> N7Ph0HQQinP0rCgV90%3D&reserved=0
>>> 
>>> (Lines 892-895 replaced with the below)
>>> 
>>> HTTP/1.1 401 Unauthorized
>>> WWW-Authenticate: Bearer resource_metadata=
>> 
>> Because the new "401" entry doesn't appear to include an error string, 
>> should the paragraph that follows it be removed?
>> 
>> Mike> Actually, let's restore the "error" and "error_description" 
>> parameters, so that the entry becomes:
>> HTTP/1.1 401 Unauthorized
>> WWW-Authenticate: Bearer error="invalid_request",
>> error_description="No access token was provided in this request",
>> resource_metadata=
>> "https://resource.example.com/.well-known/oauth-protected-resource";
>> 
>> Currently:
>> 
>> HTTP/1.1 401 Unauthorized
>> WWW-Authenticate: Bearer resource_metadata=  
>> "https://resource.example.com/.well-known/oauth-protected-resource";
>> 
>> The HTTP status code and error string in the example response above  are 
>> defined by [RFC6750].
>> 
>> = = = = =
>> 
>> The latest files are posted here.  Please refresh your browser:
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>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728.pdf
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728.xml
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-diff.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-auth48diff.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>> 
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-xmldiff1.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9728-xmldiff2.html
>> 
>> Thanks again!
>> 
>> RFC Editor/lb
>> 
>> 
>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 2:18 PM, Aaron Parecki 
>>>> <aaron=40parecki....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2025 at 4:00 PM <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>> Authors,
>>> 
>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>> 
>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Section 1:  This sentence does not parse.  As it
>>> appears that "then fetch" means "then the client fetches", may we
>>> update as suggested below?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> In other cases, it may be
>>> dynamically discovered; for example, a user could enter their email
>>> address into an email client, the client could perform WebFinger
>>> [RFC7033] discovery (in a manner related to the description in
>>> Section 2 of "OpenID Connect Discovery 1.0" [OpenID.Discovery]) to
>>> find the resource server, then fetch the resource server metadata to
>>> find the authorization server to use to obtain authorization to
>>> access the user's email.
>>> 
>>> Suggested:
>>> In
>>> other cases, it may be dynamically discovered; for example, a user
>>> could enter their email address into an email client, the client
>>> could perform WebFinger discovery [RFC7033] (in a manner related to
>>> the description in Section 2 of [OpenID.Discovery]) to find the
>>> resource server, and the client could then fetch the resource server
>>> metadata to find the authorization server to use to obtain
>>> authorization to access the user's email. -->
>>> 
>>> Agreed, thanks for the suggested text.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Section 1:  We changed "Software Statement" to
>>> "software statement" per the text of RFC 7591 and changed "Dynamic
>>> Client Registration" to "dynamic client registration" per RFCs 7591,
>>> 9700, and 9701.  Please let us know any objections.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> This is
>>> analogous to the role that the Software Statement plays in OAuth
>>> Dynamic Client Registration [RFC7591].
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> This is
>>> analogous to the role that the software statement plays in OAuth
>>> dynamic client registration [RFC7591]. -->
>>> 
>>> We agree with lowercase "software statement", but "Dynamic Client 
>>> Registration" should be capitalized, as it's the name of RFC 7591.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 1:  We had trouble parsing this sentence.  We
>>> removed the comma before "but that" to clarify that "that" refers to
>>> attacker-generated metadata and is not used as a noun.  If this update
>>> is incorrect, please clarify what "but that" refers to.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> This prevents attackers from publishing metadata supposedly
>>> describing the protected resource, but that is not actually
>>> authoritative for the protected resource, as described in  Section
>>> 7.3.
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> This prevents attackers from publishing metadata that supposedly
>>> describes the protected resource but that is not actually
>>> authoritative for the protected resource, as described in  Section
>>> 7.3. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Sections 1 and subsequent:  Please review and advise
>>> regarding the usage of "<tt>" for certain values and parameters as
>>> listed in the XML file for this document.  For example, we see
>>> 2 instances of (OAuth 2.0) "<tt>scope</tt> values" and 1 instance of
>>> "scope values".  Should usage be consistent?  Also, please review the
>>> parameters listed in Sections 2 and 8.1.2; no <tt>s for parameters
>>> listed in Section 2, but parameters listed in Section 8.1.2 (except
>>> for "signed_metadata"; see below) are enclosed in <tt>s.
>>> 
>>> A few more examples:
>>> "alg values":  2 instances with <tt>, 2 without  GET ("<tt>GET</tt>
>>> request" vs. "the GET")  <dt>Metadata
>>> Name:</dt><dd>signed_metadata</dd> (Section 8.1.2)
>>> (All other parameter names in Section 8.1.2 that follow
>>> "Metadata Name: " are enclosed in <tt>s.) -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> We intend to call out parameter names with <tt>, but not use that markup 
>>> when referring to the concept. So in the case of all 3 occurrences of 
>>> "scope values", these are not referring to the parameter names so the <tt> 
>>> should be removed.
>>> 
>>> For "alg values", "alg" is a parameter name in JWT, so that should always 
>>> be wrapped in <tt>.
>>> 
>>> The instance of "the GET" should be corrected to "the <tt>GET</tt> request".
>>> 
>>> "signed_metadata" is missing the <tt> wrapper as well.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Sections 1 and 2:  We had trouble determining what
>>> "for instance" refers to in these sentences.  For example, in the
>>> first sentence listed below, we do not see any mention of "jwks_uri"
>>> in [FAPI.MessageSigning] (although we see "jwks_uri"
>>> in Section 2 of this document as well as RFCs 7591, 7592, 8414, 8705,
>>> 8725, 9068, 9700, and 9701, but [FAPI.MessageSigning] does not mention
>>> any of these published RFCs, except for one mention of RFC 8705 ("This
>>> is outside of the scope of both [RFC8705] and the FAPI standards")).
>>> Could these sentences be reworded to make them clearer?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> These values may be
>>> used by other specifications, such as the jwks_uri used to publish
>>> public keys the resource server uses to sign resource responses, for
>>> instance, as described in [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>>> ...
>>> JSON array containing a list of the JWS [JWS] signing
>>>   algorithms (alg values) [JWA] supported by the protected resource
>>>   for signing resource responses, for instance, as described in
>>>   [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>>> 
>>> Possibly:
>>> These values may be
>>> used by other specifications, such as the jwks_uri (see Section 2)
>>> used to publish public keys the resource server uses to sign  resource
>>> responses, as described in [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>>> ...
>>> JSON array containing a list of the JWS [JWS] signing
>>>   algorithms (alg values) [JWA] supported by the protected resource
>>>   for signing resource responses - for instance, as described in
>>>   [FAPI.MessageSigning]. -->
>>> 
>>> Please use this wording, as we identified another ambiguity in the previous 
>>> wording:
>>> 
>>> These values, such as the <tt>jwks_uri</tt> (see Section 2), may be
>>> used with other specifications; for example, the public keys published
>>> in the <tt>jwks_uri</tt> can be used to verify the signed resource 
>>> responses, as described in [FAPI.MessageSigning].
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 1.1:  "uses of ... utilize", which also means
>>> "uses of ... uses", read oddly.  We changed "uses of" to "applications
>>> of".  Please let us know any objections.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> All uses of JSON Web Signature (JWS) [JWS] and JSON Web Encryption
>>> (JWE) [JWE] data structures in this specification utilize the JWS
>>> Compact Serialization or the JWE Compact Serialization; the JWS JSON
>>> Serialization and the JWE JSON Serialization are not used.
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> All applications of JSON Web Signature (JWS) data structures [JWS]
>>> and JSON Web Encryption (JWE) data structures [JWE] as discussed in
>>> this specification utilize the JWS Compact Serialization or the JWE
>>> Compact Serialization; the JWS JSON Serialization and the JWE JSON
>>> Serialization are not used. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 1.2:  This text says "This specification uses
>>> the terms ...", but except for a few terms (e.g., "Client
>>> Authentication" (only used in the title of Section 5.3), "Claim Name",
>>> "Authorization Code"), we could not find any instances of the
>>> following terms anywhere in the text:
>>> Authorization Endpoint, Authorization Grant, Client Secret, Grant
>>> Type, Redirection URI, Refresh Token, Resource Owner, Response Type,
>>> Token Endpoint, and Claim Value.
>>> 
>>> We see that this paragraph was taken from Section 1.2 of RFC 8414.
>>> We also see similar paragraphs in several other post-6000 RFCs.
>>> 
>>> The following terms are lowercased in text everywhere else in this
>>> document.  Should we lowercase them in this list as well?
>>> 
>>> Access Token, Authorization Server, Client, Client Identifier,
>>> Protected Resource, and Resource Server
>>> 
>>> We see that the terms listed as being from RFC 6749 are lowercased in
>>> RFC 6749.  Lowercase versus uppercase for the terms listed as being in
>>> [JWT] (RFC 7519) is mixed.
>>> 
>>> If all of these terms are relevant to this document, should the text
>>> be reworded to suggest that readers be familiar with them?  If not,
>>> could this paragraph be (1) updated to tailor it to this document, as
>>> was done in RFCs 9470 and 9700 or (2) removed?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> This specification uses the terms "Access Token", "Authorization
>>> Code", "Authorization Endpoint", "Authorization Grant",
>>> "Authorization Server", "Client", "Client Authentication", "Client
>>> Identifier", "Client Secret", "Grant Type", "Protected Resource",
>>> "Redirection URI", "Refresh Token", "Resource Owner", "Resource
>>> Server", "Response Type", and "Token Endpoint" defined by OAuth 2.0
>>> [RFC6749], the terms "Claim Name", "Claim Value", and "JSON Web Token
>>> (JWT)" defined by JSON Web Token (JWT) [JWT]. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Yes, let's delete the terms we're not using, and use quoted lowercase terms 
>>> so that it matches RFC 9449, RFC 9470, and RFC 9700.
>>> 
>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Sections 2 and 8.1.2:  We changed "Bearer Token" to
>>> "bearer token" per RFC 6750.  Please let us know any objections.
>>> 
>>> If no objections, we will ask IANA to change "Bearer Token" to "bearer
>>> token" in the "OAuth Protected Resource Metadata" registry on
>>> <https://www/.
>>> iana.org%2Fassignments%2Foauth-parameters%2F&data=05%7C02%7C%7C03dd1f9970bf4841b6bd08dd7b93de50%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C638802597201751463%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=TxUFf0ihhrrSSESPn1bY8RDg1hcRmB84Tur%2BvMqXgEg%3D&reserved=0>
>>>  just prior to publication.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> JSON array containing a list of the supported methods
>>>   of sending an OAuth 2.0 Bearer Token [RFC6750] to the protected
>>>   resource.
>>> ...
>>> *  Metadata Description: JSON array containing a list of the OAuth
>>>   2.0 Bearer Token presentation methods that this protected resource
>>>   supports
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> JSON array containing a list of the supported methods
>>>   of sending an OAuth 2.0 bearer token [RFC6750] to the protected
>>>   resource.
>>> ...
>>> Metadata Description:  JSON array containing a list of the OAuth 2.0
>>>   bearer token presentation methods that this protected resource
>>>   supports -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Agreed, when "bearer token" is referring to the type of token (rather than 
>>> referring to RFC 6750) it should be lowercase.
>>> 
>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.2:  For ease of the reader, we provided a
>>> brief explanation of the term "MACed" per RFC 7591.  Please let us
>>> know any objections.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> The signed metadata MUST be
>>> digitally signed or MACed using JSON Web Signature (JWS) [JWS] and
>>> MUST contain an iss (issuer) claim denoting the party attesting to
>>> the claims in the signed metadata.
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> The signed metadata MUST be
>>> digitally signed or MACed (protected with a Message Authentication
>>> Code) using a JSON Web Signature (JWS) [JWS] and MUST contain an iss
>>> (issuer) claim denoting the party attesting to the claims in the
>>> signed metadata. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the four sourcecode entries in this
>>> document, and let us know if you would like to specify a type.
>>> For example, should the first and second sourcecode items have the
>>> type set to "http-message", and should the third and fourth sourcecode
>>> items have the type set to "json"?  Please review and advise.
>>> 
>>> If the current list of preferred values for "type"
>>> (https://www/.
>>> rfc-editor.org%2Frpc%2Fwiki%2Fdoku.php%3Fid%3Dsourcecode-types&data=05
>>> %7C02%7C%7C03dd1f9970bf4841b6bd08dd7b93de50%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaa
>>> aaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C638802597201765076%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0
>>> eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIl
>>> dUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=S9rCSReF7kSe9klNsDq5cv8DrSHcch5VmNii
>>> ZXlX7Lo%3D&reserved=0) does not contain an applicable type, please let
>>> us know.  Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute unset.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> All should be set to type "http-message".
>>> 
>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Section 4:  Please confirm that "OAuth protected
>>> resources for protected resources" is as intended.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> protected_resources
>>>   OPTIONAL.  JSON array containing a list of resource identifiers
>>>   for OAuth protected resources for protected resources that can be
>>>   used with this authorization server. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> That looks like a duplicate "for protected resources", please delete, so 
>>> that it reads:
>>> 
>>> protected_resources
>>>   OPTIONAL.  JSON array containing a list of resource identifiers
>>>   for OAuth protected resources that can be
>>>   used with this authorization server.
>>> 
>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Figure 1:  We see that the bottom set of boxes for
>>> "Client", "Resource Server", and "Authorization Server" appear in the
>>> SVG but not the ASCII art.  Please update so that the ASCII art and
>>> the SVG match.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Thanks for flagging the inconsistency. Please add this to the bottom of the 
>>> diagram:
>>> 
>>>    +----+-----+              +----+-----+    +-------+-------+
>>>    |  Client  |              | Resource |    | Authorization |
>>>    |          |              |  Server  |    |    Server     |
>>>    +----------+              +----------+    +---------------+
>>> 
>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Section 5:  The descriptive text regarding the steps
>>> shown in Figure 1 doesn't seem to align with the steps shown in Figure
>>> 1:
>>> 
>>> In Figure 1:
>>> Step 5 is "Validate ..." and "... Build ..."
>>> Step 6 is "Fetch ..."
>>> 
>>> In the text:
>>> Step 5 is "... validates ..."
>>> Step 6 is "... builds ..." and "... makes a request to fetch ..."
>>> 
>>> May we update the descriptive text as suggested below?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> | 5. Validate RS Metadata |         |                  |
>>> | Build AS Metadata URL   |         |                  |
>>> ...
>>>          |   6. Fetch AS Metadata  |                  |
>>> ...
>>> 5.   The client validates the protected resource metadata, as
>>>     described in Section 3.3.
>>> 
>>> 6.   The client builds the authorization server metadata URL from an
>>>     issuer identifier in the resource metadata according to
>>>     [RFC8414] and makes a request to fetch the authorization server
>>>     metadata.
>>> 
>>> Suggested (easier to change the text than the figure):
>>> 5.   The client validates the protected resource metadata, as
>>>     described in Section 3.3, and builds the authorization server
>>>     metadata URL from an issuer identifier in the resource metadata
>>>     according to [RFC8414].
>>> 
>>> 6.   The client makes a request to fetch the authorization server
>>>     metadata. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Thanks.
>>> 
>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.3:  Does "scenarios where" also apply to
>>> the text after "and", or is the text after "and" a separate thought?
>>> If the former, may we update as suggested?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> This specification is intended to be deployed in scenarios where the
>>> client has no prior knowledge about the resource server, and the
>>> resource server might or might not have prior knowledge about the
>>> client.
>>> 
>>> Suggested:
>>> This specification is intended to be deployed in scenarios where the
>>> client has no prior knowledge about the resource server and where  the
>>> resource server might or might not have prior knowledge about  the
>>> client. -->
>>> 
>>> Looks good.
>>> 
>>> 15) <!-- [rfced] Section 6:  "such as resource" looked odd in the text
>>> output, so we placed "resource" in quotes per 'The name requested
>>> (e.g., "resource")' in Section 8.1.1.  Please let us know any
>>> objections.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> For example, the member names in the
>>> metadata response might be compared to specific member names such as
>>> resource.
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> For example, the member names in the
>>> metadata response might be compared to specific member names such as
>>> "resource". -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> We should use <tt>resource</tt> for consistency, since this is actually a 
>>> parameter name.
>>> 
>>> 16) <!-- [rfced] Section 7.6:  We had trouble determining what "or
>>> which could be published" refers to.  If the suggested text is not
>>> correct, please clarify.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> For
>>> instance, some protected resources are used with a fixed
>>> authorization server or set of authorization servers, the locations
>>> of which may be well known, or which could be published as metadata
>>> values by the protected resource.
>>> 
>>> Suggested (guessing that the location information could be published):
>>> For
>>> instance, some protected resources are used with a fixed
>>> authorization server or set of authorization servers, the locations
>>> of which may be well known or could be published by the protected
>>> resource as metadata values. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Maybe we can make this even more explicit by separating it into multiple 
>>> sentences:
>>> 
>>> For instance, some protected resources are used with a fixed authorization 
>>> server or a set of authorization servers, the locations of which may be 
>>> known via out-of-band mechanisms. Alternatively, as described in this 
>>> specification, the locations of the authorization servers could be 
>>> published by the protected resource as metadata values.
>>> 
>>> 17) <!-- [rfced] Section 7.9:  We see "PKIX" mentioned in RFC 9525 but
>>> not standalone "PKI".  Would you prefer to mention "PKIX" instead of
>>> "PKI" here?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> This means that its security is dependent upon  the Internet Public
>>> Key Infrastructure (PKI) [RFC9525].
>>> 
>>> Possibly:
>>> This means that its security is dependent  upon the Internet Public
>>> Key Infrastructure using X.509 (PKIX)  [RFC9525]. -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please use:
>>> 
>>> This means that its security is dependent upon the Internet Public Key
>>> Infrastructure using X.509 (PKIX), as described in [RFC9525].
>>> 
>>> 18) <!-- [rfced] Section 7.10:  RFC 7234 has been obsoleted by RFC 9111.
>>> Because we see "Cache-Control" and "max-age" discussed in RFC 9111 as
>>> well, we updated the RFC number accordingly.  Please let us know any
>>> objections.
>>> 
>>> Original ("utlize" has been fixed):
>>> Implementations should utlize HTTP
>>> caching directives such as Cache-Control with max-age, as defined in
>>> [RFC7234], to enable caching of retrieved metadata for appropriate
>>> time periods.
>>> ...
>>> [RFC7234]  Fielding, R., Ed., Nottingham, M., Ed., and J. Reschke,
>>>           Ed., "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Caching",
>>>           RFC 7234, DOI 10.17487/RFC7234, June 2014,
>>>           <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7234>.
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> Implementations should utilize HTTP
>>> caching directives such as Cache-Control with max-age, as defined in
>>> [RFC9111], to enable caching of retrieved metadata for appropriate
>>> time periods.
>>> ...
>>> [RFC9111]  Fielding, R., Ed., Nottingham, M., Ed., and J. Reschke,
>>>           Ed., "HTTP Caching", STD 98, RFC 9111,
>>>           DOI 10.17487/RFC9111, June 2022,
>>> 
>>> <https://www/.
>>> rfc-editor.org%2Finfo%2Frfc9111&data=05%7C02%7C%7C03dd1f9970bf4841b6bd
>>> 08dd7b93de50%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C638802597201
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>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>> 19) <!-- [rfced] We have removed this first paragraph, as it seems 
>>> unnecessary.  Please review.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>  The following registration procedure is used for the registry
>>>  established by this specification.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Ok.
>>> 
>>> 20) <!-- [rfced] To clarify the text, please consider the following
>>> update.  Currently, it is unclear whether mail sent to the list
>>> initiates review or if it is where the expert sends the comments.
>>> In addition, does the text need to mention Designated Experts, because
>>> Expert Review is already part of Specification Required?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>  Values are registered on a Specification Required [RFC8126] basis
>>>  after a two-week review period on the oauth-ext-rev...@ietf.org
>>>  mailing list, on the advice of one or more Designated Experts.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>>  Values are registered per Specification Required [RFC8126].
>>>  Registration requests should be sent to <oauth-ext-rev...@ietf.org>
>>>  to initiate a two-week review period.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> We don’t intend there to be anything unique to this spec with regards to 
>>> the review process. Any corrections here are acceptable.
>>> 
>>> 21) <!-- [rfced] Note that we have updated the text as follows based
>>> on discussion with IANA.  Please let us know if you have concerns.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>  The IANA escalation process is followed when the designated experts
>>>  are not responsive within 14 days.
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>>  If the designated experts are not responsive, the registration requesters
>>>  should contact IANA to escalate the process.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Looks good.
>>> 
>>> 22) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, please consider whether "makes sense"
>>> should be "is clear and fits the purpose of the registry"?  In
>>> addition, we suggest stating the criteria clearly (i.e., is the
>>> designated expert supposed to approve or not approve proposals that 
>>> duplicate functionality).
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>  Criteria that should be applied by the Designated Experts includes
>>>  determining whether the proposed registration duplicates existing
>>>  functionality, whether it is likely to be of general
>>>  applicability or is useful only for a single application,
>>>  and whether the registration makes sense.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>>  Designated experts should apply the following criteria when reviewing
>>>  proposed registrations: they must be unique, that is, they should not
>>>  duplicate existing functionality; they are likely generally applicable,
>>>  as opposed to being used for a single application; and they are clear
>>>  and fit the purpose of the registry.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>> 23) <!-- [rfced] This sentence is tough to parse.  Please consider the
>>> following update for clarity.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>  The reason to allow the Designated Experts to allocate values prior
>>>  to publication as a final specification is to enable giving authors
>>>  of specifications proposing registrations the benefit of review by
>>>  the Designated Experts before the specification is completely done,
>>>  so that if problems are identified, the authors can iterate and fix
>>>  them before publication of the final specification.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>>  Designated experts may allocate values prior to publication of the
>>>  final specification.  This allows authors to receive guidance from
>>>  the designated experts early, so any identified issues can be fixed
>>>  before the final specification is published.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Looks good.
>>> 
>>> 24) <!-- [rfced] [USA15] Do you want to specifically refer to the 2015 
>>> version of the standard, or do you want to refer to the most current 
>>> version?  Currently, we have updated this reference listing to primarily 
>>> refer to the 2015 version, and we have included a second link to the curent 
>>> version.  Please review.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> [USA15]    Davis, M. and K. Whistler, "Unicode Normalization Forms",
>>>           Unicode Standard Annex 15, 1 June 2015,
>>>           <https://www.unicode.org/reports/tr15/>.
>>> 
>>> Currently:
>>> [USA15]    Davis, M., Ed. and K. Whistler, Ed., "Unicode
>>>           Normalization Forms", Unicode Standard Annex #15, 1 June
>>>           2015, <https://www.unicode.org/reports/tr15/tr15-43.html>.
>>>           Latest version available at
>>> 
>>> <https://www/.
>>> unicode.org%2Freports%2Ftr15%2F&data=05%7C02%7C%7C03dd1f9970bf4841b6bd
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>>> ta=xcb4024eQ2zzXVIndtE2I77t6c%2F8IkfM%2FWVwdy4VOq4%3D&reserved=0>. -->
>>> 
>>> The most current version would be best.
>>> 
>>> 25) <!-- [rfced] Acknowledgements:  We found that all names were
>>> listed in alphabetical order by last name, except for Gabriel Corona.
>>> We moved Gabriel's name so that it appears after Deb Cooley's name
>>> instead of Roman Danyliw's name.  Please let us know any objections.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> We would would also like to thank Amanda  Baber, Mike Bishop, Ralph
>>> Bragg, Brian Campbell, Deb Cooley, Roman  Danyliw, Gabriel Corona,
>>> Vladimir Dzhuvinov, George Fletcher, Arnt  Gulbrandsen, Pieter
>>> Kasselman, Murray Kucherawy, David Mandelberg,  Tony Nadalin,
>>> Francesca Palombini, John Scudder, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef,  Filip Skokan,
>>> Orie Steele, Atul Tulshibagwale, Éric Vyncke, Paul  Wouters, and Bo Wu
>>> for their contributions to the specification.
>>> 
>>> Currently ("would would" has been fixed):
>>> We would also like to thank Amanda Baber,  Mike Bishop, Ralph Bragg,
>>> Brian Campbell, Deb Cooley, Gabriel Corona,  Roman Danyliw, Vladimir
>>> Dzhuvinov, George Fletcher, Arnt Gulbrandsen,  Pieter Kasselman,
>>> Murray Kucherawy, David Mandelberg, Tony Nadalin,  Francesca
>>> Palombini, John Scudder, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef, Filip Skokan,  Orie
>>> Steele, Atul Tulshibagwale, Éric Vyncke, Paul Wouters, and Bo Wu  for
>>> their contributions to the specification. -->
>>> 
>>> Looks good, thanks.
>>> 
>>> 26) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the
>>> online Style Guide at
>>> <https://www/.
>>> rfc-editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&data=05%7C
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>>> h1Lx7C3c%3D&reserved=0>, and let us know if any changes are needed.
>>> Updates of this nature typically result in more precise language,
>>> which is helpful for readers.
>>> 
>>> For example, please consider whether the following should be updated:
>>> 
>>> man-in-the-middle -->
>>> 
>>> We believe “man-in-the-middle” can be removed from the sentence without 
>>> affecting its meaning. Please do so.
>>> 
>>> 27) <!-- [rfced] The following terms were used inconsistently in this
>>> document.  We chose to use the latter forms.  Please let us know any
>>> objections.
>>> 
>>> Protected resource (1 instance) ("The Protected resource's") /
>>>  protected resource (108 instances)
>>> 
>>> Resource Identifier (1 instance in text) ("The protected resource's
>>>  Resource Identifier") / resource identifier (19 instances in text)
>>>  ("The protected resource's resource identifier") -->
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>> Thank you.
>>> 
>>> RFC Editor
>>> 
>>> 
>>> In this review, we also identified a mistake in an example. Please
>>> update the example in Section 5.1 as described in this pull request:
>>> https://githu/
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>>> 
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>>> 
>>> Thanks for the thorough review.
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 3:52 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>> 
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>>> 
>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
>>> 
>>> RFC Editor
>>> 
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC 9728 (draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata-13)
>>> 
>>> Title            : OAuth 2.0 Protected Resource Metadata
>>> Author(s)        : M.B. Jones, P. Hunt, A. Parecki
>>> WG Chair(s)      : Hannes Tschofenig, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
>>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
>>> 
>>> 
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