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1) <!--[rfced] May we update the short title that spans the header of the PDF file to more closely match the document title as shown below? Original: Related Certificates Perhaps: Related Certificates for Protocol Authentications --> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> 3) <!--[rfced] Please clarify "different to" in the following sentence. Is the intended meaning perhaps "different than"? Original: If the request for (new) Cert B is to a CA organization different to the CA organization that issued the certificate (existing) Cert A referenced in the CSR... Perhaps: If the request for (new) Cert B is to a CA organization that is different than the CA organization that issued the certificate (existing) Cert A referenced in the CSR... --> 4) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We have added a citation for the NIST SP mentioned in this sentence, with a corresponding reference entry in the informative reference section. Original: If the related certificate is a key establishment certificate (e.g., using RSA key transport or ECC key agreement), use the private key to sign one time for POP (as detailed in NIST SP 800-57 Part 1 Rev 5 Section 8.1.5.1.1.2) Current: If the related certificate is a key establishment certificate (e.g., using RSA key transport or Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) key agreement), use the private key to sign one time for proof of possession (POP) (as detailed in Section 8.1.5.1.1.2 of [NIST-SP-800-57]). --> 5) <!--[rfced] Is "mechanism" intended to be singular (perhaps A) or plural (perhaps B) in this sentence? And may we rephrase "have to be to the satisfaction of the verifier" to "have to be satisfactory to the verifier"? Original: The means and strength of mechanism for authentication have to be to the satisfaction of the verifier. Perhaps A: The means and strength of an authentication mechanism have to be to satisfactory to the verifier. Perhaps B: The means and strength of mechanisms for authentication have to be satisfactory to the verifier. --> 6) <!--[rfced] Can "and to assess that it got what it needed" be rephrased for clarity? Please let us know if the suggested text is agreeable or if you prefer otherwise. Original: For more promiscuous online protocols, like TLS, the ability for the verifier to express what is possible and what is preferred - and to assess that it got what it needed - is important. Perhaps: For more promiscuous online protocols, like TLS, the ability for the verifier to express what is possible and what is preferred - and to assess that its requirements were met - is important. --> 7) <!--[rfced] We updated "it may be advisable" to "it is advisable". If that is incorrect, please let us know. Original: CAs should be aware that retrieval of existing certificates may be subject to observation; if this is a concern, it may be advisable to use the dataURI option described in Section 3.1. Current: CAs should be aware that retrieval of existing certificates may be subject to observation; if this is a concern, it is advisable to use the dataURI option described in Section 3.1. --> 8) <!--[rfced] We have included a clarification about the IANA text below. In addition to responding to that question, please review all of the IANA-related updates carefully and let us know if any further updates are needed. a) FYI: For all three registrations, we replaced the OIDs enclosed in <artwork> with entries that exactly match the IANA registries at <https://www.iana.org/assignments/smi-numbers/>. One example Original: id-pe-relatedCert OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { id-pe TBD2 } Current: | Decimal | Description | References | +=========+===================+============+ | 36 | id-pe-relatedCert | RFC 9763 | --> 9) <!-- [rfced] We note that the "IssuerAndSerialNumber type" is mentioned in [RFC5912] and [RFC6268, and the "BinaryTime type" is mentioned in [RFC6019]. Considering that, may we update the following sentence for clarity as shown below? Original: It pulls definitions from modules defined in [RFC5912], and [RFC6268], and [RFC6019] for the IssuerAndSerialNumber type, and BinaryTime type, respectively. Perhaps: It pulls definitions from modules defined in [RFC5912] and [RFC6268] for the IssuerAndSerialNumber type and in [RFC6019] for the BinaryTime type. --> 10) <!-- [rfced] We updated artwork to sourcecode in Sections 3.1 and 4.1 and in Appendix A. Please confirm that this is correct. In addition, please consider whether the "type" attribute of any sourcecode element should be set and/or has been set correctly. The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types>. If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to suggest additions for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set. --> 11) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We have added expansions for the following abbreviations per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. Cryptographic Message Syntax (CMS) Certificate Signing Request (CSR) Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) extended key usage (EKU) Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2) key usage (KU) proof of possession (POP) (per NIST-SP-800-57) post-quantum (PQ) post-quantum cryptography (PQC) --> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers. For example, please consider whether "native" should be updated. In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated for clarity. While the NIST website <https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/ nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1> indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous. 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