Hi Magnus, Thank you for your review. We have updated the document (mostly) as described below and posted the revised files here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9751.xml https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9751.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9751.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9751.html
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We have cut resolved items from the list. > On Mar 7, 2025, at 4:59 AM, Magnus Westerlund > <magnus.westerlund=40ericsson....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > the title) for use on > https://eur02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch&data=05%7C02%7Cmagnus.westerlund%40ericsson.com%7C8ee01dc6487c4afb23ce08dd556262f7%7C92e84cebfbfd47abbe52080c6b87953f%7C0%7C0%7C638760605627392783%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=khPswFQKDdfavf4chOsFkPKg83eh837iZfOBU8dobpE%3D&reserved=0. > --> > > > MW: Are there any keywords you would like to include? > 3) <!-- [rfced] Is it correct that this document does not define "other > means"? If yes, perhaps the text should indicate this is out of scope, as > I expected this document to update the Media Types registry in some way to > account for this information. > > Original (prior sentence included for context): > This registry is not used for any purpose > other than to track which media types actually have RTP payload > formats. That purpose could be addressed through other means. > --> > > > Yes, declaring it out of scope could be a potential. We expect this to be > addressed as part of the update of the media type registration procedure work > in MediaMan WG which is ongoing. Rather than noting “other means” are out of scope, we updated the text to read as follows. Please let us know if any updates are desired. Current: This registry is not used for any purpose other than to track which media types actually have RTP payload formats, which can be done through other means. > 6) <!-- [rfced] What does "without affecting its status as part of an > informational RFC" mean? Also, the second sentence is incomplete. Please > clarify. > > Original: > This paragraph is > changed without affecting its status as part of an informational RFC. > Thus removing the need to register in the "RTP Payload Format media > types". > > Perhaps: > The following paragraph is > updated as shown below, thus removing the need for media types to be > registered in the "RTP Payload Format Media Types" registry. > --> > > > MW: > > The following paragraph is > updated as shown below, thus removing the need for media types to be > registered in the "RTP Payload Format Media Types" registry. Note that this > update does not impact the updated text and the rest of RFC 8088 status as > informational RFC. > > There was raised comments that was worried that due to RFC 9751 is standards > track this changed text would be elevated also to standards track. Thus, I > think we should retain some note, but I suggest a reformulation above. Thanks for this context. The text currently reads as follows. Please let us know if any updates are needed. The following paragraph is updated as shown below, thus removing the need for media types to be registered in the "RTP Payload Format Media Types" registry. Note that this update does not impact the rest of RFC 8088's status as an Informational RFC. Please review the above and let us know how you would like to proceed. We’ll wait to hear further from you before continuing with publication. Thanks Magnus! 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