Hi Megan, all, We're just checking with the RTP Compact Header Extensions expert before making this change. We'll follow up again once this is complete.
Thank you for your patience. Best regards, Sabrina Tanamal Lead IANA Services Specialist On Wed Feb 26 16:22:05 2025, mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org wrote: > IANA, > > Regarding this document’s entry at > https://www.iana.org/assignments/rtp-parameters/rtp-parameters.xhtml, > please update as follows to match the document: > > Old: > Extension URI: urn:ietf:params:rtp-hdrext:framemarkinginfo > > New: > Extension URI: urn:ietf:params:rtp-hdrext:framemarking > > Note also: We will update to use "registry" and "registry group" > instead of > "subregistry" and "registry” unless IANA has objection: > > Current: > This document defines a new extension URI listed in the "RTP > Compact > Header Extensions" subregistry of the "Real-Time Transport Protocol > (RTP) Parameters" registry, according to the following data: > > Perhaps: > This document defines a new extension URI listed in the "RTP > Compact > Header Extensions" registry of the "Real-Time Transport Protocol > (RTP) Parameters" registry group, according to the following data: > > Once we hear back from IANA resolving the above, this document will be > ready to move forward in the publication process. > > Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9626 > > Please see the AUTH48 status page for this cluster here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/C324 > > Thank you. > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > On Feb 26, 2025, at 8:58 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy > > <superu...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi Megan, > > > > Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe that's all the approvals > > outstanding? > > > > -MSK, ART AD > > > > On Thu, Feb 20, 2025 at 1:33 PM Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@staff.rfc- > > editor.org> wrote: > > Murray, > > > > Thank you for the quick reply and your help getting this AUTH48 > > restarted! We’ve recorded your approval here: > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9626 > > > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > > > > On Feb 20, 2025, at 1:56 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy > > > <superu...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > > > I've reviewed the comprehensive diff link and in particular the > > > various "D bit" changes. > > > > > > I approve those changes. > > > > > > -MSK, ART AD > > > > > > On Thu, Feb 20, 2025 at 11:21 AM Megan Ferguson > > > <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > Authors and *AD, > > > > > > Thank you for your replies. We have updated according to the > > > responses we have received thus far regarding the document-specific > > > and cluster-wide questions. > > > > > > 1) We believe the only outstanding issue remaining from all of > > > these questions is *AD approval of the following change to text > > > involving BCP 14 keywords: > > > > > > > Hi, > > > > > > > > For bullet 4 where AD opinion has been asked, I would first like > > > > to get the opinion from the authors if they are OK with the > > > > changes or not. > > > > > > > > So, Authors please review the proposed changes in bullet 4 and > > > > send your opinion. > > > > > > > > //Zahed > > > > > > > >> 4) <!--[rfced] [*AD] We see several (similar) sentences like the > > > >> example > > > >> below where it might be difficult for the reader to correclty > > > >> understand what part(s) of the sentence the keyword MUST > > > >> applies > > > >> to. We wonder if a rewrite may be helpful to the reader, > > > >> possibly using a list... Please see the example below > > > >> (again, > > > >> other similar instances exist in the document) and let us > > > >> know if > > > >> an update like one of the following might work. > > > >> > > > >> Original: > > > >> > > > >> The D bit MUST be 1 when the NAL unit header NRI field is 0, or > > > >> an > > > >> aggregation packet or fragmentation unit encapsulating only NAL > > > >> units > > > >> with NRI=0, otherwise it MUST be 0. > > > >> > > > >> Perhaps A (the "when" clause applies to both the D bit being set > > > >> to 1 or NRI=0): > > > >> > > > >> When the NAL unit header NRI field is 0, the D bit MUST be > > > >> either 1 or > > > >> an aggregation packet or fragmentation unit encapsulating only > > > >> NAL > > > >> units with NRI=0. When the NAL unit header NRI field is not set > > > >> to 0, > > > >> the D bit MUST be 0. > > > >> > > > >> Perhaps B (the "when" clause only applies to the D bit being 0): > > > >> > > > >> The D bit MUST be: > > > >> > > > >> -1 when the NAL unit header NRI field is 0, > > > >> > > > >> -an aggregation packet or fragmentation unit encapsulating only > > > >> NAL units > > > >> with NRI=0, or > > > >> > > > >> - 0. > > > > > > > > The D bit MUST be 1 if either: > > > > - The payload's NAL unit header’s NRI field is 0, or > > > > - The payload is an aggregation packet or fragmentation unit > > > > encapsulating only NAL units with NRI=0. > > > > Otherwise, it MUST be 0. > > > > > > 2) Please further note that the URN change to the IANA registry > > > that Justin mentioned will be communicated to IANA once AUTH48 > > > completes. > > > > > > Old: > > > urn:ietf:params:rtp-hdrext:framemarkinginfo > > > > > > New: > > > urn:ietf:params:rtp-hdrext:framemarking > > > > > > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after > > > publication. > > > > > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.txt > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.pdf > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.html > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.xml > > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626-diff.html > > > (comprehensive diff) > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626-auth48diff.html > > > (AUTH48 changes only) > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626-lastdiff.html (last > > > to current version only) > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626-lastrfcdiff.html > > > (last to current side by side) > > > > > > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you > > > may have. > > > > > > We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the > > > AUTH48 status page prior to moving forward to publication. > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9626 > > > > > > Thank you. > > > > > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > > > > On Feb 19, 2025, at 10:24 PM, Mo Zanaty (mzanaty) > > > > <mzan...@cisco.com> wrote: > > > > > > > > A few changes needed. All the rest looks good. > > > > > > > > 3.1: memo -> document > > > > > > > > 3.3.2: replace this sentence: > > > > OLD: “These ranges cover non-reference frames as well as filler > > > > data.” > > > > with this: (from 3.3.3/3.3.4) > > > > NEW: “The NRI = 0 condition signals non-reference frames.” > > > > > > > > 3.3.3: add “(DID)” and “(QID)” in the first sentence: > > > > “…spatial/dependency layer (DID)…” > > > > “…quality layer (QID)…” > > > > > > > > Thanks, > > > > Mo > > > > > > > > From: Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > > > Sent: Wednesday, February 19, 2025 2:49 PM > > > > To: Espen Berger (espeberg) <espeb...@cisco.com>; Suhas > > > > Nandakumar (snandaku) <snand...@cisco.com>; Mo Zanaty (mzanaty) > > > > <mzan...@cisco.com> > > > > Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; avtcore-...@ietf.org > > > > <avtcore-...@ietf.org>; avtcore-cha...@ietf.org <avtcore- > > > > cha...@ietf.org>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > > > <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; Jonathan Lennox > > > > <jonathan.len...@8x8.com>; Murray S. Kucherawy > > > > <superu...@gmail.com> > > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9626 <draft-ietf-avtext- > > > > framemarking-16> for your review > > > > > > > > Authors, > > > > > > > > Thank you for your replies to our queries! > > > > > > > > We have updated our files accordingly with your responses to both > > > > the document-specific and cluster-wide questions we have received > > > > to date. Please review these updates carefully as we do not > > > > make changes once the document is published as an RFC. Please > > > > pay particular attention to our updates to Section 3.3.2 as we > > > > are unsure if this was your intent. > > > > > > > > Note that we will await the following prior to moving forward in > > > > the publication process: > > > > -resolution of outstanding cluster-wide queries (see separate > > > > email thread) > > > > -approvals from each author > > > > > > > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.txt > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.pdf > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.html > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626.xml > > > > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626-diff.html > > > > (comprehensive diff) > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9626-auth48diff.html > > > > (AUTH48 changes only) > > > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9626 > > > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this cluster is available here: > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/C324 > > > > > > > > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you > > > > may have. > > > > > > > > Thank you. > > > > > > > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > > > > > > On Feb 18, 2025, at 12:39 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy > > > > > <superu...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > > > > > > > Thanks, that's all three authors. Good stuff. > > > > > > > > > > But DON'T GO ANYWHERE! The RFC Editor will probably now > > > > > produce a proposed final version and that too will need all > > > > > three of you to approve before it can move forward to > > > > > publication. Please keep checking this thread (and your inbox > > > > > generally) until this process is done. > > > > > > > > > > -MSK > > > > > > > > > > On Tue, Feb 18, 2025 at 2:38 PM Espen Berger (espeberg) > > > > > <espeb...@cisco.com> wrote: > > > > > I agree with Mo's comments. > > > > > > > > > > -Espen > > > > > > > > > > From: Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku) <snand...@cisco.com> > > > > > Sent: Tuesday, February 18, 2025 20:20 > > > > > To: Mo Zanaty (mzanaty) <mzan...@cisco.com>; RFC Editor <rfc- > > > > > edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Espen Berger (espeberg) > > > > > <espeb...@cisco.com> > > > > > Cc: avtcore-...@ietf.org <avtcore-...@ietf.org>; avtcore- > > > > > cha...@ietf.org <avtcore-cha...@ietf.org>; superu...@gmail.com > > > > > <superu...@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > > > > <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; Jonathan Lennox > > > > > <jonathan.len...@8x8.com> > > > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9626 <draft-ietf-avtext- > > > > > framemarking-16> for your review > > > > > > > > > > Thanks Mo for addressing the questions. After perusing it , I > > > > > agree with Mo's responses. > > > > > > > > > > Cheers > > > > > Suhas > > > > > From: Mo Zanaty (mzanaty) <mzan...@cisco.com> > > > > > Sent: Tuesday, February 18, 2025 11:11 AM > > > > > To: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Espen Berger > > > > > (espeberg) <espeb...@cisco.com>; Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku) > > > > > <snand...@cisco.com> > > > > > Cc: avtcore-...@ietf.org <avtcore-...@ietf.org>; avtcore- > > > > > cha...@ietf.org <avtcore-cha...@ietf.org>; superu...@gmail.com > > > > > <superu...@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > > > > <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; Jonathan Lennox > > > > > <jonathan.len...@8x8.com> > > > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9626 <draft-ietf-avtext- > > > > > framemarking-16> for your review > > > > > > > > > > Suhas, Espen, > > > > > > > > > > Please reply to this email indicating whether you agree with > > > > > all my responses below, or provide your responses if you > > > > > disagree. > > > > > > > > > > Thanks, > > > > > Mo > > > > > > > > > > From: Mo Zanaty (mzanaty) <mzan...@cisco.com> > > > > > Sent: Thursday, February 13, 2025 11:54 PM > > > > > To: Jonathan Lennox <jonathan.len...@8x8.com>; RFC Editor <rfc- > > > > > edi...@rfc-editor.org> > > > > > Cc: Espen Berger (espeberg) <espeb...@cisco.com>; Suhas > > > > > Nandakumar (snandaku) <snand...@cisco.com>; avtcore- > > > > > a...@ietf.org <avtcore-...@ietf.org>; avtcore-cha...@ietf.org > > > > > <avtcore-cha...@ietf.org>; superu...@gmail.com > > > > > <superu...@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > > > > <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > > > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9626 <draft-ietf-avtext- > > > > > framemarking-16> for your review > > > > > > > > > > See Mo: inline for responses specific to frame marking. > > > > > Apologies for the delay. I thought Jonathan’s responses to the > > > > > cluster-wide questions (C324 FM, LRR, VP9), which we discussed > > > > > together in November as he noted in his response, were > > > > > sufficient to progress the cluster. To be clear, I agree with > > > > > all his responses, as we discussed and agreed on this together > > > > > prior to his response. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > From: Jonathan Lennox <jonathan.len...@8x8.com> > > > > > Sent: Friday, February 7, 2025 4:05 PM > > > > > To: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> > > > > > Cc: Mo Zanaty (mzanaty) <mzan...@cisco.com>; Espen Berger > > > > > (espeberg) <espeb...@cisco.com>; Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku) > > > > > <snand...@cisco.com>; avtcore-...@ietf.org <avtcore- > > > > > a...@ietf.org>; avtcore-cha...@ietf.org <avtcore- > > > > > cha...@ietf.org>; superu...@gmail.com <superu...@gmail.com>; > > > > > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > > > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9626 <draft-ietf-avtext- > > > > > framemarking-16> for your review > > > > > > > > > > I’m not an author on this draft, but as chair I thought I would > > > > > try to answer these questions, to make sure the process could > > > > > get done. I spoke with Mo about these issues in Dublin and I > > > > > think he’ll agree with all of these. Mo, please correct me if > > > > > I’ve misunderstood anything. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Thanks, Jonathan. Yes, I agree with all these. > > > > > > > > > > > On Aug 13, 2024, at 12:27 AM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org > > > > > > wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > Authors and *AD, > > > > > > > > > > > > [AD - please see question 4 below] > > > > > > > > > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve > > > > > > (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the > > > > > > XML file. > > > > > > > > > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that > > > > > > appear in > > > > > > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > > > > > > > > > > Scalable video, h.264, h.265, vp9, layered video > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed. > > > > > > > > > > > 2) <!--[rfced] Please review whether "e.g." in the following > > > > > > should > > > > > > instead be "i.e.": > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Because of inter-frame dependencies, it should ideally switch > > > > > > video > > > > > > streams at a point where the first frame from the new speaker > > > > > > can be > > > > > > decoded by recipients without prior frames, e.g. switch on an > > > > > > intra-frame. > > > > > > > > > > An intra frame is the most common situation where a stream can > > > > > be decoded without prior frames, but there are others for some > > > > > codecs, so I think e.g. is appropriate here. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, keep e.g., or expand as ‘for example’ at the > > > > > editor’s discretion. > > > > > > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 3) <!--[rfced] Should "field" or some other noun follow > > > > > > "refresh_frame_flags" in this sentence? Or is this > > > > > > referring to > > > > > > the flags (as the verb "are" is plural)? > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > The D bit MUST be 1 if the refresh_frame_flags in the VP9 > > > > > > payload > > > > > > uncompressed header are all 0, otherwise it MUST be 0. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > I think “refresh_frame_flags bits" > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, append ‘bits’ at the editor’s discretion if it > > > > > helps clarify, although I see no reader confusion without it. > > > > > Do not append ‘field’ as that would also require changing ‘are > > > > > all 0’ to ‘is equal to 0’ which is confusing for a field of > > > > > separate flags that are not treated as a single numeric value. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 4) <!--[rfced] [*AD] We see several (similar) sentences like > > > > > > the example > > > > > > below where it might be difficult for the reader to > > > > > > correclty > > > > > > understand what part(s) of the sentence the keyword MUST > > > > > > applies > > > > > > to. We wonder if a rewrite may be helpful to the reader, > > > > > > possibly using a list... Please see the example below > > > > > > (again, > > > > > > other similar instances exist in the document) and let us > > > > > > know if > > > > > > an update like one of the following might work. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > > > > > > > The D bit MUST be 1 when the NAL unit header NRI field is 0, > > > > > > or an > > > > > > aggregation packet or fragmentation unit encapsulating only > > > > > > NAL units > > > > > > with NRI=0, otherwise it MUST be 0. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps A (the "when" clause applies to both the D bit being > > > > > > set to 1 or NRI=0): > > > > > > > > > > > > When the NAL unit header NRI field is 0, the D bit MUST be > > > > > > either 1 or > > > > > > an aggregation packet or fragmentation unit encapsulating > > > > > > only NAL > > > > > > units with NRI=0. When the NAL unit header NRI field is not > > > > > > set to 0, > > > > > > the D bit MUST be 0. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps B (the "when" clause only applies to the D bit being > > > > > > 0): > > > > > > > > > > > > The D bit MUST be: > > > > > > > > > > > > -1 when the NAL unit header NRI field is 0, > > > > > > > > > > > > -an aggregation packet or fragmentation unit encapsulating > > > > > > only NAL units > > > > > > with NRI=0, or > > > > > > > > > > > > - 0. > > > > > > > > > > The D bit MUST be 1 if either: > > > > > - The payload's NAL unit header’s NRI field is 0, or > > > > > - The payload is an aggregation packet or fragmentation unit > > > > > encapsulating only NAL units with NRI=0. > > > > > Otherwise, it MUST be 0. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, this makes the or conditions clear. At the editor’s > > > > > discretion, if bullets interrupt the reading flow, it is > > > > > equally clear to put the or conditions as inline text prefaced > > > > > with labels 1), 2), a), b), etc. Please use the chosen style > > > > > for all similar sentences. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in > > > > > > this document > > > > > > should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a > > > > > > container for > > > > > > content that is semantically less important or tangential to > > > > > > the > > > > > > content that surrounds it" > > > > > > (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside). > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Both the two “Note:” comments could be <aside> elements. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, both notes could be <aside> elements, assuming that > > > > > renders in all target formats without hiding. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 6) <!--[rfced] May we update this sentence as follows for the > > > > > > ease of the > > > > > > reader? Note that the introductory "when" phrase > > > > > > mentions a > > > > > > single frame while the recommendation mentions plural > > > > > > frames: > > > > > > please consider if further updates are necessary. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > When an RTP switch needs to discard a received video frame > > > > > > due to > > > > > > congestion control considerations, it is RECOMMENDED that it > > > > > > preferably drop frames marked with the D (Discardable) bit > > > > > > set, or the > > > > > > highest values of TID and LID, which indicate the highest > > > > > > temporal and > > > > > > spatial/quality enhancement layers, since those typically > > > > > > have fewer > > > > > > dependenices on them than lower layers. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps A: > > > > > > When an RTP switch needs to discard a received video frame > > > > > > due to > > > > > > congestion control considerations, it is RECOMMENDED that it > > > > > > drop: > > > > > > > > > > > > - frames marked with the D (Discardable) bit set, or > > > > > > > > > > > > -frames with the highest values of TID and LID (which > > > > > > indicate the > > > > > > highest temporal and spatial/quality enhancement layers) > > > > > > since those > > > > > > typically have fewer dependencies on them than lower layers. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps B (to upddate the sg/pl switch): > > > > > > When an RTP switch needs to discard received video frames due > > > > > > to > > > > > > congestion control considerations, it is RECOMMENDED that it > > > > > > drop: > > > > > > > > > > > > - frames marked with the D (Discardable) bit set, or > > > > > > > > > > > > -frames with the highest values of TID and LID (which > > > > > > indicate the > > > > > > highest temporal and spatial/quality enhancement layers) > > > > > > since those > > > > > > typically have fewer dependencies on them than lower layers. > > > > > > > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > I’m missing something here because I don’t see the difference > > > > > between these two options, but that text is fine. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Option B with plural frames sounds best. > > > > > > > > > > > 7) <!--[rfced] Please clarify what "and forward the same" > > > > > > means in this text. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > When an RTP switch wants to forward a new video stream to a > > > > > > receiver, > > > > > > it is RECOMMENDED to select the new video stream from the > > > > > > first > > > > > > switching point with the I (Independent) bit set in all > > > > > > spatial > > > > > > layers and forward the same. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps “and forward the stream from that point on”. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, and perhaps ‘video stream’ not just ‘stream’, and > > > > > ‘switching point’ not just ‘point’, depending on the editor’s > > > > > discretion of clarity versus verbosity. > > > > > > > > > > > 8) <!--[rfced] How may we update this text to more easily > > > > > > illustrate the > > > > > > 1:1 mapping between initialism and expansion? > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > ... source to generate a switching point by sending Full > > > > > > Intra > > > > > > Request (RTCP FIR) as defined in [RFC5104]... > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > > > > ... source to generate a switching point by sending RTCP > > > > > > Full Intra > > > > > > Request (FIR) as defined in [RFC5104]... > > > > > > > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > That’s fine. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 9) <!--[rfced] In the following, are "layer" and "refreshes" > > > > > > redundant > > > > > > with what LRR stands for? Please let us know if any > > > > > > updates are > > > > > > necessary. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Because frame marking can only be used with temporally- > > > > > > nested > > > > > > streams, temporal-layer LRR refreshes are unnecessary for > > > > > > frame- > > > > > > marked streams. > > > > > > > > > > > > As expanded it would be: > > > > > > Because frame marking can only be used with temporally > > > > > > nested > > > > > > streams, temporal-layer Layer Refresh Request (LRR) > > > > > > refreshes are > > > > > > unnecessary for frame-marked streams. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps “temporal-layer refreshes requested with an LRR > > > > > message” would avoid the duplicative language? > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, Jonathan’s wording sounds best. > > > > > > > > > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the references to be > > > > > > alphabetized or left > > > > > > in their current order? > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > This is something where the RFC Editor’s style guide should > > > > > dictate, I don’t think there’s any particular preference for a > > > > > specific reference order. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed. The authors have no order preference. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] We had the following questions related to > > > > > > abbreviations > > > > > > used throughout the document. > > > > > > > > > > > > a) Please note that we have expanded these abbreviations as > > > > > > follows on > > > > > > first use. Please let us know any objections. > > > > > > > > > > > > MCU - Multipoint Control Unit (per RFC 7667) > > > > > > SRTP - Secure Real-time Transport Protocol > > > > > > IDR - Instantaneous Decoding Refresh (per RFC 6184) > > > > > > SDES - source description > > > > > > NAL - Network Abstraction Layer > > > > > > CRA - Clean Random Access > > > > > > BLA - Broken Link Access > > > > > > RAP - Random Access Point > > > > > > AVC - Advanced Video Coidng (per RFC 6184) > > > > > > SVC - Scalable Video Coding (per RFC 6190) > > > > > > PACSI - Payload Content Scalability Information > > > > > > NRI - Network Remote Identification > > > > > > > > > > No; the field in the H.264 specification is actually formally > > > > > named “nal_ref_idc”. I believe this stands for something like > > > > > Network Adaptation Layer Reference Indication but as far as I > > > > > can tell it’s never explicitly spelled out in that > > > > > specification as far as I can tell. > > > > > > > > > > > VPS - Video Parameter Set > > > > > > SPS - Sequence Parameter Set > > > > > > PPS - Picture Parameter Set > > > > > > > > > > The other abbreviations all seem to be correct. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, all correct, except NRI is NAL Reference > > > > > Indication. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > b) Please clarify if/how we may expand the following > > > > > > abbreviations: > > > > > > > > > > > > VPX > > > > > > PACI - is this intentionally different from PACSI? > > > > > > > > > > Yes; the protocol element field is called PACI in RFC 7798 (for > > > > > H.265) vs. PACSI in RFC 6190 (for H.264-SVC). > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed on PACI. VPX denotes VP8/VP9. > > > > > > > > > > > c) Should "intra (IDR)" frames instead be "IDR intra-frames"? > > > > > > This > > > > > > formation occurs twice in this document. > > > > > > > > > > Intra frames are the common term, IDR is the more formal term, > > > > > so this is a clarification with two synonymous terms, not a > > > > > restrictive adjective. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, keep the original text. Intra, IDR, Independent, > > > > > and Keyframe are synonymous terms that appear in various video > > > > > standards. Unfortunately, there is no alignment on a single > > > > > term across all video standards. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > d) Please note that the following similar abbreviations > > > > > > appear to be > > > > > > differently treated with regard to punctuation: > > > > > > > > > > > > H264 (AVC) > > > > > > H264-SVC > > > > > > > > > > > > We have expanded the abbreviations on first use, but please > > > > > > let us > > > > > > know if/how these should be made uniform with regard to > > > > > > parens and > > > > > > hyphantion. > > > > > > > > > > > > See also our cluster-wide question regarding H264 vs. H.264. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > Names of ITU specs (H.264 and H.265) should include the dot > > > > > character. > > > > > > > > > > AVC and SVC are not parallel; AVC is the title of the H.264 > > > > > specification as a whole, whereas SVC refers specifically to > > > > > the extensions to it specified in Annex F. Thus the > > > > > parentheses for the former (as an explanatory synonym) vs. the > > > > > hyphen for the latter (as a restriction). > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Please keep the exact original text. These refer to the RTP > > > > > payload format names (SDP a=rtpmap name) registered in RFC 6184 > > > > > for H264 (AVC for clarification) and RFC 6190 for H264-SVC (no > > > > > parenthesis because it’s part of the actual name not a > > > > > clarification). Dots are used when referring to the underlying > > > > > ITU specs, not the RTP formats. > > > > > > > > > > > 12) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to > > > > > > terminology used > > > > > > throughout the document. > > > > > > > > > > > > a) Two questions about the header extension: > > > > > > > > > > > > Should this RTP header extension appear using "Video" > > > > > > throughout? We > > > > > > see both of the following forms. > > > > > > > > > > > > Video Frame Marking RTP header extension vs. Frame Marking > > > > > > RTP header extension > > > > > > > > > > Yes, I think having Video throughout is good. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, video throughout. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Secondly, in the Abstract, we see: > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > This document describes a Video Frame Marking RTP header > > > > > > extension > > > > > > used to convey information about video frames that is > > > > > > critical for > > > > > > error recovery and packet forwarding in RTP middleboxes or > > > > > > network > > > > > > nodes. > > > > > > > > > > > > Is the use of the indefinite article "a" intentional ("a > > > > > > Video Frame > > > > > > Marking RTP header extension")? This seems (possibly) > > > > > > contradictory > > > > > > with the capitalization of the proper noun and use in Section > > > > > > 3 (are > > > > > > there more types of Video Frame Marking RTP header > > > > > > extensions?). > > > > > > Please review. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > There certainly are other RTP header extensions that mark video > > > > > frames, though none of them have been standardized by the IETF > > > > > as yet; I think that’s why there is the indefinite article > > > > > here. > > > > > > > > > > Mo: Agreed, keep the original text with ‘a’. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" > > > > > > portion of the > > > > > > online Style Guide > > > > > > <https://www.rfc- > > > > > > editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > > > > > > and let us know if any changes are needed. 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