> B) Section 3 Your changes are fine.
> B.2) The bullets refer to "Private or Experimental Use”. We assume this > refers to "experimentation and development” mentioned in the notes for the > ref ID codes and kiss codes registries. However, the extension field types > registry doesn’t mention “Private Use” - should it? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r51XmKajDX4 :) Change either one as long as they are consistent. On 2/21/25, 5:01 PM, "Sandy Ginoza" <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org <mailto:sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>> wrote: !-------------------------------------------------------------------| This Message Is From an External Sender This message came from outside your organization. |-------------------------------------------------------------------! Hi Rich, Thank you for your quick reply! We have update the document per your replies below, and we have a few followup questions below. 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Please let us know if any updates are desired. > **RSALZ: Sure, use a real value like you suggested. I thought it would be > more clear to but if it's confusing, please make your change. Original: * Many of the entries in the Extension Field Types registry have swapped some of the nibbles; 0x1234 is listed as 0x1432 for example. Current: * Many of the entries in the "NTP Extension Field Types" registry have swapped some of the nibbles; for example, 0x0302 was listed for Cookie Message Request instead of 0x0203. B) Section 3 B.1) The first and second bullet are related. We would like to update the text to refer to the specific registry names. In addition, we propose a slight update to the format of section 3. Please see the proposed updates in this test file and let us know if they are acceptable. https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9748-test2.html <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9748-test2.html>*section-3__;Iw!!GjvTz_vk!TYJzc65Eh4bQpv8UN07sbIeVR-MC4-MtSM8A39G0aVjFvpWY8CGxH9akn4twc6ydeO2kQ6ElxK5PV0NmFzyW2A$ B.2) The bullets refer to "Private or Experimental Use”. We assume this refers to "experimentation and development” mentioned in the notes for the ref ID codes and kiss codes registries. 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Thank you! RFC Editor/sg > On Feb 21, 2025, at 10:28 AM, Salz, Rich <rsalz=40akamai....@dmarc.ietf.org > <mailto:40akamai....@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: > > **RSALZ: Comments from me indicated like this. > > **RSALZ: Summary: all your suggested changes are fine. > > 1) <!-- [rfced] May we update this text for clarity? Note that it appears > in the Abstract and the Introduction. > > > Original: > Some registries have wrong values, some registries do not follow > current common practice, and some are just right. For the sake of > completeness, this document reviews all NTP and NTS registries, and > makes updates where necessary. > > > Perhaps: > Some registries are correct, but some include incorrect assignments > and some don’t follow common practice. For the sake of completeness, > this document reviews all NTP and NTS registries, and corrects the > registries where necessary. > --> > > **RSALZ: Yes, this is fine. > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] To better align with the text in section 2 and for clarity, > may we update the text as follows? > > > Original: > The bulk of this document can be divided into two parts: > > > * First, each registry, its defining document, and a summary of its > syntax is defined. > > > * Second, the revised format and entries for each registry that is > being modified is specified. > > > > > Perhaps: > The bulk of this document can be divided into two parts: > > > * a summary of the relevant registries, including syntax requirements, > registration procedures, and the defining documents. > > > * a revised format and entries for each registry > being modified. > --> > > **RSALZ: Yes, this is fine. > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] As we believe "these" refers to the code points (not the > registries), may we update the text as described below? Also, are the > codes 4 ASCII characters or are they allowed to be up to 4 ASCII > characters? > > > Original: > Both of these are allowed to > be four ASCII characters; padded on the right with all-bits-zero if > necessary. > > > Perhaps: > Reference identifiers and kiss codes can be up to four ASCII characters, > padded on the right with all-bits-zero if necessary. > --> > > **RSALZ: You are right, up to four. So a KISS CODE of BYE would be 42 59 45 > 0x00 > > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] Because the registries were created (i.e., it's no longer a > request), we updated the text as follows. 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