Hi Xufeng, Is it that your current employer does not want an affiliation with this (or any) IETF documents? One solution could be that you're listed as an individual co-author (no company affiliation).
Jeffrey Juniper Business Use Only -----Original Message----- From: Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> Sent: Wednesday, February 5, 2025 2:46 PM To: Xufeng Liu <xufeng.liu.i...@gmail.com>; Bruno Rijsman <brunorijs...@gmail.com>; wei.yue...@zte.com.cn; ext-zhang.zh...@zte.com.cn <zhang.zh...@zte.com.cn>; mashao...@gmail.com Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; rift-...@ietf.org; rift-cha...@ietf.org; Jordan Head <jh...@juniper.net>; James Guichard <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>; auth48archive@rfc-ed <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9719 <draft-ietf-rift-yang-17> for your review [External Email. Be cautious of content] Hi Xufeng, Thank you for informing us of the situation. If removing your name as an author is needed, would you like to be listed as a contributor (it would mean adding a Contributors section) or mentioned in the Acknowledgements section? Please note that we are currently waiting on approval from Shaowen Ma as well. We can check in with you to see how the process is going once we hear from Shaowen. Thank you, RFC Editor/mc > On Feb 4, 2025, at 7:51 PM, Xufeng Liu <xufeng.liu.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi Madison, > > Sorry for the delay. I recently changed my employment, and the new employer > has different policies. I am still trying to go through the process, but it > is slow. To unblock the publication process, I'd like to remove myself from > the author list. Sorry for the inconvenience. > > Thanks, > - Xufeng > > On Tue, Jan 28, 2025 at 10:29 AM Madison Church > <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi Shaowen and Xufeng, > > This is a reminder that we have yet to hear back from you regarding this > document’s readiness for publication. > > Please review the AUTH48 status page > (https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9719__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5vLI3PIEg$ > ) for further information and the previous messages in this thread. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/mc > > > On Jan 21, 2025, at 11:44 AM, Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > wrote: > > > > Hi Yuehua and Bruno, > > > > Thank you both for your replies. We have noted your approval and > > incorporated our edits into the updated files below per Bruno’s guidance. > > In addition to our updates, note that we also added <em> tags to italicize > > term "ThreeWay" for consistency with RFCs 9692 and 9696. > > > > The updated files have been posted here (please refresh): > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9719.txt__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5sG1irukA$ > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9719.pdf__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5vX_l0l4g$ > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9719.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5tGe1X-Ng$ > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc97 > > 19.xml__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mV > > Z6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5shGew8YA$ > > > > The updated diffs have been posted here: > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9719-diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5vJjrFaUQ$ > > (comprehensive diff) > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9719-rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5sX8aD9tA$ > > (side by side) > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9719-auth48diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5u_hrHeog$ > > (AUTH48 changes only) > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc97 > > 19-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vp > > ma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5ulV7CH4g$ (side > > by side) > > > > The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are here: > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc971 > > 9__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5 > > c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5u8aKH7yQ$ > > > > Once we receive approvals from Shaowen and Xufeng, we will move this > > document forward in the publication process. > > > > Thank you! > > RFC Editor/mc > > > >> On Jan 16, 2025, at 11:04 PM, Bruno Rijsman <brunorijs...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> > >> Dear RFC editors, > >> > >> Thank you very much for your careful review and final edits. > >> > >> I have carefully reviewed all the changes in the diff, and I agree with > >> them. > >> > >> I also agree with your suggested changes to fix the comments in items #1 > >> through #11 below, and I have read the style guide mentioned in #12. > >> > >> I approve this RFC for publication. > >> > >> Also my sincere thanks to the co-authors for their work on this document. > >> > >> — Bruno Rijsman > >> > >>> On Jan 16, 2025, at 3:14 AM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote: > >>> > >>> Authors, > >>> > >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > >>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>> > >>> 1) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the abbreviated title (which > >>> appears in the running header of the PDF) as follows. Please let us know > >>> if you prefer otherwise. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> RIFT YANG Model > >>> > >>> Current: > >>> RIFT YANG Data Model > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 2) <!-- [rfced] The Terminology section (Section 3.1) states that > >>> terms and their definitions are copied from RFC 9692. However, we > >>> note that definitions in this section contain a mix of sentences > >>> directly from RFC 9692, paraphrased sentences from RFC 9692, as > >>> well as mirrored definitions missing words throughout. If there > >>> are no objections, we will revise the Terminology section in this > >>> document to accurately reflect the definitions that appear in RFC 9692. > >>> Please let us know any concerns. > >>> > >>> For example: > >>> > >>> "TIE" in RFC 9692 (Original): > >>> This is an acronym for a "Topology Information Element". TIEs are > >>> exchanged between RIFT nodes to describe parts of a network such > >>> as links and address prefixes. A TIE has always a direction and a > >>> type. North TIEs (sometimes abbreviated as N-TIEs) are used when > >>> dealing with TIEs in the northbound representation and South-TIEs > >>> (sometimes abbreviated as S-TIEs) for the southbound equivalent. TIEs > >>> have different types such as node and prefix TIEs. > >>> > >>> "TIE" in this document (Original): > >>> "Topology Information Element" are exchanged between RIFT nodes to > >>> describe parts of a network such as links and address prefixes. A > >>> TIE has always a direction and a type. North TIEs (sometimes > >>> abbreviated as N-TIEs) are used when dealing with TIEs in the > >>> northbound representation and South-TIEs (sometimes abbreviated as > >>> S-TIEs) for the southbound equivalent. TIEs have different types such as > >>> node and prefix TIEs. > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 3) <!--[rfced] We note that the following paragraph appears in > >>> Sections 2.1 and 2.3. To avoid repetition, may we remove the > >>> duplicate text from one section or the other? > >>> > >>> Original (Sections 2.1 and 2.3): > >>> The RIFT YANG module augments the > >>> /routing/control-plane-protocols/ control-plane-protocol path > >>> defined in the ietf-routing module. This model augments the > >>> routing module to add RIFT as a control plane protocol. It then > >>> offers the ability to create a list of instances, which it does by > >>> declaring 'list rift'. Multiple instances of the protocol are > >>> supported by the module by giving each instance a unique name. > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 4) <!--[rfced] FYI, we corrected 'sourth' to 'south' (3 instances). > >>> > >>> From the original: > >>> 465: | | +-ro total-num-routes-sourth? > >>> 2418: leaf total-num-routes-sourth { > >>> 2422: "The total number of sourth routes."; > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 5) <!-- [rfced] We note that Section 6.3.9 of RFC 9692 is titled > >>> "Northbound TIE Flooding Reduction". May we rephrase as follows? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> Some features can be used to enhance protocol, such as BFD > >>> [RFC5881], flooding-reducing section 6.3.9 [I-D.ietf-rift-rift]. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> Some features can be used to enhance protocols, such as BFD > >>> [RFC5881], with flooding reduction (Section 6.3.9 of [RFC9692]). > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 6) <!--[rfced] May we rephrase this sentence as follows for clarity? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> Unexpected TIE and neighbor's layer error should be notified. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> Unexpected TIE and neighbor layer errors should be notified. > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 7) <!--[rfced] We have received guidance from Benoit Claise and > >>> the YANG Doctors that "YANG module" and "YANG data model" are preferred. > >>> We have updated the title of Section 3 accordingly. Please review > >>> usage of "YANG model" within this document. > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 8) <!--[rfced] In the YANG module, please clarify "system id using > >>> pattern" > >>> in the description of system-id. (In text as "System ID" to match > >>> RFC-to-be 9692.) > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> description > >>> "This type defines RIFT system id using pattern, > >>> the system id looks like: 0021.2FFF.FEB5.6E10"; > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> description > >>> "This type defines the pattern for RIFT System IDs. > >>> An example of a System ID is 0021.2FFF.FEB5.6E10."; > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 9) <!--[rfced] Please note that the YANG module has been updated > >>> per the formatting option of pyang. Please let us know any concerns. > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 10) <!--[rfced] Section 4. The text has been updated to exactly > >>> match the template for YANG module security considerations > >>> (https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-security-guidelines__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!BYLSY0QMaMmHmCqNoQkWZdGaw_s3Vpma7-KiRG71YH5mVZ6sp5c4hCkv6hmHhC0CwPshI2iOMwl9gFgmP5v8aiXi-w$ > >>> ). 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