Unfortunately urldefense has made such a dog's dinner that it's almost impossible to review the changes in this email.
Instead I reviewed the diffs: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-diff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9710-rfcdiff.html My comments in blue, with quoting in black, red, and green. Section 4, title: 4. Update the Description Descriptions in the IANA Registry Is it sufficiently clear which registry this refers to? Given the comments below, should it say Update the Descriptions in the "IPFIX Information Elements" Registry or similar? Section 5, first paragraph and Table 1: "EltID" is short for "ElementID".) "ID" would be better. Table 1, last entry (346) https://www.iana.org/assignments/ A leading [ is missing from this URL. Compare it with the rows above. 6.22.2. NEW Values are listed in the "mibCaptureTimeSemantics (Value 448)" registry. Additional Information: Values are listed in the "mibCaptureTimeSemantics (Value 448)" registry. To avoid repeating this text, and for consistency with 6.23.2. and 6.24.2, change the "Additional Information" to: See the "mibCaptureTimeSemantics (Value 448)" registry [https://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix]. 10.2. Informative References Please sort the RFCs numerically rather than alphabetically, so that 768 and 791 come first. P. On 27/01/25 17:05, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> wrote: Hi all, 5. Point to An Existing IANA Registry (adding Paul (DE), fwiw) Thank you for sharing the edited version. Please see inline. I let Benoît (and Paul) further comment as appropriate. Cheers, Med -----Message d'origine----- De : rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org><mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> Envoyé : vendredi 24 janvier 2025 20:28 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com><mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; benoit.cla...@huawei.com<mailto:benoit.cla...@huawei.com> Cc : i...@iana.org<mailto:i...@iana.org>; rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; opsawg- a...@ietf.org<mailto:a...@ietf.org>; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg-cha...@ietf.org>; thomas.g...@swisscom.com<mailto:thomas.g...@swisscom.com>; mjethanand...@gmail.com<mailto:mjethanand...@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9710 <draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix- fixes-12> for your review [resending with IANA CC'ed as intended.] Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) <!-- [rfced] Regarding the NEW text that appears throughout this document, we have updated it to include the registry name followed by the URL to the registry group. Based on discussion with IANA, this was the preferred way to refer to these registries in the RFC. Note that the extended URLs remain in the OLD text, as it does not matter if these links cease to work in the future (they are marked OLD). For example: Section 6.2.2 Original: Additional Information: See the Classification Engine IDs registry ([https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F__;JSU!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WJ8leu_Y$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] %2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.b oucadair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a2 0af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098216920%7CUnknown %7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOi JXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=wq9 9btmlG0W3ycYItq2iJe%2BdwNsgV9taHEVaehZZx5I%3D&reserved=0 ipfix.xhtml#classification-engine-ids]). Current: Additional Information: See the "Classification Engine IDs (Value 101)" registry [https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WDhniwjZ$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] 2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.bouca dair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af3 4b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098231699%7CUnknown%7CT WFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW 4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=GmzQ%2B t%2BJvct8Y9lKN%2F5WfQvzaMLKK9YoV5n%2ByF9vXck%3D&reserved=0]. --> [Med] Works for me. Thanks. 2) <!--[rfced] FYI, similarly Table 1 has been updated to use the registry name and the URL without the URI fragment, per IANA's preference for RFCs. For example: "Additional Information" for 33 igmpType. Original I-D: https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WKiOgGl4$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%4 0orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af34b40bf bc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098240525%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZ sb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIs IkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=xBp%2F3SChrFi %2Bt6phY2PO40s5lrVrZequtIKJRnuDjJU%3D&reserved=0 igmp-type-numbers/igmp-type- numbers.xhtml#igmp-type-numbers-1 Current document: See "IGMP Type Numbers" at [https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WDhniwjZ$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] 2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair% 40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af34b40b fbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098249743%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbG Zsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiI sIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=luCubW7cYwHT O5gJYNNoBFIb9reoRV1rMGRDjALYXTI%3D&reserved=0 igmp-type-numbers] Current IANA registry (we will send a request to update to the registry name): See the assigned IGMP type numbers at [https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WDhniwjZ$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] 2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Figmp-type- numbers%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C7d7204 46a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0 %7C0%7C638733438098258036%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGk iOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldU IjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=NJJ0E3T2B1EwYApUawm9Y8%2F0rpiYJlM pihl0vBD7JOI%3D&reserved=0 igmp-type-numbers.xhtml#igmp-type-numbers-1] Note: Table 1 currently uses Form A, but if you prefer Form B, please let us know. Form A: See "Name" at [URL] Form B: See the "Name" registry at [URL] [Med] Please use Form B for consistency through the document. Thanks. --> 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.1.2: To which registry does "IPFIX MPLS label type registry" refer? We see the following registries at https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WKiOgGl4$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fmpls-label- values&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4 b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0 %7C638733438098265300%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnR ydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoy fQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=EWnB8fcZSmxDFf3GfEjn7taSyCzNbWDnuNUU% 2Fc4zJRQ%3D&reserved=0: "Base Special-Purpose MPLS Label Values" or "Extended Special-Purpose MPLS Label Values" Original: Additional Information: See the IPFIX MPLS label type registry ([https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F__;JSU!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WJ8leu_Y$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] %2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fmpls-label- values&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4 b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0 %7C638733438098272852%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnR ydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoy fQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=31r%2B3w05U4eCf2QBdHa9KsHHN2EcUL1Wfeh WALJQG10%3D&reserved=0]). --> [Med] The link should be https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml*ipfix-mpls-label-type__;Iw!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WDgia_Bk$ [iana[.]org]. 4) <!-- [rfced] Because it seems the pointers to the relevant registry were moved from the "Description" to "Additional Information", do you still want to keep the sentence about where the values are listed in the "Description"? It seems redundant in some cases; please review. Examples of sentences that you may want to cut from NEW Descriptions: S 6.2.2 Values for this field are listed in the Classification Engine IDs registry. S 6.3.2 Values are listed in the flowEndReason registry. S 6.4.2 Values are listed in the natOriginatingAddressRealm registry. S 6.5.2 Values for this Information Element are listed in the "NAT Event Type" registry. --> [Med] I guess I prefer to keep those. 5) <!-- [rfced] The following text was included as a note for IANA. We have removed the text. Please let us know if this is incorrect. <t>Note to IANA: This change also corrects errors in the pointers provided for NAT46/NAT64.</t> --> [Med] Thanks. 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.12.2: We are unable to find an informationElementDataType registry on iana.org. From discussion with IANA, it seems "[informationElementDataType] subregistry" was renamed "IPFIX Information Element Data Types" at some point. Assuming this is true, please consider the following updates. Original: 6.12.2. NEW Description: A description of the abstract data type of an IPFIX information element.These are taken from the abstract data types defined in Section 3.1 of the IPFIX Information Model [RFC5102]; see that section for more information on the types described in the [informationElementDataType] subregistry. These types are registered in the IANA IPFIX Information Element Data Type subregistry. The [informationElementDataType] subregistry is intended to assign numbers for type names, not to provide a mechanism for adding data types to the IPFIX Protocol, and as such requires a Standards Action [RFC8126] to modify. Additional Information: See the IPFIX Information Element Data Types registry ([https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F__;JSU!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WJ8leu_Y$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] %2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.b oucadair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a2 0af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098280659%7CUnknown %7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOi JXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=fZT qMgUWdeawVC97Zcs0W%2FAxUOKHXF72NDlig4H5Pts%3D&reserved=0 ipfix.xhtml#ipfix-information-element-data-types]). Perhaps: 6.12.2. NEW Description: A description of the abstract data type of an IPFIX information element.These are taken from the abstract data types defined in Section 3.1 of the IPFIX Information Model [RFC5102]; see that section for more information on the types described in the "IPFIX Information Element Data Types" registry (previously the "informationElementDataType" subregistry). These types are registered in the "IPFIX Information Element Data Types" registry. The "IPFIX Information Element Data Types" registry is intended to assign numbers for type names, not to provide a mechanism for adding data types to the IPFIX Protocol; as such, modifications require Standards Action [RFC8126]. Additional Information: See the "IPFIX Information Element Data Types" registry [https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WDhniwjZ$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] 2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.bo ucadair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20 af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098288750%7CUnknown% 7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJ XaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Vq8v EFpo9%2BQOFPrtg0K5fWkYS9hAUUcQ6%2FvlWsjYm3Q%3D&reserved=0]. --> [Med] Looks good. 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.13.2: We updated the registry title to refer to the "IPFIX Information Element Semantics" registry, instead of the name of the registry group ("IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) Entities" registry group). Please confirm this is correct. Original: Additional Information: See the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) Entities registry ([https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F__;JSU!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WJ8leu_Y$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] %2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.b oucadair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a2 0af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098296172%7CUnknown %7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOi JXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=RUx IUNMNspxE61EY92cciHQ%2FAxRUSFqwFa9wb7bUimI%3D&reserved=0 ipfix.xhtml#ipfix-information-element-semantic]). Current: Additional Information: See the "IPFIX Information Element Semantics" registry [https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WDhniwjZ$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] 2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.bouca dair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af3 4b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098303554%7CUnknown%7CT WFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW 4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=LK7xneV fcy5iYFno4EspXKtrCqcB75%2FSP%2Fp0Kwp1XR4%3D&reserved=0]. --> [Med] ACK 8) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.14.1: We are unable to find an informationElementsUnits registry on iana.org. We believe the informationElementsUnits subregistry was renamed as "IPFIX Information Element Units" registry at some point. Please confirm this is correct. [Med] ACK. Assuming this is true, please consider the following updates. Original: 6.14.2. NEW Description: A description of the units of an IPFIX Information Element. These correspond to the units implicitly defined in the Information Element definitions in Section 5 of the IPFIX Information Model [RFC5102]; see that section for more information on the types described in the informationElementsUnits subregistry. These types can take the values in the [IANA IPFIX Information Element Units] subregistry. The special value 0x00 (none) is used to note that the field is unitless. Additional Information: See the IPFIX Information Element Units registry ([IANA IPFIX Information Element Units]). Perhaps: 6.14.2. NEW Description: A description of the units of an IPFIX Information Element. These correspond to the units implicitly defined in the Information Element definitions in Section 5 of the IPFIX Information Model [RFC5102]; see that section for more information on the types described in the "IPFIX Information Element Units" registry (previously the informationElementsUnits subregistry). These types can take the values in the "IPFIX Information Element Units" registry. The special value 0x00 (none) is used to note that the field is unitless. Additional Information: See the "IPFIX Information Element Units" registry [https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!OSsGDw!PTFTSCJ7ozWC7Q2JLAv29uz-PgK4vkB3Bi7C7KVyHO7JG3dOodyHmHqTiLSqfiWgGPS9WfD4yLejUyY-WDhniwjZ$ [eur03[.]safelinks[.]protection[.]outlook[.]com] 2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.bouca dair%40orange.com%7C7d720446a4b240ac3b6408dd3cad7839%7C90c7a20af3 4b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638733438098311017%7CUnknown%7CT WFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW 4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=552TXTV VATp51z68kz140N%2BRbJ2k2p6Eag1DzuqEyBI%3D&reserved=0]. --> [Med] ACK. 9) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.14.2 (NEW for informationElementUnits): FYI, if you accept the suggested text in the previous question, we will ask IANA to remove the following sentence from the registry; it is not part of the proposed new text. Original: These types can take the values in the [IANA IPFIX Information Element Units] subregistry. --> [Med] Not sure about this one. Do you mean this text "These types are registered in the [IANA IPFIX Information Element Units] subregistry.", instead? 10) <!-- [rfced] Section 7.3: It is unclear why there are hyphens after destination and source in the tables. We see the OLD text appears in RFC 6235, and it does not include hyphens. The hyphens also are not used in RFC 5103. For example: destination- Information (i.e., source- or destination-) Information Element destination- element Should the hyphens be removed? For example: destination Information (i.e., source or destination) Information Element destination element --> [Med] I also think so. OK to change this as well in the NEW. Thanks. 11) <!-- [rfced] We removed the reference to [Forwarding-Status] because IANA updated their registry with the link. We updated the text to include the registry title name and the URL to the registry group, based on discussion with IANA. Currently, [Forwarding-Status] only appears in the OLD text. Please review. 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