Hi Yingzhen, Thank you for your reply! We have updated the AUTH48 status page with your approval (please see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9702). Once we receive approval from Stephane, we will move this document forward in the publication process.
Thank you! RFC Editor/mc > On Dec 20, 2024, at 3:16 PM, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi Madison, > > Thanks for the update. I've reviewed the latest version and I approve this > version for publication. > > Thanks, > Yingzhen > > On Fri, Dec 20, 2024 at 8:24 AM Madison Church <mchu...@amsl.com> wrote: > Hi Acee, > > Thank you for your quick reply! We have added your approval to the AUTH48 > status page (please see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9702). > > Once we receive approvals from Yingzhen, Stephane, and Jeff, we will move > this document forward in the publication process. > > Thank you! > RFC Editor/mc > > > On Dec 20, 2024, at 10:13 AM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi Madison, > > > > Thanks for the quick update! I approve this version for publication. > > > > Thanks, > > Acee > > > >> On Dec 20, 2024, at 11:08, Madison Church <mchu...@amsl.com> wrote: > >> > >> Hi Authors, > >> > >> Acee - Thank you for your reply! We have updated the files below to > >> reflect your proposed changes. > >> > >> Please review the files carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not make > >> changes once the document has been published as an RFC. Contact us with > >> any further updates or with your approval of the document in its current > >> form. We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in > >> the publication process. > >> > >> The files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.txt > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.pdf > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.html > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.xml > >> > >> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702-diff.html > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702-rfcdiff.html > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702-auth48diff.html > >> > >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9702 > >> > >> Thank you, > >> RFC Editor/mc > >> > >>> On Dec 19, 2024, at 1:54 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > >>> > >>> Hi Madison, > >>> > >>> I only have a couple minor editorial changes. > >>> > >>> Acee-Lindems-iMac-2:Desktop acee$ diff -c rfc9702-orig.txt rfc9702.txt > >>> *** rfc9702-orig.txt Thu Dec 19 14:32:29 2024 > >>> --- rfc9702.txt Thu Dec 19 14:49:03 2024 > >>> *************** > >>> *** 85,91 **** > >>> the routing RIB data model [RFC8349] to provide operational state for > >>> various MSDs [RFC8662] for the MPLS data plane. The module augments > >>> the base MPLS model with a list of various types of Node MSDs as well > >>> ! as various types of MSDs on links. > >>> > >>> The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management > >>> Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342]. > >>> --- 85,91 ---- > >>> the routing RIB data model [RFC8349] to provide operational state for > >>> various MSDs [RFC8662] for the MPLS data plane. The module augments > >>> the base MPLS model with a list of various types of Node MSDs as well > >>> ! as various types of Link MSDs. > >>> > >>> The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management > >>> Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342]. > >>> *************** > >>> *** 116,124 **** > >>> > >>> As defined in [RFC8491], a Link MSD is the number of SIDs supported > >>> by a node's link, while a Node MSD is the smallest MSD supported by > >>> ! the node across all its interfaces. The module defines lists of MSDs > >>> ! with different MSD Types for a node and links. Please note that > >>> ! these are read-only data as per the node's hardware capability. > >>> > >>> 3. Tree for IETF MPLS MSD Types YANG Module > >>> > >>> --- 116,124 ---- > >>> > >>> As defined in [RFC8491], a Link MSD is the number of SIDs supported > >>> by a node's link, while a Node MSD is the smallest MSD supported by > >>> ! the node across all its links. The module defines lists of MSDs > >>> ! and their MSD Types for a node and its links. Please note that > >>> ! these are read-only data nodes exposing a node's hardware capability. > >>> > >>> 3. Tree for IETF MPLS MSD Types YANG Module > >>> > >>> *************** > >>> *** 246,252 **** > >>> identity srh-max-sl { > >>> base msd-base-srh; > >>> description > >>> ! "The Maximum Segment Left MSD type."; > >>> reference > >>> "RFC 9352: IS-IS Extensions to Support Segment Routing > >>> over the IPv6 Data Plane"; > >>> --- 246,252 ---- > >>> identity srh-max-sl { > >>> base msd-base-srh; > >>> description > >>> ! "The Maximum Segments Left MSD type."; > >>> reference > >>> "RFC 9352: IS-IS Extensions to Support Segment Routing > >>> over the IPv6 Data Plane"; > >>> > >>> > >>> Thanks, > >>> Acee > >>> > >>> > >>>> On Dec 16, 2024, at 9:52 AM, Madison Church <mchu...@amsl.com> wrote: > >>>> > >>>> Hi Yingzhen and Acee, > >>>> > >>>> Thank you both for your replies! We have updated the files and posted > >>>> them below. All of our questions have been addressed. Please see one > >>>> followup comment in this thread under question 3. > >>>> > >>>> Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not > >>>> make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any > >>>> further updates or with your approval of the document in its current > >>>> form. We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward > >>>> in the publication process. > >>>> > >>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh): > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.txt > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.pdf > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702.xml > >>>> > >>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702-diff.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702-rfcdiff.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9702-auth48diff.html > >>>> > >>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9702 > >>>> > >>>> Thank you, > >>>> RFC Editor/mc > >>>> > >>>>> On Dec 16, 2024, at 6:57 AM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > >>>>> > >>>>> Hi RFC Editor, > >>>>> > >>>>> See a couple places where a response is needed. > >>>>> > >>>>>> On Dec 13, 2024, at 12:40 AM, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.i...@gmail.com> > >>>>>> wrote: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Hi, > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Thanks for working on this document. Please see my reply below inline. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> For the Abstract, I'm thinking of a few minor changes: > >>>>>> old: > >>>>>> This document defines two YANG data modules. The first is the > >>>>>> initial version of the IANA-maintained YANG module for Maximum > >>>>>> Segment Identifier (SID) Depth (MSD) Types, which includes identities > >>>>>> for both the MPLS data plane and Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6) > >>>>>> data plane. The second augments the IETF MPLS YANG model to provide > >>>>>> support for MPLS MSDs as defined in RFCs 8476 and 8491. > >>>>>> new: > >>>>>> This document defines two YANG modules. The first module is the > >>>>>> initial version of the IANA-maintained YANG module for Maximum > >>>>>> Segment Identifier (SID) Depth (MSD) Types, which includes identities > >>>>>> for both the MPLS data plane and Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6) > >>>>>> data plane. The second module augments the IETF MPLS YANG model to > >>>>>> provide > >>>>>> support for MPLS MSDs as defined in RFCs 8476 and 8491. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Thanks, > >>>>>> Yingzhen > >>>>>> > >>>>>> On Wed, Dec 11, 2024 at 6:00 PM <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>> Authors, > >>>>>> > >>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > >>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been > >>>>>> updated > >>>>>> to expand abbreviations per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style > >>>>>> Guide"). Please let us know if you prefer otherwise. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Original: > >>>>>> YANG Data Model for Maximum SID Depth Types and MPLS Maximum SID Depth > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> YANG Data Model for Maximum Segment Identifier (SID) Depth Types > >>>>>> and MPLS Maximum SID Depth > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: How about: > >>>>>> YANG Data Model for Maximum Segment Identifier (SID) Depth (MSD) Types > >>>>>> and MPLS MSD > >>>>> > >>>>> I like Yingzhen's suggestion better. > >>>>> > >>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > >>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: how about "MSD Types"? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] We note that two RFCs in the reference clauses in the > >>>>>> iana-msd-types module do not appear in the reference section of the > >>>>>> RFC. > >>>>>> May a sentence be added before the YANG module stating that it refers > >>>>>> to > >>>>>> the following RFCs? For example: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> (where [RFC8664] and [RFC8814] would be added as Informative > >>>>>> References) > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Alternatively, you could let us know a different place to cite > >>>>>> [RFC8664] > >>>>>> and [RFC8814] in this document. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: The proposed text is fine. Should it be added to Section 4 > >>>>>> before section 4.1? > >>>>> > >>>>> RFC Editor? > >>>> > >>>> [rfced] We have added the sentence to Section 4.1 (IANA-Maintained > >>>> Module for MSD-Types). > >>>> > >>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] FYI, the Security Considerations section has been > >>>>>> updated > >>>>>> to match https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-security-guidelines. > >>>>>> If the differences from the approved template should be reinstated, > >>>>>> please let us know. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Specifically, this text is no longer present: > >>>>>> ... without the "none" authentication > >>>>>> option, Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC8446] with mutual X.509 > >>>>>> authentication, and HTTPS with HTTP authentication (Section 11 of > >>>>>> [RFC9110]). > >>>>>> > >>>>>> The normative reference [RFC9110] has been removed, as it was not > >>>>>> cited elsewhere in the document. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: this is ok. > >>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We suggest naming the column "Data Plane" no hyphen, as > >>>>>> the > >>>>>> hyphen seems unnecessary. If you agree, we will ask IANA to update the > >>>>>> registry accordingly. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: IANA has added a "Data-Plane" column > >>>>>> Suggested: IANA has added a "Data Plane" column > >>>>>> [and other instances] > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: this is fine. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] FYI, "N/A" has been removed from Table 1 in order > >>>>>> to match the IANA registry, which does not use "N/A" for empty fields. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: ok. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] RFC 7950 is not cited anywhere in this document. > >>>>>> Please let us > >>>>>> know where it should be cited; otherwise, this reference will be > >>>>>> removed > >>>>>> from the Normative References. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Original: > >>>>>> [RFC7950] Bjorklund, M., Ed., "The YANG 1.1 Data Modeling Language", > >>>>>> RFC 7950, DOI 10.17487/RFC7950, August 2016, > >>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7950>. --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: the reference to RFC 7950 can be added to Section 1. > >>>>>> Old: > >>>>>> There are two YANG modules defined in this document. > >>>>>> New: > >>>>>> There are two YANG modules [RFC7950 ]defined in this document. > >>>>> > >>>>> Spacing: > >>>>> There are two YANG modules [RFC7950] defined in this document. > >>>>> > >>>>> Thanks, > >>>>> Acee > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Terminology > >>>>>> > >>>>>> a) We have received guidance from Benoît Claise and the YANG Doctors > >>>>>> that > >>>>>> the terms "YANG module" and "YANG data model" are preferred. Please > >>>>>> review > >>>>>> the usage in this document. For example, should text be updated as > >>>>>> follows > >>>>>> or otherwise? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Abstract > >>>>>> Original: This document defines two YANG data modules. > >>>>>> Perhaps: This document defines two YANG modules. > >>>>>> [Section 1 already uses the latter.] > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Original: The second augments the IETF MPLS YANG model to provide ... > >>>>>> Perhaps: The second augments the IETF MPLS YANG data model to provide > >>>>>> ... > >>>>>> [And the same for similar text in Section 1.] > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Acknowledgements > >>>>>> Original: The YANG model was developed ... > >>>>>> Perhaps: The YANG data model was developed ... > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: I'm ok with the proposed changes. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> b) FYI, we have updated the terms below to use the form on the right, > >>>>>> as this is how they appear in the referenced documents (e.g., RFC > >>>>>> 8491). > >>>>>> > >>>>>> node MSD vs. Node MSD > >>>>>> link MSD vs. Link MSD > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> [Yingzhen]: Thanks for making them consistent. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > >>>>>> online > >>>>>> Style Guide > >>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > >>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. 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