Approved!

  Hope everyone has a Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year.

  Dan.

--
"the object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to
escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." – Marcus Aurelius

On 12/23/24, 8:12 AM, "Sandy Ginoza" <sgin...@amsl.com> wrote:

    Hi Warren and Dan,
    
    Thanks for your confirmation Warren.  Dan, we’ll continue with publication 
once you confirm as well.
    
    Thanks, and happy holidays! 
    RFC Editor/sg
    
    
    > On Dec 22, 2024, at 8:24 AM, Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net> wrote:
    > 
    > Approved!
    > 
    > Thank you very much!
    > W
    > 
    > 
    > On Tue, Dec 17 2024 at 6:39 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@amsl.com> wrote: 
    > Hi Warren and Dan,
    > 
    > Pulling this request to the top:
    > 
    > Please confirm you approve the RFC for publication.
    > 
    > We request your approval because it’s not a matter of publishing without 
a DOI; we have removed the reference altogether (which matches what was in the 
approved I-D). Please confirm you approve with RFC for publication after the 
most recent update. If approved, we will announce the RFC this week.
    > 
    > Thanks, 
    > RFC Editor/sg
    > 
    > On Dec 11, 2024, at 3:55 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@amsl.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Hi all,
    > 
    > We have removed mention of [IEEE_802.11-2024]. Please note that this 
means there will be no citation or informational reference to the document 
itself; the reference to the IEEE_802.11 WG ([IEEE_802.11]) remains.
    > 
    > You can view the updated files here: 
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    > 
    > Thank you, 
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    > 
    > On Dec 6, 2024, at 5:55 AM, Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net> wrote:
    > 
    > On Fri, Dec 06, 2024 at 8:46 AM, Dan Harkins <daniel.hark...@hpe.com> 
wrote:
    > 
    > Hello,
    > 
    > Yes, I confirm. I'm fine publishing without the DOI.
    > 
    > Yah, me too! 
    > W
    > 
    > regards,
    > 
    > Dan.
    > 
    > --
    > 
    > "the object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to
    > 
    > escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." – Marcus Aurelius
    > 
    > On 12/5/24, 10:12 PM, "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyn...@cisco.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Sandy,
    > 
    > I think that the IETF should not wait anymore for the IEEE actual 
publication, let’s publish RFC 9672 even without the DOI for the IEEE 802.11 
Std 2024.
    > 
    > Dan, Warren can you confirm our latest discussion on the above point ?
    > 
    > Now, if the RFC editor policy is to wait until the DOI is available, then 
let’s wait.
    > 
    > Regards,
    > 
    > -éric
    > 
    > From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@amsl.com> 
    > Date: Tuesday, 12 November 2024 at 18:20 
    > To: Harkins, Dan <daniel.hark...@hpe.com> 
    > Cc: Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net>, RFC Editor 
<rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyn...@cisco.com>, 
auth48archive@rfc-ed <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> Subject: Re: AUTH48: 
RFC-to-be 9672 <draft-wkumari-rfc8110-to-ieee-02> for your review
    > 
    > Hi Dan,
    > 
    > Thanks for your reply. We updated the text in the Introduction. Note that 
we also added a placeholder for an informative reference to IEEE Std 
802.11-2024. We will wait to hear further regarding publication of that 
document.
    > 
    > The current files are available here: 
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    > Thank you, 
    > RFC Editor/sg
    > 
    > On Nov 7, 2024, at 8:21 AM, Harkins, Dan <daniel.hark...@hpe.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Hi Sandy,
    > 
    > Yes, that update to section 1 looks great! Thanks.
    > 
    > regards,
    > 
    > Dan.
    > 
    > -- 
    > "the object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to 
escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." – Marcus Aurelius
    > 
    > On 11/7/24, 7:17 AM, "Sandy Ginoza" <sgin...@amsl.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Hi Dan,
    > 
    > Thanks for your input and for checking on the DOI.
    > 
    > For the update to section 1, would this work?
    > 
    > The IEEE 802.11 Working Group [IEEE_802.11] has requested the ability to 
maintain and develop OWE (see [IEEE_LS]) to ensure that the protocol remains in 
sync with the IEEE protocols. This document represents concurrence that future 
work on OWE [RFC8110] will now occur in 
    > the IEEE 802.11 Working Group.
    > 
    > Thanks, 
    > RFC Editor/sg
    > 
    > On Nov 4, 2024, at 12:04 PM, Harkins, Dan <daniel.hark...@hpe.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Hi Sandy (et al),
    > 
    > I approve of publication. I do have a minor gripe regarding this change 
to section 1:
    > 
    > Original: 
    > [IEEE_802.11] has requested [IEEE_LS] that in order to allow for ongoing 
maintenance and further development of the protocol, and to ensure that the 
protocol remains in sync with the IEEE protocols, future work on the protocol 
described in RFC8110 will now occur in 
    > [IEEE_802.11]. This document is a concurrence.
    > 
    > Perhaps: 
    > The IEEE 802.11 Working Group [IEEE_802.11] has requested the ability to 
maintain and develop OWE (see [IEEE_LS]). This document represents concurrence 
that future work on OWE [RFC8110] will now occur in the IEEE 802.11 Working 
Group to ensure that the protocol remains in sync with the IEEE protocols.
    > 
    > I actually think the original here is better because it is the further 
development of the protocol in IEEE that would cause the loss of sync. So I 
think it's better to have those two things-- the cause of the result that we 
want to avoid-- connected. Maybe, "The IEEE 802.11 Working Group [IEEE_802.11] 
has requested that ongoing maintenance and development of the protocol be done 
in IEEE 802.11 in order to ensure the protocol remains in sync with other IEEE 
protocols. This document is a concurrence."
    > 
    > But this is not a hill I care fight on much less die on, so I will defer 
to you. The similar change to section 2 looks fine though but I'd like to see 
this text in section 1 have these two things more connected.
    > 
    > I'm going to the IEEE meeting next week and will inquire about a DOI for 
IEEE Std 802.11-2024. Hopefully it will be soon.
    > 
    > regards,
    > 
    > Dan.
    > 
    > -- 
    > "the object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to 
escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." – Marcus Aurelius
    > 
    > On 10/29/24, 1:34 PM, "Sandy Ginoza" <sgin...@amsl.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Hi Warren, Dan,
    > 
    > Regarding the following comment:
    > 
    > The only outstanding issue is that the IEEE stated that: "On September 
26, 2024, the IEEE SASB approved P802.11REVme/D7.0 to be published as IEEE Std 
802.11-2024. It is currently in publication editing and I expect it will be 
available to the public in a month or two." and "Since IEEE Std 802.11-2024 has 
been approved for publication, it can now be referenced."
    > 
    > But I don't think that it is actually published yet , and so does not 
have a DOI number. I believe that the RFC Editor would prefer a more formal 
reference (e.g with DOI) — as an example, RFC9542 references 802.1AB as: 
    > [IEEE802.1AB] 
    > IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area 
    > networks - Station and Media Access Control Connectivity 
    > Discovery", IEEE Std 802.1AB-2016, 
    > DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2016.7433915, March 2016, 
    > 
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    > 
    > So, I'm not sure if we should wait till IEEE Std 802.11-2024 has a DOI, 
or if it's fine without, or what you'd prefer.
    > 
    > I have no opinion, so "I approve this RFC for publication" and do 
whatever you want with the above reference issue[0].
    > 
    > This document does not contain a reference to the IEEE standard - 
references to [IEEE_802.11] are to the WG. Perhaps an in-text citation was 
intended in the following:
    > 
    > Opportunistic Wireless Encryption (OWE) [RFC8110] is a mode of 
    > opportunistic security [RFC7435] for IEEE Std 802.11 that provides 
    > encryption of the wireless medium without authentication.
    > 
    > If a reference is to be included, should it be listed as normative or 
informative? Assuming a reference is to be included, we would prefer to wait 
for publication.
    > 
    > This is the status listed on 
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    > IEEE Std 802.11™-2024 was approved on September 26, 2024. Publication 
expected soon.
    > 
    > Dan, we don’t believe we have heard from you regarding this document’s 
readiness for publication. Please review and let us know if updates are needed.
    > 
    > We updated the document as indicated below and posted the revised files 
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    > Sandy
    > 
    > On Oct 24, 2024, at 9:26 AM, Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net> wrote:
    > 
    > On Mon, Oct 21, 2024 at 7:52 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@amsl.com> wrote: 
Hi Warren,
    > 
    > Thanks for your note about the IEEE.11-2024 reference - we are reviewing.
    > 
    > I don’t believe we have received a reply regarding the following items. 
Please review and let us know if we may update the text.
    > 
    > Doh, sorry. Approved, and thanks!
    > 
    > 1) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: We are having trouble parsing this text. 
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meaning.
    > 
    > Original: 
    > [IEEE_802.11] has requested [IEEE_LS] that in order to allow for ongoing 
maintenance and further development of the protocol, and to ensure that the 
protocol remains in sync with the IEEE protocols, future work on the protocol 
described in RFC8110 will now occur in 
    > [IEEE_802.11]. This document is a concurrence.
    > 
    > Perhaps: 
    > The IEEE 802.11 Working Group [IEEE_802.11] has requested the ability to 
maintain and develop OWE (see [IEEE_LS]). This document represents concurrence 
that future work on OWE [RFC8110] will now occur in the IEEE 802.11 Working 
Group to ensure that the protocol remains in sync with the IEEE protocols. 
    > -->
    > 
    > LGTM!
    > 
    > 2) <!-- [rfced] Section 2: If the update above is accepted, may we make a 
similar change here?
    > 
    > Original: 
    > At the request of [IEEE_802.11], in order to allow for ongoing 
maintenance and further development of the protocol, and to ensure that the 
protocol remains in sync with the IEEE protocols, this document specifies that 
future work on the protocol described in RFC8110 will now occur in 
[IEEE_802.11].
    > 
    > The protocol defined in RFC8110 will be duplicated in [IEEE_802.11] such 
that that document alone will be enough to implement it and any further 
maintenance or modification of the protocol will be performed in IEEE under its 
policies and procedures.
    > 
    > Perhaps: 
    > This document represents concurrence that future work on OWE [RFC8110] 
will now occur in the IEEE 802.11 Working Group [IEEE_802.11] to ensure that 
the protocol remains in sync with the IEEE protocols.
    > 
    > The OWE protocol [RFC8110] will be duplicated by the IEEE 802.11 Working 
Group [IEEE_802.11] such that the document alone will be enough to implement, 
maintain, and modify the protocol within the IEEE under its policies and 
procedures. 
    > -->
    > 
    > LGTM.
    > 
    > Thank you! 
    > W
    > 
    > Thank you, 
    > RFC Editor/sg
    > 
    > On Oct 18, 2024, at 12:51 PM, Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net> wrote:
    > 
    > Inline….
    > 
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    > — OR — 
    > An explicit list of changes in this format
    > 
    > Section # (or indicate Global)
    > 
    > OLD: 
    > old text
    > 
    > NEW: 
    > new text
    > 
    > No changes, thank you very much, RFC Ed.
    > 
    > The only outstanding issue is that the IEEE stated that: "On September 
26, 2024, the IEEE SASB approved P802.11REVme/D7.0 to be published as IEEE Std 
802.11-2024. It is currently in publication editing and I expect it will be 
available to the public in a month or two." and "Since IEEE Std 802.11-2024 has 
been approved for publication, it can now be referenced."
    > 
    > But I don't think that it is actually published yet , and so does not 
have a DOI number. I believe that the RFC Editor would prefer a more formal 
reference (e.g with DOI) — as an example, RFC9542 references 802.1AB as: 
    > [IEEE802.1AB] 
    > IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks - Station 
and Media Access Control Connectivity Discovery", IEEE Std 802.1AB-2016, DOI 
10.1109/IEEESTD.2016.7433915, March 2016, 
    > 
<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://doi.org/10.1109/IEEESTD.2016.7433915__;!!NpxR!jnakUaRvodfLmxupOdc0phBycK1YTKkEKUbUhXX-1ccu6JLqdEIbNqY1NSkDJBDH1CxaoQMhZmV4584$
 >.
    > 
    > So, I'm not sure if we should wait till IEEE Std 802.11-2024 has a DOI, 
or if it's fine without, or what you'd prefer.
    > 
    > I have no opinion, so "I approve this RFC for publication" and do 
whatever you want with the above reference issue[0].
    > 
    > W 
    > [0]: That sounded snarky, but no snark intended… You do not need to reply 
with both an updated XML file and an explicit list of changes, as either form 
is sufficient.
    > 
    > We will ask a stream manager to review and approve any changes that seem 
beyond editorial in nature, e.g., addition of new text, deletion of text, and 
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Editorial changes do not require approval from a stream manager.
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    > Diff file of the text: 
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    > Diff of the XML: 
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    > Thank you for your cooperation,
    > 
    > RFC Editor
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    > -------------------------------------- 
    > RFC 9672 (draft-wkumari-rfc8110-to-ieee-02)
    > 
    > Title : Transferring Opportunistic Wireless Encryption to the IEEE 802.11 
Working Group Author(s) : W. Kumari, D. Harkins WG Chair(s) :  Area Director(s) 
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