Reviewer: Ran Chen
Review result: Has Nits

This document extends the original BRSKI (Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key
Infrastructure) protocol by introducing a new operational mode—Pledge in
Responder Mode (PRM). This extension is particularly useful in constrained or
dynamic network environments where the traditional initiator-based workflow of
BRSKI may not be feasible. It would be better to have a separate section for
operational consideration.

## Minor
For Normative References:
I-D.ietf-netconf-sztp-csr updated to RFC9646.
Please pay more attention to I-D. draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis, which is still
in WG draft status.

Section 6.2.1
The term described in rfc8995 is Slowloris-like attack, not Slowloris attack.
It is recommended to change it to Slowloris-like attack.

## NITS:
- s/ an Registrar Voucher-Request (RVR) / a Registrar Voucher-Request (RVR)/
- s/was signed signed / was signed/
- s/The plege / The pledge /
- s/ EE certficate / EE certificate /
- s/ BRSKI .well-known/ BRSKI well-known/
Thanks for your contribution!
Best Regards,
Ran Chen



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