Deb Cooley has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-14: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The Abstract and the first paragraph of the Introduction both 'bury the lead' by discussing other drafts first. I would rearrange these to list the current draft first, and then the other work drafts. I also agree w/ Eric's comment about the (kind of weird) Yang terminology. Especially since this draft has no Yang. Section 8.2: Parboiled? Really? Intermediate step would probably be clearer to many (especially if the readers aren't native English speakers). _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list -- anima@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to anima-le...@ietf.org
