Makes sense. I was guessing at whether manufacturer was plural or singlular. I guessed plural because it sounded like MASA signs for multiple manufacturers, and it was describing the overall set of those relationships.
-Jim On 30 Nov 2024, at 15:05, William Atwood wrote: > Actually, since a specific MASA signs a specific pledge on behalf of a single > manufacturer, the use of "manufacturer's" is correct. However, it would be > clearer if "the" were inserted before "manufacturer's". > > Bill > > On 11/30/2024 5:37 PM, Jim Fenton via Datatracker wrote: >> Attention This email originates from outside the concordia.ca domain. // Ce >> courriel provient de l'extérieur du domaine de concordia.ca >> >> Reviewer: Jim Fenton >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the designated artart reviewer for this draft. >> >> Thanks for addressing all of my comments on -12. They are all addressed in >> the >> text with the exception of my question on why this is separate from >> ietf-anima-rfc3866bis, which was answered on the mailing list. This draft is >> ready to go with the exception of a few tiny editorial nits: >> >> Section 1, paragraph 1 move (BRSKI) and (SZTP) inside the quotes since that >> is >> part of the titles of the RFCs. >> >> Section 1, paragraph 3 "as enhancement of" -> "as an enhancement of" >> >> Section 2, definition of voucher: "statement from Manufacturer" -> "statement >> from a Manufacturer" >> >> Section 2, definition of MASA: manufacturer's -> manufacturers' >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Anima mailing list -- anima@ietf.org >> To unsubscribe send an email to anima-le...@ietf.org > > -- > Dr. J.W. Atwood, Eng. tel: +1 (514) 848-2424 x3046 > Distinguished Professor Emeritus fax: +1 (514) 848-2830 > Department of Computer Science > and Software Engineering > Concordia University ER 1234 email:william.atw...@concordia.ca > 1455 de Maisonneuve Blvd. West http://users.encs.concordia.ca/~bill > Montreal, Quebec Canada H3G 1M8 > > _______________________________________________ > art mailing list -- a...@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to art-le...@ietf.org _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list -- anima@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to anima-le...@ietf.org
