NOMINATE FOR associates in nomic art
Overall, it references agoran history, rhymes, seems to keep 10 syllables
per line, and has good timing.
I'm not sure it follows any meter though, especially because of the commas
on the first line seem to indicate a different stress pattern.
I don't really like the nomic world line, huh? feels very out of place.
But those things are minor, and fixing them I don't think would raise the
degree level nor should they prevent a degree.
Also add me to the review board lol
On Tue, Jul 9, 2024, 1:26 AM secretsnail9 via agora-business <
agora-busin...@agoranomic.org> wrote:
> On Sun, Jul 7, 2024 at 7:02 PM Mischief via agora-business <
> agora-busin...@agoranomic.org> wrote:
>
> > On 6/29/24 9:15 AM, Mischief via agora-business wrote:
> >
> > > I'll, with this, Magenta Ribbon score a,
> > > Posting to my choice of public fora,
> > > Born that day 'cause Nomic World's no more, huh?
> > > Harken players current and of yore: A-
> > > lexis, Michael, (but, as yet, no Laura),
> > > To observe the relevant decora,
> > > List the ways we simply must adore ya,
> > > Offer praise from here to Bora Bora,
> > > Kudos given without oxymora,
> > > Like a sweater made of fine angora,
> > > Nobler than the princes of Andorra,
> > > As alluring as, to bees, some flora,
> > > Or a swimming shark to eir remora,
> > > And some hopes, as once did find Pandora:
> > > May you dazzle like a bright aurora,
> > > May proposals always reach their quora,
> > > May the crystals fully cleanse your aura,
> > > Gather, raise a glass and your fedora,
> > > As we toast the birthday of Agora.
> >
> > Oh what the hey, there's not really a downside... I submit the above for
> > consideration for an Associate of Nomic Art degree.
> >
> > --
> > Mischief
> > Hat: steampunk hat
> > Vitality: Invulnerable
> > Bang holdings: 1
> >
>
>
> As Herald, I call upon the Agoran public to designate this thesis as
> "UNSUITABLE FOR DEGREE", "REVISE & RESUBMIT", or "NOMINATE FOR [DEGREE]" as
> each person deems fit.
>
> I assign snail, Janet, and kiako to review this thesis. The current thesis
> review board as a reminder (please ask to be removed or added):
>
> {
> nix
> juan
> snail
> Janet
> kiako
> }
>
> Anyone not on the review board is welcome to give feedback as well!
> --
> snail
> (Invulnerable, 1 Bang)
>
