Any feedback on the below before I submit it? { Title: Clarify Intentions AI: 3 Author: nix
[The current wording seems to suggest that players should say something like "I intend to register." While effective, it's quite different than the conventional way of doing most actions. This version disambiguates that.] Amend R869 by replacing: An Unregistered person CAN (unless explicitly forbidden or prevented by the rules) register by publishing a message that indicates reasonably clearly and reasonably unambiguously that e intends to become a player at that time. No person can be a player if e is part of another player or another player is part of em. with: An Unregistered person CAN (unless explicitly forbidden or prevented by the rules) register by publishing a message that indicates reasonably clearly and reasonably unambiguously eir desire to become a player at that time (For example, by saying "I register"). No person can be a player if e is part of another player or another player is part of em. } -- nix Prime Minister, Herald