On 3/27/23 11:53, Yachay Wayllukuq via agora-business wrote:
> Title: Ascetics
> Adoption Index: 1.0
> Author: Yachay
> Co-Author(s):
>
> Enact the following rule:

Title of the rule? Not strictly necessary, just leaves the choice to me.


> {
> Players are Ascetics or not (this is their Asceticism Switch), defaulting
> to not, tracked by the Herald.

"Asceticism is a negative boolean person switch tracked by the Herald. A
player with an Asceticism of true is an Ascetic."


> A player can Toggle Asceticism by announcement, if they haven't in the last
> 30 days. This flips their Asceticism.

"A player CAN by announcement flip their Asceticism to a specified valid
value if e has not done so in the previous 30 days.". (Note uppercase
"CAN" and Spivak. I'd also prefer avoiding contractions in rules text
but I don't think that's a universal view.)


> An Ascetic cannot gain Radiance. Once per week, an Ascetic can Meditate by
> announcement. Doing so grants them 1 Stamp of their own Type, plus 1 more
> if the current period they have been an Ascetic for is more than 1 month in
> length.

This is trickier. This current version fails due to precedence. A
continuous reset probably works better: "If an Ascetic's radiance
differs from what eir radiance was when e most recently became an
Ascetic, it is immediately set to that value."

"Once per week, an Ascetic CAN Meditate by announcement. When e does so,
e gains 2 stamp of eir own type if e most recently became an Ascetic
more than 30 days ago; otherwise, e gains 1 stamp of eir own type."

-- 
Janet Cobb

Assessor, Mad Engineer, Rulekeepor, S​tonemason

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