I don't think any substantive changes are needed, but two minor comments: > I submit the following Dragon Corporation Amendment Proposal: > > --- > Presidential Elections > > Replace the first paragraph of Bylaw 6: Recordkeeping with the following: > A contract-defined office behaves like a regular office, except > that: > - it receives only a monthly salary of 5 banknotes per payday
Paydays are not necessarily monthly, since a proposal could trigger a payday. > - only members can hold it > - only members can take, support, or object to actions that would its > officeholder I think there's a missing word here. Otherwise, the proposal looks good. -- Jason Cobb
