On Wed, 8 Jan 2020, Aris Merchant via agora-discussion wrote:

  1. e, acting as emself, has publicly stated, and not subsequently
     publicly withdrawn eir statement, that e agrees to the action;
That last comma looks out of place.

Looks right to me, based on my intuitive comma placement rules.

I don't think it's strictly wrong, but it would be easier to read if you moved the wedged subpart to the end.

Greetings,
Ørjan.

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