That sentence is long and hard to understand though.

-Aris

On Sun, Apr 15, 2018 at 6:30 AM ATMunn <iamingodsa...@gmail.com> wrote:

> Looks good, but I feel you could condense those two sentences into one
> with something like this:
>
> If there exists one or more Units of non-Aether Land in the possession
> of Agora with the preservation switch set to False, either all of them
> if there are less than 5 or 5 of them if there are 5 or more, are to be
> chosen by the Cartographer.
>
> On 4/14/2018 9:25 PM, Reuben Staley wrote:
> > Submitting this to a-d since I don't trust myself to submit the actual
> > thing yet. Please fix my inevitable mistakes.
> >
> > Title: 5 auctions
> > AI: 1
> > Author: Trigon
> > Co-author(s):
> >
> > Amend rule 2004 "Land Auctions" by replacing the entire text with:
> >
> >        Every Agoran Week, if the number of units of Private Land is less
> >        than one half the total number of units of Land, the Cartographor
> >        SHALL select up to 5 land units by the following process:
> >
> >        1. If there exist at least 5 Units of non-Aether Land in the
> >           possession of Agora with the preservation switch set to False,
> >           any 5 such Units of Land, are to be chosen by the Cartographor.
> >
> >        2. If there exist fewer than 5 Units of non-Aether Land in the
> >           possession of Agora with the preservation switch set to False,
> >           all such Units are automatically chosen.
> >
> >        For each land unit selectd by the process described above, the
> >        Cartographor CAN and SHALL initiate an auction with it as the only
> >        lot. For this auction, the announcer is the Cartographor, the
> >        auctioneer is Agora, and the minimum bid is 1 coin.
>

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