I don't exactly have a strong feeling one way or another, but given that one is usually given ten words in a word list, writing nineteen other words for each word on the list seems pretty doable. I wouldn't know, however—I'm not the one writing apologies.
天火狐 On 22 August 2017 at 02:28, Aris Merchant < thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com> wrote: > > On Mon, Aug 21, 2017 at 7:52 PM Owen Jacobson <o...@grimoire.ca> wrote: > >> >> On Aug 21, 2017, at 9:28 PM, Aris Merchant <thoughtsoflifeandlight17@ >> gmail.com> wrote: >> >> >> On Mon, Aug 21, 2017 at 3:35 PM Owen Jacobson <o...@grimoire.ca> wrote: >> >>> I submit the following proposal: >>> >>> Title: Shorter Apologies >>> Author: o >>> AI: 2.0 >>> >>> {{{ >>> Amend rule 2427 ("Yellow Cards"), replacing the number 200 with the >>> number 180 wherever it appears in the text of the rule. >>> }}} >>> >>> As the author of most of the recent apologies, I have to be honest: I’m >>> using some incredibly forced language choices to stretch to 200 words. 10% >>> shorter should help balance between keeping apologies on point by making it >>> easier to write them, and keeping them appropriately punitive by requiring >>> at least some reflection on the nature of the infraction. >>> >>> -o >>> >>> Is that enough? I'd be inclined to go with 150, or maybe even 100. I >> don't like the rough number, and I don't feel like it will be big enough to >> be worth the bother of a whole proposal. I support the basic idea of a >> reduction though. 200 has always seemed a bit harsh. >> >> >> Ironically, I started with 175 (12.5% shorter, but 25 words is a nice >> round number), and thought I might get pushback for being too lax. >> >> Given the severity of the penalty - voting strength to zero until you >> apologize, or until 30 days pass - I’d be okay with dropping it further. >> Does anyone else want to chime in? >> >> -o >> > After thinking about it more, 100 seems a bit much for one jump. 150 feels > about right to me personally. > > -Aris > >>