Kerim Aydin wrote:
>      For the rules to define a class of assets to be a card, the 
>      Rules must define its Title, its House, and its Exploit.

I think you mean that the *assets* are cards, not that the *class* is
a card.  I expect the Title, House, and Exploit are attributes of the
class, rather than individual assets/cards; better make that clear.

>      Cards are tracked by the Herald.

Bad overloading.  Create the office of dealor.

>                    any such attempted transfer is prima facie 
>      assumed to occur.

This is garbled.  Our ordinary standards of evidence would say that an
announcement of a transfer is prima facie evidence that the transfer
occurred.  If you want a stronger effect than that, you need to be more
explicit: perhaps an announcement of transfer is a self-ratifying report
that the recipient received the card.

>      House may be one of Major or Minor, and the collection of all 
>      cards in a house may be referred to as the Major and Minor 
>      Arcana, respectively.

Er, what?  How many houses are there?  Is a house, in fact, an entity
in its own right, or is "house" just the label for a class of switch?

>      Herald SHALL chose the card to be dealt randomly from among 

"choose".

>                                  The holder of a major Arcana 
>      SHOULD also, in general, be treated as if e holds a legal 
>      position in Agora equivalent to the title of the card.

I find this phrasing a bit unclear.  Seeing the rule defining the major
arcana clarified it, but then I think it's a bad idea.  The card and
the position should have distinct names.

>      the announcement, e SHALL return all Major Arcana to the 
>      deck

CAN e?

>Repeal Rule 402.

You'll have to repeal rule 103 as well to make the speakership behave
as a card.

-zefram

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