Zefram wrote:

Ed Murphy wrote:
     Each player has a State with one or more Districts, a Base, and
     a Constituency.

These names are quite opaque as to the significance of the parameters,
and the relationships that the names evoke don't match the behaviour of
the concepts.

"State" and "Districts" go along directly with the House/Senate
analogy.  I'm open to suggestions on the other terms.

Is it to be impossible to have zero Districts (EVLOP)?  Your version of
R2126 still allows VVLOP (Constituency) to go down to zero.

Hmm, it probably should have a minimum of one.

     Each first-class player's Base is five.  Any other player's Base
     is zero.  A player's Base CANNOT be modified.

Is the change from four deliberate?

Yes.  Law of Fives and all.

     When a player registers,

Would be better to say "When a player is registered,", in case we ever
have a player registered by someone other than emself.  Same goes for
deregistration, generally: we have often (such as in the current R2126)
had rules assuming that registration and deregistration are always
voluntary.

Unnecessary generality.  First come up with a method for
non-reflexive registration that we might actually want to use.

     The Assessor's report includes each player's Constituency and
     number of Districts.

There's no real need for the assessor to report VVLOP (Constituency)
as well as EVLOP.  VVLOP can only differ from EVLOP by events during
the present week.

I would include it (along with a history of recent events) whether
it was required or not.

     Sheqels ($) are a measure of each player's ability to
     gerrymander the redistricting process.

I'd prefer not to use the dollar sign for this, especially since it's
not currency.

But it could be.  The two-for-one trading concept suggests
asymmetric exchange rates.

     When a player registers or deregisters, e loses all eir $.

There's the assumption of voluntary deregistration.  I think it would be
better to define that VCs (sheqels) CANNOT be possessed by non-players.
That's in my "tighten definition of VCs" proposal; you're welcome to
incorporate the fixes from there.

Point; exile is vanishingly rare, but a number of players have been
deregistered due to absence.

On a separate note, what about adding the ability for players to
will their VCs (sheqels) to other players upon eir deregistration?

     The adoption index of a proposal is an integral multiple of 0.1,
     with a default and minimum value of 1.0.  A proposal is initially
     a House proposal if its adoption index is less than 2.0, a Senate
     proposal otherwise.

You dropped the bit about the submitter setting the AI.  It would be
bad to lose the ability to make AI>1 proposals.

Will fix in the next draft.

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