Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-acme-onion-07: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-acme-onion/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for addressing the my DISCUSS point and the COMMENTs points kept below for archiving. The original ballot was https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/iesg/Yqgi7FDSiIra2cAhuFvJqAgtPas/ ## COMMENTS (non-blocking) ### Section 1 s/These use the ".onion"/These services use the ".onion"/ (I had to re-read the whole sentence 3 times to understand it) ### Sections 3.1.2 and 3.1.3 As 3.1.1 uses 'MUST NOT', suggest to s/can be used/MAY be used/ ### Section 3.2 What is the basis for selecting 30 days? I would assume that the ACME challenge/response is done within minutes if not seconds. Or is this challenge/response assumed to be executed multiple times ? Only supporting Ed25519 seems to lack agility or am I missing something ? It is also unclear to me whether authKey is the client public key (probably) or the server public key. Please add clarifying text. Some explanations could be given on when to use this field. ### Section 4 Is authKey the same field as in section 3.2 ? This would explain this field role but is confusing to the reader. Suggest adding something like "this field is specified in section 4' when introducing this field in section 3.2. ### Section 7.1 To avoid any ambiguity, please add a reference to the registry by its URI https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/acme.xhtml#acme-validation-methods The legend of table 1 should probably use singular and not plural. _______________________________________________ Acme mailing list -- acme@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to acme-le...@ietf.org
