Hi Michael,

The comments have been addressed in
https://github.com/aarongable/draft-acme-ari/pull/86 in the github working
copy, and will be published in the next draft version shortly.

Thank you for the feedback!
Aaron

On Fri, Dec 6, 2024 at 3:00 AM Michael Tüxen via Datatracker <
nore...@ietf.org> wrote:

> The sixth step in the algorithm described in Section 4.2 is ambiguous in my
> view:
>
> Otherwise, sleep until the Retry-After period has passed, or until the next
> normal wake time, and return to Step 1.
>
> Assume the Retry-After period is 6 hours (21600 seconds) as stated in the
> example and assume that the normal wake time is 1 second. Depending on how
> the
> sixth rule is interpreted, the client might retry in 6 hours or in one
> second.
> Choosing the 1 second results in sending 21600 requests in 6 hours instead
> of
> one. Therefore I think it makes sense to be more specific here such that
> you
> send only one request...
>

This is a good point. This phrasing (specifically "or until the next normal
wake time") was included when the algorithm was less rigidly specified, and
before the new advice regarding setting and respecting Retry-After
<https://github.com/aarongable/draft-acme-ari/pull/82> was added. I think
it makes sense to simply remove this carveout, and say that the algorithm
is simply to sleep to the end of the Retry-After period. I've made a change
to this effect.


> There is one typo in Section 4.2:
> regulatory enviornment -> regulatory environment
>

Fixed (by virtue of rephrasing this section in response to feedback from
other reviewers).
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