Thanks again everyone, for both your support and your editorial suggestions. I have addressed all of the feedback received here and published draft-ietf-acme-ari-06. I don't anticipate publishing any other changes prior to the IETF 121 document freeze on Monday Oct 21.
Thanks, Aaron On Fri, Oct 11, 2024 at 12:55 PM Aaron Gable <aa...@letsencrypt.org> wrote: > Thank you Corey, all three of these make sense to me. I have filed a bug > to track these (https://github.com/aarongable/draft-acme-ari/issues/76) > and will address them in the GitHub working copy as soon as I'm back from > OOO next week. > > Aaron > > On Fri, Oct 11, 2024, 07:43 Corey Bonnell <Corey.Bonnell= > 40digicert....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > >> Hello, >> >> I reviewed the draft and believe it is largely ready, with a few >> suggestions: >> >> >> >> 1. A normative reference to RFC 7231 is needed for the Retry-After >> header. >> 2. Consider adding guidance for appropriate selection of Retry-After >> values. Likely this guidance will need to instruct ACME server operators >> to >> be aware of some of the policy specific elements (e.g., revocation >> timelines) of the PKI in which the ACME server operates. For example, a >> Retry-After value of 86400 would not be sufficient for the TLS webPKI, as >> the TLS Baseline Requirements requires revocation within 24 hours in >> certain circumstances; a more aggressive cadence is needed. >> 3. In section 4.1, replace “AKI” with “AKI keyIdentifier” in the >> ASCII diagram to make it clear that only the keyIdentifier field of the >> AKI >> extension is included and not the other fields of the AKI extension. The >> prose above says this, but consistency in both the prose and the diagram >> would make this clear. >> >> >> >> Thanks, >> >> Corey >> >> >> >> *From:* Yoav Nir <ynir.i...@gmail.com> >> *Sent:* Monday, October 7, 2024 1:57 PM >> *To:* IETF ACME <acme@ietf.org> >> *Subject:* [Acme] WGLC for draft-ietf-acme-ari >> >> >> >> Hi, all >> >> >> >> This begins a working group last call for the ARI draft [1] >> >> >> >> If you haven’t done so recently, please read the latest (-05) version of >> the draft, and send comments to the list. >> >> >> >> Due to the Jewish holidays and my upcoming vacation, this WGLC will last >> for three weeks, ending on Monday, October 28th. >> >> >> >> Please send your comments early, so that a discussion may result. >> >> >> >> Tomofumi & Yoav >> >> >> >> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-acme-ari/ >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Acme mailing list -- acme@ietf.org >> To unsubscribe send an email to acme-le...@ietf.org >> >
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