Roman, With you bringing back the explanation, all makes sense to me now. Wish your explanation is incorporated into the document. Thanks, Linda
On 10/20/22, 6:53 PM, "Roman Danyliw" <[email protected]> wrote: Thanks for the re-review Linda. ACME WG: here is the thread from the IETF LC where proposed changes were discussed: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fmailarchive.ietf.org%2Farch%2Fmsg%2Flast-call%2FnujBgHd6ZKHY6fG58ZWBKzFGVWs%2F&data=05%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C3d47157879904a302e3008dab2f65009%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C638019068235813966%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=t83ICajIF%2FEIKzibHtGs0T9FFSQpSFmBxKdxxgGHkPY%3D&reserved=0 > -----Original Message----- > From: Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Sent: Thursday, October 20, 2022 6:55 PM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10 > > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review result: Has Issues > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These > comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors. > Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any > other last call comments. > > This document specifies an extension to ACME protocol which allows an ACME > server to validate the Delay-Tolerant Networking Node ID for an ACME client. > > I had the following comments for the -07 version. I don't think the latest > version (-10) resolved my comments. > > Issues: > > The document didn't describe how the Node ID described in this document is > related to the Delay Tolerant Network. I see the mechanism can be equally > used in any network. What are the specifics related to the "Delay Tolerant > Network"? > It would be helpful if the document adds a paragraph explaining the specific > characteristics of the Delay-Tolerant Network that require the additional > parameters/types used for validating the Node-ID for an ACME client. > > Thank you, > > Linda Dunbar > _______________________________________________ Acme mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/acme
