Hi Lars,
Thank you for your review. We will be tracking your comments at
https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/168 (the Discuss) and
https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/169 (all other comments).
Yaron
On 4/6/21, 15:41, "Lars Eggert via Datatracker" <[email protected]> wrote:
Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
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DISCUSS:
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Section 5.1, paragraph 4, discuss:
> This document requests that IANA create the following new registry
> under the Automated Certificate Management Environment (ACME)
> Protocol:
>
> * ACME Identifier Object Fields
>
> This registry is administered under a Specification Required policy
> [RFC8126].
RFC8126 strongly suggests that guidance needs to be given to expert
reviewers
that are supposed to review and approve requests for "Expert Review" and
"Specification Required" registries. This guidance is missing here. What's
also
missing are designated contact persons and a change controller.
Section 5.6, paragraph 2, discuss:
> 5.6. CSR Template Extensions
>
> IANA is requested to establish a registry "STAR Delegation CSR
> Template Extensions", with "Expert Review" as its registration
> procedure.
Same as above.
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COMMENT:
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Section 1, paragraph 8, comment:
> We note that other ongoing efforts address the problem of certificate
> delegation for TLS connections, specifically [I-D.ietf-tls-subcerts]
> and [I-D.mglt-lurk-tls13]. Compared to these other solutions, the
> current document does not introduce additional latency to the TLS
> connection, nor does it require changes to the TLS network stack of
> either the client or the server.
This paragraph should probably be removed upon publication as an RFC?
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All comments below are very minor change suggestions that you may choose to
incorporate in some way (or ignore), as you see fit. There is no need to
let me
know what you did with these suggestions.
Section 3.1, paragraph 10, nit:
- e.g. by restricting field lengths. In this regard, note that a
+ e.g., by restricting field lengths. In this regard, note that a
+ +
Section 4.1, paragraph 3, nit:
- This section uses specifically CDNI terminology, e.g. "uCDN" and
+ This section uses specifically CDNI terminology, e.g., "uCDN" and
+ +
Section 4.1.2.1, paragraph 5, nit:
- Unlike HTTP based redirection, where the original URL is supplanted
- ^
+ Unlike HTTP-based redirection, where the original URL is supplanted
+ ^
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