Russ and Martin,
Thank you very much for your detailed review! I feel much better that, once
your issues are replied-to, the document will be in very good shape.
We still have a month on WGLC, so an updated draft should be feasible by the
end of the month, *right authors?*
I do have one suggestion, if it's possible to split things into "strictly
editorial" and "bigger issue" that might help the authors. I know that's
probably a lot of work. Perhaps the doc authors can sync up with you guys
each, via phone, and walk through all the items?
/r$
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