Dear Roni,
Thank you for the comments.
Please see responses inline.
El 24/1/24 a las 10:04, Roni Even via Datatracker escribió:
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2024-01-24
IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with nits
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
The document defines a well known uri. Through out the document it keeps the
name well-known but it should be replaced with the specified coap-eap by the
authors or as a directive to the rfc editor.Could you please, clarify this a
bit?
The text well-known URI is in the following places.
Do you mean we should replace where there is a reference in the text
with "/.well-known/coap-eap" by coap-eap?
I have cross out in the list where I think it could be removed. I you
could confirm this it would be great.
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- Figures
- Section 3. CoAP-EAP Operation
"To access the authentication service, this document defines the
well-known URI "/.well-known/coap-eap" (to be assigned by IANA)"
- 3.1 Discovery
The CoAP-EAP application can be accessed through the well-known URI
"coap-eap" for the trigger message (Step 0).
-3.2 Flow of Operation
""POST /.well-known/coap-eap" request"
- 3.5.3. Duplicated message with /.well-known/coap-eap
The reception of the trigger message in Step 0 containing (I would add
-- "the URI") /.well-known/coap-eap needs some additional
considerations, as the resource is always available in the EAP
authenticator.
...
If an old "POST /.well-known/coap-eap" (Step 0)...
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As for the iana registration
request rfc8615 registration procedure is specification required and not expert
review.
Ok, we will update this in the text, thank you.
There is also a missing column “state” probably should be permanent.
Thank you, we will change this, following the clarification from the
well-known URI expert comment.
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