Dear Esko,
Thank you for your comments.
Please, see responses inline.
El 12/1/24 a las 10:55, Esko Dijk escribió:
Hello,
I believe the draft would need a few updates to clarify the new media type and
the precise request.
* application/coap-eap is registered but never used (i.e. referred to by name)
from any other section.
We will update the figures and text to show the usage of the media type.
* I couldn't find an explicit format/syntax definition for this new media type.
* Is it equal to the CBOR data format defined in Section 4? If so, then section
4 should mention at least the name of the new media type and section 8.5
ideally should give a quick pointer to section 4 for the format definition.
Yes, the format is the EAP packet, followed by the CoAP_Information
elements described in Section 4. We will update the text as suggested.
* the text in 8.6 should better refer to Section 12.3 of [RFC 7252] for the
registry; link to [RFC 6690] is not so useful here.
Thank you, we will follow these suggestions.
The text says "Expert Review" but that's only for the 0-255 range. For this
range some additional motivation is required why it needs to be there, and this is
missing.
For the 256-9999 range the procedure is "IETF review" -> did you mean to
select this range?
It would be ok to continue the registration with the current draft, if the
authors want to make text clarifications later on and not now.
A number in the 256-9999 is for sure ok (if that's intended), for example 260,
but for 0-255 range some reason/rationale needs to be provided.
The "256-9999" range is ok for us. We will change the text to “IETF review”.
Thank you.
Best regards.
Regards
Esko
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Subject: [IANA #1303039] expert review for draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap
(core-parameters, CoAP Content-Formats)
Dear Esko Dijk (cc: ace WG),
As the designated expert for the CoAP Content-Formats registry, can you review
the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-09 for us? Please see:
https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap/__;!!D9dNQwwGXtA!X-2HqHkXNgi4f08VyivJJDBTCBQ2LDf3_mHRSZywqNh3FLf6SkB5RRDROAs1sw1qJ-PEFH7NcEG_EJgsmzrCHjtHZGuy$
The due date is January 25.
If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll make
the registration at:
https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/__;!!D9dNQwwGXtA!X-2HqHkXNgi4f08VyivJJDBTCBQ2LDf3_mHRSZywqNh3FLf6SkB5RRDROAs1sw1qJ-PEFH7NcEG_EJgsmzrCHihUlDpD$
With thanks,
David Dong
IANA Services Sr. Specialist
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