Hello Zaheduzzaman,Thanks a lot for your review! Please find in line below our detailed replies to your comments.
A Github PR where we have addressed your comments is available at [PR].Unless any concern is raised, we plan to soon merge this PR (and the other ones related to other received reviews), and to submit the result as version -18 of the document.
Thanks, /Marco [PR] https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-key-groupcomm/pull/163 On 2023-11-28 13:16, Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker wrote:
Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.)Please refer tohttps://eur05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fabout%2Fgroups%2Fiesg%2Fstatements%2Fhandling-ballot-positions%2F&data=05%7C01%7Cmarco.tiloca%40ri.se%7Cc3e6e8ebc151415d194308dbf00be0b9%7C5a9809cf0bcb413a838a09ecc40cc9e8%7C0%7C0%7C638367706031472127%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=trIxgtiYUzPniCiQn89VP3lCMB7sWF%2FGe2XHpRVFca0%3D&reserved=0 for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://eur05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm%2F&data=05%7C01%7Cmarco.tiloca%40ri.se%7Cc3e6e8ebc151415d194308dbf00be0b9%7C5a9809cf0bcb413a838a09ecc40cc9e8%7C0%7C0%7C638367706031483439%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=b9PLgmBIUwEiK4l8Ayxl7mC9uWKsCFhYnZfQC5fqbp8%3D&reserved=0 ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for working on this document. Thanks Vidhi Goel for the TSVART review. However, I have noticed this review didn't get any responses from the authors or wg. Please respond.
==>MTPlease see our response at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/eMtIBg3ZyRvVuyjzaQ-g9MeTuek/
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I have hard time understanding the example used for individual keying material. what is this "member identifier" ? where is this defined?
==>MT We have clarified by rephrasing as follows. OLD> * Individual keying material: information exclusively pertaining to a group member, as associated with its group membership and related to other keying material and parameters used in the group. For example, this can be a member identifier that is unique within the group. The specific nature and format of individual keying material used in a group is defined in application profiles of this specification.
NEW (emphasis mine)> * Individual keying material: information exclusively pertaining to a group member, as associated with its group membership and related to other keying material and parameters used in the group. For example, this can be **an identifier that the secure communication protocol employs to uniquely identify a node as a group member (e.g., a cryptographic key identifier uniquely associated with the group member in question).** The specific nature and format of individual keying material used in a group is defined in application profiles of this specification.
As per the last sentence, further details are defined in the specific application profiles.
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