Hi Amanda, my apologies for the tardy response.
The registration of this if= type is fundamentally appropriate. However, there are some aspects of its description that could use improvement. * The description uses the term ‘ace group’ to stand for ace.group. That could be confusing, but probably will not lead to interoperability problems. * The description could be pointing to Section 4.1 (of course, a search will also find that section). * Section 4.1 defines a number of resources. Which of these is the one that the link marked if= should point to? One might think that it is the one named /ace-group as an example, and not the individual ones named /ace-group/GROUPNAME. However, the examples in draft-tiloca-core-oscore-discovery indicate otherwise. It would be preferable to make the answer to this question explicit in ace-key-groupcomm (an example for such a link in ace-key-groupcomm would also help). Deferring much of the actual definition of the if= type to draft-tiloca-core-oscore-discovery while already registering it here does not work very well for this specification reader. Grüße, Carsten [1]: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-tiloca-core-oscore-discovery-14.html On Nov 28, 2023, at 19:28, Amanda Baber via RT <drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org> wrote: > > Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss (cc: ace WG), > > This is a reminder that if we don't receive an approval from one of the > experts by tomorrow, we'll have to mark this document "IANA NOT OK" and > request a DISCUSS for Thursday's telechat. > > thanks, > > Amanda Baber > IANA Operations Manager > > On Mon Nov 27 23:52:56 2023, david.dong wrote: >> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss (cc: ace >> WG), >> >> Following up on this request; as the designated experts for the >> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values registry, can >> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm- >> 17 for us? >> >> This document is on the agenda for the upcoming November 30th IESG >> telechat. >> >> Please see: >> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/ >> >> The due date was November 9th. >> >> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, >> we'll make the registration at: >> >> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/ >> >> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on the >> first response we receive. >> >> With thanks, >> >> David Dong >> IANA Services Sr. Specialist >> >> On Tue Nov 21 17:55:47 2023, david.dong wrote: >>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss (cc: ace >>> WG), >>> >>> Following up on this request; as the designated experts for the >>> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values registry, >>> can >>> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm- >>> 17 for us? This document is on the agenda for the upcoming November >>> 30th IESG telechat. >>> >>> Please see: >>> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/ >>> >>> The due date was November 9th. >>> >>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, >>> we'll make the registration at: >>> >>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/ >>> >>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on the >>> first response we receive. >>> >>> With thanks, >>> >>> David Dong >>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist >>> >>> On Tue Nov 14 18:07:19 2023, david.dong wrote: >>>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss (cc: ace >>>> WG), >>>> >>>> Following up on this request; as the designated experts for the >>>> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values registry, >>>> can >>>> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-key- >>>> groupcomm- >>>> 17 for us? Please see: >>>> >>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/ >>>> >>>> The due date was November 9th. >>>> >>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, >>>> we'll make the registration at: >>>> >>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/ >>>> >>>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on the >>>> first response we receive. >>>> >>>> With thanks, >>>> >>>> David Dong >>>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist >>>> >>>> >>>> On Thu Nov 02 21:36:51 2023, david.dong wrote: >>>>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss (cc: >>>>> ace >>>>> WG), >>>>> >>>>> Following up on this request; as the designated experts for the >>>>> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values >>>>> registry, >>>>> can >>>>> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-key- >>>>> groupcomm- >>>>> 17 for us? Please see: >>>>> >>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/ >>>>> >>>>> The due date is November 9th. >>>>> >>>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for >>>>> publication, >>>>> we'll make the registration at: >>>>> >>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/ >>>>> >>>>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on >>>>> the >>>>> first response we receive. >>>>> >>>>> With thanks, >>>>> >>>>> David Dong >>>>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist >>>>> >>>>> On Thu Oct 26 16:03:57 2023, david.dong wrote: >>>>>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss (cc: >>>>>> ace >>>>>> WG), >>>>>> >>>>>> As the designated experts for the Interface Description (if=) >>>>>> Link >>>>>> Target Attribute Values registry, can you review the proposed >>>>>> registration in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17 for us? Please >>>>>> see: >>>>>> >>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/ >>>>>> >>>>>> The due date is November 9th. >>>>>> >>>>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for >>>>>> publication, >>>>>> we'll make the registration at: >>>>>> >>>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/ >>>>>> >>>>>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on >>>>>> the >>>>>> first response we receive. >>>>>> >>>>>> With thanks, >>>>>> >>>>>> David Dong >>>>>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist > _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list Ace@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
