Hi Zaheduzzaman, Thanks for your review and comments. The term server is used interchangeably for a CMP server. Since the document is in the context of CMP protocol, it's implied that the server is a CMP server. Let me review all the occurrences of "server" and see if it's required.
Thanks Mohit On Mon, May 8, 2023 at 12:01 PM Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.ietf.org_about_groups_iesg_statements_handling-2Dballot-2Dpositions_&d=DwICaQ&c=V9IgWpI5PvzTw83UyHGVSoW3Uc1MFWe5J8PTfkrzVSo&r=J7DgfMyeL26OZuy8d3qTy_h24Ff1NatxSKMgDUj2Kxg&m=9UREbssV2ClOHZZ4f2aqZnlCFYmNp4jNZGrUQ1pCi3Bj0ijE9ZdwK-KuMirr40MW&s=BbIXrD87etboryLw5_BWp-X5TEpYxD8F4kHH1s6vh5U&e= > > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dace-2Dcmpv2-2Dcoap-2Dtransport_&d=DwICaQ&c=V9IgWpI5PvzTw83UyHGVSoW3Uc1MFWe5J8PTfkrzVSo&r=J7DgfMyeL26OZuy8d3qTy_h24Ff1NatxSKMgDUj2Kxg&m=9UREbssV2ClOHZZ4f2aqZnlCFYmNp4jNZGrUQ1pCi3Bj0ijE9ZdwK-KuMirr40MW&s=TZW04viqsemBOBCFmDsJWJN0_emQGFsdED0fzzgmJ80&e= > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks for working on this specification. My review did not notice any > transport related issues. > > However, I have one observation- > > It seems the word "server" has been used in three ways - 1) CMP server, > 2) > server and 3) pre-configured/configured server. I would be great if 2) > and 3) > could be described better based on their role. Right now, this is a bit > confusing, for example, when only 2) used and it refers to a CMP server. > > > >
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