Hi Eric, Thanks for your review and comments. Please see my response to your comments below:
>## idnits issues > >https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap->transport-09.txt > ><https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09.txt> > founds two important issues: wrong BCP14 ><https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/bcp14/> template and unused reference. >>## Section 2.6 > >The URI in this section uses "<profileLabel>", is it the same as "<name>" in section 2.1 ? If so, may I suggest >to use the same term ? <M.S.> I will update the draft with this suggestion. ## Section 4 Is "MAY" the right verb to be used in `If confidentiality is desired, CoAP over DTLS [RFC9147 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc9147/>] MAY be used to provide confidentiality` ? I would have guessed a "SHOULD", or are there alternatives to CoAP over DTLS ? <M.S.> I will update the draft with this suggestion. Thanks Mohit On Mon, May 8, 2023 at 12:02 PM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.ietf.org_about_groups_iesg_statements_handling-2Dballot-2Dpositions_&d=DwIDaQ&c=V9IgWpI5PvzTw83UyHGVSoW3Uc1MFWe5J8PTfkrzVSo&r=J7DgfMyeL26OZuy8d3qTy_h24Ff1NatxSKMgDUj2Kxg&m=GGTCYRhzXsTOeQEgluxjlBo5DvmdRlrSeM5AEU6PVNlgq8yXVT96EGhZTqiqTDjL&s=0Cha-rhN73wDVJ4SySoqlgvzHaFDuDGE5VMS4-1EPhk&e= > > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dace-2Dcmpv2-2Dcoap-2Dtransport_&d=DwIDaQ&c=V9IgWpI5PvzTw83UyHGVSoW3Uc1MFWe5J8PTfkrzVSo&r=J7DgfMyeL26OZuy8d3qTy_h24Ff1NatxSKMgDUj2Kxg&m=GGTCYRhzXsTOeQEgluxjlBo5DvmdRlrSeM5AEU6PVNlgq8yXVT96EGhZTqiqTDjL&s=vVQhVM4c7HHnLXKllihqSiVjCuINaqLBgcFirPC_2HE&e= > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thank you for the work put into this document. > > Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be > appreciated even if only for my own education). > > Special thanks to Daniel Migault for the shepherd's detailed write-up > including > the WG consensus *and* the justification of the intended status. > > I hope that this review helps to improve the document, > > Regards, > > -éric > > # COMMENTS (non blocking) > > ## Reviews outside of ACE ? > > The shepherd's write-up and the mail archive do not mention any review by > CORE > WG of this document. I understand that CoAP is only a 'transport', but a > quick > review would have been beneficial. > > ## idnits issues > > > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__author-2Dtools.ietf.org_api_idnits-3Furl-3Dhttps-3A__www.ietf.org_archive_id_draft-2Dietf-2Dace-2Dcmpv2-2Dcoap-2Dtransport-2D09.txt&d=DwIDaQ&c=V9IgWpI5PvzTw83UyHGVSoW3Uc1MFWe5J8PTfkrzVSo&r=J7DgfMyeL26OZuy8d3qTy_h24Ff1NatxSKMgDUj2Kxg&m=GGTCYRhzXsTOeQEgluxjlBo5DvmdRlrSeM5AEU6PVNlgq8yXVT96EGhZTqiqTDjL&s=B6yDLd_rxm8Op5pnehh_gIIGFP7Zir7V-6Dx0ncsKdI&e= > founds two important issues: wrong BCP14 template and unused reference. > > ## Section 2.6 > > The URI in this section uses "<profileLabel>", is it the same as "<name>" > in > section 2.1 ? If so, may I suggest to use the same term ? > > ## Section 4 > > Is "MAY" the right verb to be used in `If confidentiality is desired, CoAP > over > DTLS [RFC9147] MAY be used to provide confidentiality` ? I would have > guessed a > "SHOULD", or are there alternatives to CoAP over DTLS ? > > > >
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