Mohit

Thank you for the update of the IANA Considerations section.

I spotted one additional minor issue in Section 2.6. To align the text with 
Section 2.1 of the draft and with CMP Updates I propose the following change:
OLD
       coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/ann
       coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/p/<profileLabel>/ann
NEW
       coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/ann
       coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/p/<name>/ann

Hendrik

> Von: Ace <ace-boun...@ietf.org> Im Auftrag von internet-dra...@ietf.org
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Authentication and
> Authorization for Constrained Environments (ACE) WG of the IETF.
> 
>    Title           : CoAP Transfer for the Certificate Management Protocol
>    Authors         : Mohit Sahni
>                      Saurabh Tripathi
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09.txt
>    Pages           : 11
>    Date            : 2023-04-14
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol
>    (CoAP) as a transfer mechanism for the Certificate Management
>    Protocol (CMP).  CMP defines the interaction between various PKI
>    entities for the purpose of certificate creation and management.
>    CoAP is an HTTP-like client-server protocol used by various
>    constrained devices in the IoT space.
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