Dear Murray Kucherawy Thanks for your valuable comments and sorry for the late response.
To resolve your comments, I updated the draft. Please, find inline responses. And, I submitted the revision draft based on your comments. https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-15.html It is appreciated to check again and let me know any missing points. Best regards. Yong-Geun. 2022년 12월 15일 (목) 오후 5:12, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org>님이 작성: > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > The GENART review was particularly well done. Please give it its due > attention. > > I concur with Alvaro on all of his points. I feel like at a bare minimum, > RFC > 8200 should be a normative reference here. > [Hong] Move RFC 8200 and other RFCs into Normative section > > Please expand "OFDM" on first use and/or provide a reference. I see Eric > found > a bunch of others; the authors might want to review all of your acronyms > for > proper resolution at or before first use. > [Hong] Add full name of OFDM
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